Behind The Scene (Ashdeep FF)

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Hey guys! So I've been a silent reader for some while now on this forum, but I felt that I should make my presence known. So I've been thinking of writing an Ashdeep/Samaina fan fiction for quite some time and thought that I should do it now.
Now before we wonder into this fan fiction, I think I should make this very clear:

DISCLAIMER: EVERY CHARACTER IN THIS STORY HAS NO RELEVANCE TO REALITY AND IS PURELY FICTIONAL.

I thought of making this clear since this would be a Ashdeep ff and I don't want people believing or taking this fictional work as something more😊

So I'll be posting the prologue in a bit, but here's the blurb.

Behind The Scenes:

Abhimanyu Randeep Rai was a boy that was driven mad due to revenge. His father had died in a car accident and he lost his mother to cancer. Bullied by everyone he ever knew, he grew determined to prove everyone wrong by becoming the best anyone has ever seen. So when he lands a role in a show called Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai, he knows that he must keep all distractions out of his way, that is, until he meet Aditi Ashi Singh, a girl who changes his ways and shows him the light...but sometimes, the darkness overcomes the light...

So, I've changed the first names, but have made their usual names are middle and last name. Of course, the middle name won't be used as often.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prologue -

His face was soaked in tears as the rough kicks bruised his petit body. Their laughter faded and their mockery increased.
Why wasn't anyone helping him, why weren't they reaching out and pulling him out of this torture?

"Please, he croaked, his throat dry, "let me go.

The laughter started again and greasy hands snatched him up by the collar. "That's what you get, you puny brat, for dreaming about something you're not capable of. Karthik, the only son of the orphanage's owner, spat at his face.

Abhimanyu felt his body collide hard with the ground, sand stinging his wet eyes. He laid there as Karthik continued on, "Look at him, he thinks he's gonna be a star! This pathetic piece of garbage, why do you think your parents left you, they didn't want someone like you! He laughed. Again.

Then the heavy footsteps descended away as did the crowd that surrounded him, but he laid there, unable to move. Rage filled his body as he pushed himself up, nobody was there, but he felt a strange wrath crawling through.

"I will show you all! He screamed, "I will become the greatest star this world has ever seen! You will regret this Karthik, you will regret this...
Edited by Swaryaforever01 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start dear.. it's 1st ff here I think with randeep n ashi.. waiting for part.. do pm mw
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyp

Nice start dear.. it's 1st ff here I think with randeep n ashi.. waiting for part.. do pm mw


Hey, thanks, I'll be updating the first chapter soon!😃
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Go for itšŸ‘šŸ¼
It's a nice story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Seems like an intense story...please update soon...will be waiting for next update
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It wud b gud dear if u jus change the name of the actors dear...!! Sme othr fictional name..to be on the safe side cos such ffs can b a problem ...
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Originally posted by: mehraan

It wud b gud dear if u jus change the name of the actors dear...!! Sme othr fictional name..to be on the safe side cos such ffs can b a problem ...


Hi, thanks for the advice, I'll change the names😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 1 -

"Abhimanyu! Abhi! The loud yelling of Daiji snapped the eighteen year old boy from his sweet slumber. Adjusting the bright sunlight as the image of an old lady, with streaks of white hair appeared ahead of him.


"I'll pay later. Abhimanyu mumbled, proceeding to head back to sleep.


"Abhimanyu! They called. His eyes snapped open again, and this time did he really see his landlady with a bright smile. That was unusual, considering she'd only appear when he needed to pay the rent, or to make him lovely food.


"No way! He exclaimed, leaping up to grab the phone, before realising they'd left a voicemail.


He pressed for it to play.


"Hello Mr Rai! So last week you auditioned for the role of Sameer in the upcoming show. Well, we're pleased to tell you that you've got the role! If it's possible, can we meet up today at 1 in the afternoon. We want to start shooting as soon as possible. Congratulations and see you soon. The beep of the end didn't satisfy the joy Abhimanyu felt in that moment.


"I've got the role Daiji! He bounced up, twirling the lady around.


"I'm so happy for you Abhi! You'll finally pay the rent, and you're due for three months! She laughed.


Abhimanyu sighed, "I'll pay with my first salary, promise Daiji.


"I know Abhi, now hurry up, you need to meet up in an hour, get dressed and this make I'll make breakfast, even though it's your turn today.


Abhimanyu hugged Daiji tightly, "Thank you, Daiji, you're the best.


Then she left to carry on with her tasks whilst Abhimanyu got ready. This was it. His first ever big leading role. The first step to his success.


He still remembers that promise his eight year old self made, after being brutally beaten by that bully Karthik. He had managed to escape from that horrifying orphanage at the age of thirteen, when he'd stumbled across Daiji, a widow who has lost her son in war. She'd taken him in, raising him up until he was sixteen and then making him earn his money.


She was the next best thing to a mother, a blessing Abhimanyu could never forget.


He quickly gobbled down his breakfast, much to Daiji's disapproval, but he was already late, and had only ten minutes to get to the studio.


"Goodbye Daiji! He touched her feet, before rushing out and getting on his secondhand motorbike.


It took only a couple of minutes, a few traffic signal breaking, and an angry officer to reach at the appointed spot. His heart thudded loud in his rib cage as he parked his vehicle and headed for the building.


When, as he reached for the handle, it swung open, and if he hadn't dodged he was to get a flat nose. But then his eyes met hers. Brown, chocolate brown crystals. Time slowed, they were both moving, feet in opposite directions, their faces inches away. The surrounding blurred out and he was still captivated by those eyes. Those eyes.


Then it ended as soon as it had begun. He glanced back, but she was already gone. Shrugging, he headed inside. Little did he know that this was only the beginning...


Edited by Swaryaforever01 - 7 years ago
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Loved the first part... Continue soonšŸ˜›

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