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Samaina_1990 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
I read it in two modes...asanskari n sanskari...beautiful portrayal of Sameer's emotions!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Meher!!!!
Your write up is a perfect foreplay...
I make a special mention of - intoxicated me that I felt alive...awake.
This one was brilliant poetry...have you ever been HIGH and felt more awake than normal? I have...so can relate.

I dedicate PB Shelly to your post:

I have drunken deep of joy,
And I will taste no other wine tonight.

The fountains mingle with the river,
And the rivers with the ocean;
The winds of heaven mix forever,
With a sweet emotion;
Nothing in the world is single;
All things by a law divine
In one another's being mingle:
Why not I with thine?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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He had been like desert without rain of her love.The longer he roams around her,the deeper the hole within his soul expands,growing bigger and bigger like a barren tree with cracked branches.He shall continue to feel so until he is nourished and quenched.

His soul has already left the prisons of his mortal being for new experiences.Every breath stirred deep,simmering desires incited torrid urges and sent blood coursing through the fevered veins.The spark of every fire he seek is already within him,within them.

The glances were inviting so were the soft pleasures of ripe lips demanding the flame be fanned and thirst be quenched.

Both attained bliss somewhere beyond the decimal points in the trysts.He now looked for an equality among the thirsts.The relentless waterfall...is what they needed.

Beautiful post Di 👏👏 The lines are so flaming and beautiful.The undertone of poetic words definitely have their enchanting spell.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

He had been like desert without rain of her love.The longer he roams around her,the deeper the hole within his soul expands,growing bigger and bigger like a barren tree with cracked branches.He shall continue to feel so until he is nourished and quenched.

His soul has already left the prisons of his mortal being for new experiences.Every breath stirred deep,simmering desires incited torrid urges and sent blood coursing through the fevered veins.The spark of every fire he seek is already within him,within them.

The glances were inviting so were the soft pleasures of ripe lips demanding the flame be fanned and thirst be quenched.

Both attained bliss somewhere beyond the decimal points in the trysts.He now looked for an equality among the thirsts.The relentless waterfall...is what they needed.

Beautiful post Di 👏👏 The lines are so flaming and beautiful.The undertone of poetic words definitely have their enchanting spell.



Beautiful Minu.

Whenever I read yours and Meher's posts, all I can think of is how much I can learn from you guys. The way you guys write is simply magical.

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Wow your words are magical just like the scene an They Both ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Mehr...tum script writer ban jaav.
..☺️..
Hum sab asanskaari log repeat mode pe dekhenge😆...

Kya romantic post yaar...😳☺️haila...miyanji paas mei honge😉😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully penned Meher... 👏

His entire being is attuned to her. With his every breath he wants her, pines for her... for that acceptance, for closeness, for proximity to body and soul, for that appreciation and admiration he can see for himself in her eyes, for that repeated confirmation that yes, she is his...

He desires her for SHE IS HIS DESIRE... ❤️

A quote by Rumi suits Sameer's frame of mind perfectly - "I once had a thousand desires, but in my desire to know you, all else melted away"


In her eyes, for the first time, he saw the real person he could be... and his love transcended every boundary to become the MAN he could be for HIS WOMAN...

She makes him want to stop whatever he is doing and get to know her even more... He wants to care, nurture, hold, protect and honor the beautiful woman who is exclusively his...

He knows he holds the right to make love to her... to be the true union for her soul and body... and that is why he exercises the right and enjoys the verbal love making and seeing his lady love flare up one moment and melt in his words the next moment...


The sexiest thing a man can do for a woman is to crawl inside her mind with his words and make her imagination run wild... and isn't that exactly what we are witnessing on screen?

Edited by moumita04 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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WOW Lovely write up...I am in love with your writing ... ❤️
Edited by WeRockTheWorld - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Title of post is so apt 👍🏼
If we could get in Sameer's head, these would be his exact words.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

He had been like desert without rain of her love.The longer he roams around her,the deeper the hole within his soul expands,growing bigger and bigger like a barren tree with cracked branches.He shall continue to feel so until he is nourished and quenched.

His soul has already left the prisons of his mortal being for new experiences.Every breath stirred deep,simmering desires incited torrid urges and sent blood coursing through the fevered veins.The spark of every fire he seek is already within him,within them.

The glances were inviting so were the soft pleasures of ripe lips demanding the flame be fanned and thirst be quenched.

Both attained bliss somewhere beyond the decimal points in the trysts.He now looked for an equality among the thirsts.The relentless waterfall...is what they needed.

Beautiful post Di 👏👏 The lines are so flaming and beautiful.The undertone of poetic words definitely have their enchanting spell.



Minu - I just want to hug you... 🤗 Kya amazing likhti ho...

Whenever I read your posts I feel as if I am reading some section of novel... Hats of to your knowledge of English literature.. 👏 I have read your recent post "The Blossoming FLowers" and it's so beautifully penned. Apologies for not posting any comment on that, haven't had the required time to do justice... but I promise I will write something because I cannot resist flowers or any conversation on them... haha... 😳

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