New FF: tum meri ho part 16 (pg 53) April 30 updated; no pms for this - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was so passionate for our cute babies! I toh enjoyed it completely.
Please do right more and share. 😊
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Beautiful OS
Sameer zid pe aa jaye to phir use rokna impossible h
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Very intense!! Do write more!! Sammer ka swag delha hai, Sammer ha Guit dekha hai and thru your OS Sameer ka romantic andaz bhi dekh lenge!!
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Thank you everyone :) glad you all liked it :)
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Nice os dear
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Originally posted by: eufara_naghm

Nice os dear

Thank you for the pm



thanks dear. 😃
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Plzzz...update the next part... eagarly waiting...just loved the 1st part..
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Beautiful OS 😳
well written
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Originally posted by: .Khamosh.

Beautiful OS 😳
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thank you
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Hey guys, I was going to only write that one OS. But because number of you wanted me to write another one. I am writing part 2 for the same. Silent members, please also leave your comments, feedback and likes.

Part 2

After her last encounter with Sameer on the school rooftop, Naina was trying to maintain a bit of distance from him. She knew what he felt, and she was afraid to face those feelings. The hurt she felt before from those feelings, she was scared to face it again. Though she knew he loved her, though he really poured his heart out that day on the rooftop, she wanted to still maintain her distance a little. She knew that he knew that she still had feelings for him. But she was not ready for sudden changes in his or her equation. She was afraid that if she accepts her feelings for him, he might do something crazy. She was afraid of his craziness. She was afraid of what he might do, if he learns her true feelings for him. Though he didn't kiss her on the rooftop as such that day, but the way he held her, the way he came so close to her, she was afraid of what could take place. Even if she loved him, she was not sure if she had the strength to handle him if he came so close to her like he did at the rooftop. She decided to maintain a little distance from him to prevent such future encounters, and did not accept his feeling for him or said I love you to him.

Meanwhile, Sameer knew that she loved him. But he wanted her to accept it. And he was not willing to let her go so easily. Every now and than Sameer did something flirtatious to let her know he was there.

Like one such instance was when she was standing with Swathi, Munna and Pandit in the corridor and talking away, Swathi and MUnna were standing together, and Pandit and Naina togethere, when suddenly Sameer came from behind Pandit and Naina, and just came between the two of them, and put his one arm around Pandit, and his other arm around Naina's shoulder. She did not know he was coming from behind, and his touch sent shivers down her spine. He just kept talking to all and conversing away, purposely holding on to her shoulder with his one arm, and holding on to Pandit with his other arm. she couldn't even react or say anything as all were around her. She just looked down just pretending to listening to them but, her heart was beating like crazy. And he was aware of his effect on her, and was giving her side glances while continuing his conversation with others. Thank god there was no one else around in the corridor as it was games period and all were on the grounds. Naina somehow found the courage to slide away from him and said: "Swathi chalo tumhe physics ka homework chahiye thana?, chalo abhi games period hai, toh tum lelo mujhse classroom mein jake likhlo". She grabbed Swathi's hand and went from there. Sameer kept looking at her. He knew her too well, but, he was enjoying all these moments with her. He loved how his presence even effected her. He smiled seeing her nervous leaving from there.

Another such incident happened in class, when Sameer was made to sit beside Naina by the teacher. For him it was not a punishment but a reward. Naina was looking at anywhere but at him. She was trying very hard to pay attention to what the teacher was saying. While Sameer had other things in mind. Naina's one hand was on the table in front of her, and her other hand was on the side on the seat between Sameer and her. He just saw that as an opportunity to tease her. While Naina was paying attention to class, Sameer was looking at her side ways and smirking. Slowly he brought his hand on top her of her hand. She was shocked at his touch on her hand. She tried to move her hand but, he grabbed it tightly. Because the class was going on, and all were present, she couldn't even move otherwise, others will notice what was happening. She kept on trying to free her hand from his hold, but he was too strong for her. There was so much twisiting and turning going on between the two hands. While naina looked at him in pleading way, Sameer just pretended to pay attention to the class and kept smirking. He was enjoying this fully, while Naina felt that if the class was not present, she was ready to run away as fast as she could away from him. Whole class he held on to her hand tightly, while she struggled to get out of his hold. He held it tight, he intertwined their fingers, he rubbed his thumb on her hand but, he didn't let go off her hand. Atleast not until the bell rang and it was time for them to go.

Naina ran as fast as she could from there grabbing her back pack, and just ran into the ladies washroom. She looked at her hand, looked at her face in the mirror, and just couldn't handle what he was doing to her.
Naina: yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe, kyon Sameer mujhe itna affect kar raha hai...She splashed water onto her face...she looked at her hands. she just blushed thinking about his hand on hers and the way he held it.
Naina (talking to herself): kyon kar rahe ho tum yeh sab sameer? please mat karo. mein kaise tumhe samjaun , please mat karo yes sab...kyon mere liye mushkeel bana rahe ho sab?

with determined face she said. Mujhe hi distance banake rakhna padega. mujhe hi akele rehna avoid karna padega taki usko woh baar baar aise mauke naa dhoond paye.

Sameer on the other hand was waiting for her in the classroom, and was getting restless.
Sameer: naina kahaan ho tum? aaj doha likhne bhi nahin aayi.

Naina didn't show up at all. She came after all the classmates entered the class avoiding Sameer's gaze. Sameer tried to grab her attention but all in vain. Naina went and sat beside Swathi, while Sameer just kept starring at her face. She kept on talking to Swathi while pretending not to get affected by his constant gaze on her. And he kept starring at her.

Munna and pandit noticed how Sameer was constantly starring at Naina.
Munna (putting his arm around sameer): are bhai kabhi hamari taraf bhi dekh liya karo.
Pandit: are bhai koi kahaan fursat hai humhe dekhne ki (and winked at munna)
Sameer just looked at them both and smiled cutely.

Sameer: accha kamino, tum dono idhar aao mein tum dono ko dekhta hoon

Sameer wraapping his hands around both of them said: idhar aao tum dono.

Both joined in, and they started talking about something to each other in such a way that no one else could hear. Naina gave a side glance at three of them while conversing with Swathi but, couldn't figure out what all 3 of them were doing.

Their conversation:
M&P: accha bhai, yeh toh bata kya hua chat pe?
Sameer: kooch nahin yaar
M&P: kooch nahin matlab?
Sameer: kooch nahin matlab kooch nahin
M&P: I love you bola ki nai?
Sameer: are yaar, meine toh bol diya par yeh Naina kooch bole tab naa.
M&P: toh abhi tak nahin bola usne?
Sameer: nahin bola, aur kabse mujhe avoid kiye jaa rahi hai...kooch samajh hi nahin aa raha kya karun mein?
M&P: toh usse jaake baat karna
Sameer: yaar kaise karun, jab bhi paas aata hoon, nikal leti hain. jab bhi kooch kehne ki koshish karta hoon, toh topic change kar deti hai. aur hamesha swathi aur saheliyon se ghiri rehti hai. Aaj socha tha, games period ke time pe baat karunga, toh madam aayi hi nahin.
M&P (wink at each other): accha toh yeh baat hai.
Sameer: haan yehi baat hai.
M&P: ab aage kya socha hai. Sameer looks towards Naina and than back at M&P.
Sameer: mera ek kaam karoge?
M&P: are dost ke liye toh jaan bhi hazir hai, tu bas bol...

and they whisper something to each other.


What happens next is to be continued hahahha :D


Please leave your comments, and silent members please participate too. thanks

Ridz






Edited by paagalbandar - 7 years ago

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