|| Of Rainy Evenings and Bleeding Souls - an OS|| - Page 3

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Omg.. I am in tears again!! You writing is so soulful.. the longing of the souls captured so beautifully.,

Her envy of her aunt and uncle's togetherness is so natural and without malice.

This ghazal by Fareeda Khanam is my all time favourite.. I never imagined it could be used so beautifully to portray the feelings of young hearts. But then Roohani love has no boundaries of age, time or distance.

Milli hain roohen toh rasmoo ki bandishen kya hain..

Originally posted by: mehraan

Made me cry Kshithi!Absolutely beautiful piece...!

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

So emotional dear... the pain of separation... the fear of not being able to see him once again... to just look into his eyes one last time... ohh separation from your beloved is so difficult and heart wrenching... you expressed it through your words so beautifully... I have no words to express how I'm feeling... it brought back some memories to me... which I can never part with😳

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Thanks a lot.😊

May I know your name?

What a beautiful line at the end...🤗

Love

Kshithi

Hi Kshithi, I am May 😊 I have been reading a lot of your posts and enjoy them a lot!

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Hi Kshithi, I am May 😊 I have been reading a lot of your posts and enjoy them a lot!

This is a very emotional heart touching story.😔

Originally posted by: smiley_lizi

This is a very emotional heart touching story.😔

Brought tears in eyes.😭

Too good write-up Kshithi.👏

Can I just give you a big hug and the reason for this is you have written the lines of my most fav ghazal: Aaj Jaane ki zid na karo ...chand ghadiya yahin hai jo aazaad hai ...wow...Rula ke Dil Le liya


Naina's pain and tears hiding in the monsoon droplets just made me emotional ...Pal bhar theher jao, dil yeh sambhal jaye...

It's like Naina just fell apart because of him leaving ...what if this is the last goodbye...

Beautiful OS...sorry couldn't read and comment earlier

Originally posted by: KashafZaroon30

Can I just give you a big hug and the reason for this is you have written the lines of my most fav ghazal: Aaj Jaane ki zid na karo ...chand ghadiya yahin hai jo aazaad hai ...wow...Rula ke Dil Le liya


Naina's pain and tears hiding in the monsoon droplets just made me emotional ...Pal bhar theher jao, dil yeh sambhal jaye...

It's like Naina just fell apart because of him leaving ...what if this is the last goodbye...

Beautiful OS...sorry couldn't read and comment earlier

Small yet so powerful.. beautifully written...👏