New FF: tum meri ho part 16 (pg 53) April 30 updated; no pms for this

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paagalbandar

@paagalbandar

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: loveviren
Yrr maar dalogi kya...it was so passionate !! I always wanted to read something like this where Sameer will say " I'm not in my control "
You really portrayed Naina's shyness perfectly
Sameer ki baaton se toh mein blush jar rahi thi...bechari Naina ka kya hoga !!

I thing I would like to say ..you are well versed in penning down your thoughts
Ab toh wait nahi hoga ..
So be a good girl and update soon my dear

heheh Thank you Thank you. Mein nahin mardalungi, kyonki mein toh chuha bhi nahin maar sakti...usse bhi dar ke bhag jati hoon 😆 toh aap ko kaise mardalungi??? lol

jokes apart...thank you for liking the story, keep reading 😃

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paagalbandar

@paagalbandar

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed
Hawtt ☺️❤️ hayeee Kitni romantic update thi .. loved it .. keep writing and keep giving us treat like this
Waiting for further parts ❤️

Thank you Alisha😃 Glad you all liked it😃

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#203

So happy, finally ILU bol diya

The waterfall scene was so intense n passionate

Update soon

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surbharati

@surbharati

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Posted: 7 years ago

#204

Loved it...excellent update...we get here what we do not get in YUDKBH

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Anmol

@Anmol333

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#205

Do give your Story link in forum stories index...

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#206

Super se upar! It's coming along so well... Good balance of romantic and hot ;)

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Lakshmi

@lakku19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#207

Wow..

Awesome..

Romantic hot .. loved it.

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Sona../PJ

@Sona07

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#208

It was an amazing update 👍🏼

can't wait for the next part.. update soon

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Lovleen Pannu

@barunlove21

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#209

Absolutely love the way you write!! after a long day of studying its so exciting to see an update from you, in order to relieve some stress. I just loved it, keep writing, can't wait for the next update!!