New FF: tum meri ho part 16 (pg 53) April 30 updated; no pms for this

swatisinh2

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Awesome dear

Please pm next time

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Phoenix

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Posted: 7 years ago

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I'm loving this dear. ❤️.. So samainalicious... U r amazing in writing these romantic scenes... Too good... Update soon... Pls pm me if possible. 😊

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reemashah1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Really enjoyed reading your ff

It's awesome

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paagalbandar

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Thank you everyone so much for liking my FF. Keep the comments coming :)

@angelic567: thanks dear, I love writing the scenes however, it would be nice if we get to see some. I saw the swing scene from previous update and they did incorporate the touching angel so I am happy about that. So glad. They also did the him blocking her from the back just like in my update trying to get her to admit. Yes they changed things around a bit, but glad I get to see what I wrote live :)

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

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I loved this picnic scene yaar...n even in the part before...the way Sameer ties the sari to Naina in her room...n niche he gets angry at the guys leering at his girl...well written...you have a gr8 imagination Ridz!!👏

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paagalbandar

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
I loved this picnic scene yaar...n even in the part before...the way Sameer ties the sari to Naina in her room...n niche he gets angry at the guys leering at his girl...well written...you have a gr8 imagination Ridz!!👏

Thank you thank you...I am a silly girl with silly imagination 😆 Agar meri imagination ko CVs use karenge na toh, fir toh sari ladkiyaan dead ho jayegi aur ladke bhi ahahahahhahah Sachi mereko hire karneko boldo unko hahahha, mein pura Sanskari+asanskari combo likh de dungi inko hahahhaa😆

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paagalbandar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: RabbitOnSkates_
Amazing.. continue soon!!!

Thank you dear 😆

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sanu-rose

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Posted: 7 years ago

#188

Nice update

Loved it

Waiting for the next part

Update soon

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paagalbandar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: sanu-rose
Nice update
Loved it
Waiting for the next part
Update soon

thank you 😃

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Kiran1018

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Simply beautiful!!! Loved loved loved the way Sameer consoled Naina. It was like he was consoling a sweet innocent baby. Honestly, I have no words to decribe much I enjoy reading your writing. I can't wait to read the next part. I would love to see some jungle romance. Please in one of the future parts write something on Sameer getting jealous. WOuld love to see a jealous Sameer. As passionate and romantic lover he is, I could only imagine how possessive and fierce he will be when we see his jealous side. Please update soon!!!!

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