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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks a lot. 😊

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved It !! Loved It !! Loved It!!

Just wondering , what if Naina doesn't fall for his trick ...she avoids him and then how would he win over her...now he thinks Jealousy will win and probably she will open up...what if Naina's love for Sameer to have the best in life takes better of her and she decides to ignore...then do you think Sameer will be able to win her..??

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Loved It !! Loved It !! Loved It!!

Just wondering , what if Naina doesn't fall for his trick ...she avoids him and then how would he win over her...now he thinks Jealousy will win and probably she will open up...what if Naina's love for Sameer to have the best in life takes better of her and she decides to ignore...then do you think Sameer will be able to win her..??


Thank You...😃

Did you forget Shefali?? 😆

Don't you think Sameer and Shefali will drive the brother-sister due crazy??

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hahahah...tis is traumatizing for the gal...Her young heart..😭
Trust me it hurts!!...To get her walking n running towards him ...he is goin to unleash his DEVIL side...though im loving this but jaldi se punishment lao 😆 vich thy both are going to njoy...!Aisa kya karnewala hai uske saath😉!

All in all lovely update ..Muah❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries


Thank You...😃

Did you forget Shefali?? 😆

Don't you think Sameer and Shefali will drive the brother-sister due crazy??

Love
Kshithi

🤣 No I didnt but when it comes to Sameer's happiness I have seen Naina being way too adamant ...its like she blocks her mind from every one and everything...what breaks her is his love for her ...hence asked...ofcourse not questioning the plot...

You have this flowery way of writing that you entice your readers to such an extant that they are left yearning for more...thats what happened to me after reading this chapter...I wanted more to read...just was not enough...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh yeah Kshiti Darling..
Not your 100%.Chapter is not complete and there is a frustration inside you which is lurking and threatening ...something is amiss.Am I right?😉

Well Sameer seems to be very good in Chemistry.Instantly rubs well and rubs off well too.Quite a reactive metal as it seems.Needs protection from other highly oxidising elements.

Naina has turned into a complete bunsen burner.She doesn't want the test tube to break but would surely heat it to maximum.Pagal Ladki.🤔

And this Diya and Priya are perfect catalysts...Gear up the chemical reaction my girls.👍🏼
And Arjun is that Chemistry practical demonstrator who jumps in between and scolds the student without knowing which basic element/salt the student has chosen..I term them--Frustration ke maara.😆

Done with the chemical analysis of story waiting how the chemical lab would be full of fire and smoke when the test tube finally breaks.😉😳

Okay..Last but not the least..
You are very good in chemically reacting the words and readers' mind.👏👏

With love-
Minu.😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mehraan

Hahahah...tis is traumatizing for the gal...Her young heart..😭

Trust me it hurts!!...To get her walking n running towards him ...he is goin to unleash his DEVIL side...though im loving this but jaldi se punishment lao 😆 vich thy both are going to njoy...!Aisa kya karnewala hai uske saath😉!

All in all lovely update ..Muah❤️


Thank You Meher.. 🤗

I know it hurts for her...but foolish that she is, bought this on herself!!!

Punishment!! hmmm...now..what would that be??? 😆

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

🤣 No I didnt but when it comes to Sameer's happiness I have seen Naina being way too adamant ...its like she blocks her mind from every one and everything...what breaks her is his love for her ...hence asked...ofcourse not questioning the plot...

You have this flowery way of writing that you entice your readers to such an extant that they are left yearning for more...thats what happened to me after reading this chapter...I wanted more to read...just was not enough...😳


yes...Naina is stubborn and adamant. And Sameer is the right person to bring her out. 😃

And thanks a lot Ash..for your kind words...😳

Please wait for the punishment😆...

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Oh yeah Kshiti Darling..

Not your 100%.Chapter is not complete and there is a frustration inside you which is lurking and threatening ...something is amiss.Am I right?😉

Well Sameer seems to be very good in Chemistry.Instantly rubs well and rubs off well too.Quite a reactive metal as it seems.Needs protection from other highly oxidising elements.

Naina has turned into a complete bunsen burner.She doesn't want the test tube to break but would surely heat it to maximum.Pagal Ladki.🤔

And this Diya and Priya are perfect catalysts...Gear up the chemical reaction my girls.👍🏼
And Arjun is that Chemistry practical demonstrator who jumps in between and scolds the student without knowing which basic element/salt the student has chosen..I term them--Frustration ke maara.😆

Done with the chemical analysis of story waiting how the chemical lab would be full of fire and smoke when the test tube finally breaks.😉😳

Okay..Last but not the least..
You are very good in chemically reacting the words and readers' mind.👏👏

With love-
Minu.😳


Thanks Minu...🤗

Yes...something is still lurking in my mind...
What I had planned to write was thrown out of the window by my characters...they wrote this chapter themselves...😃 You know what I mean??

Sameer and Naina's love is very combustible!! You are right...

I too am waiting for the fireworks!!! 😉

Love
Kshithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries


Thanks Minu...🤗

Yes...something is still lurking in my mind...
What I had planned to write was thrown out of the window by my characters...they wrote this chapter themselves...😃 You know what I mean??

Sameer and Naina's love is very combustible!! You are right...

I too am waiting for the fireworks!!! 😉

Love
Kshithi

Next time control your characters and write out them..They seem to be very powerful and persuasive.😉😆

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