SaIna TS: Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai. Part 4 page 14 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

All the very best for your exams


Thanks dear..šŸ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Note..

Hi guys..
Actually i dont know what to say i am not much active these days.
But didnt get likes and comments even on previous part..

I dont know
Maybe you guys didnt like the concept maybe..

So here i am giving another shot maybe u all will like this one .

Will wait for ur comments and likes
As it encourages to write

So here it goes

Enjoy and dont forget to like and comment..


And for the writers specially
I am srry if am not able to comment on ur stories
Aftr 26 dec i vl rply to each and every pm of urs
Hope u guys can pardon me till than


Luv
NIDAā¤ļø
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2

Naina woke up with another hope that today maybe she can win sameer's trust.
She looked at the clock near her side table and it strucked 5:30 am she quickly rushed out of bed to get ready as on every friday she visits temple before going to school.

She quickly got ready and went out of the house as swati would kill her if she got late. She ride towards the temple to find swati standing near the temple wearing a yellow coloured suit all red in anger


She quickly said sorry and both went inside

They were praying when she heard panditji telling to a girl that if she tied that red thread around the tree god will fulfill all your wishes and with that he gave that thread to the girl as naina and swati were standing near them pandit ji also give them the thread..


Swati: chal naina ye dhaga waha bandh dete hai
(Comeon lets tie that thread)

Naina just nodded and went near the tree and closed her eyes to wish for her and her family but all she could wish for sameer

Naina: bhagwanji sameer ki sari pareshani door krdo(oh god fulfill sameer wish)

She was wondering why she prayed for sameer but she could figure out why
She shrugged her thoughts and both went to their respective house to get ready for school


Soon both reached school but naina was thinking how to win sameer's trust..

As usual first period started and sir lochan told sameer to get out of the class..

Naina excused and told that chemistry sir has called her in lab and went out of the class although she lied but she had no option she wanted to talk to sameer..

She was looking around and found sameer at the top of chemistry lab smoking..


Naina was looking at him when sameer looked at her and their eyes got locked..
Arjun who was going for crickets practise found naina standing near the corridor

He shaked her and said

Arjun: naina tu yaha pe kia kr rahe hai(naina wat are you doing her)

Naina: vo bhaiya mai sir pritam ka wait kr rahe hun unhone ne bulaya tha..
(Waiting for sir pritam as he called me)

Arjun: acha theek hai mai jata hun wrna papa dantege agr practise k liye late hogaya tau

Naina just nodded and he went away.. while naina looked at the terrace to see sameer has already gone she was going back to hear a boom from chemistry lab
And whole lab was on fire..

Soon everyone gathered around to see what happened to find naina standing near

Soon fire was out while principal asked naina as she was discipline incharge and was the one who was standing near the lab

Principal: naina tumhe pata hai ye kese hua(do you know how it happened)

Principal was asking when peon came out and told it was a ciggerate due to which it had a blast

Naima closed her eyes as she knew sameer was the one behind it while principal once again asked

Principal: naina tumhe pata hai kia tumne kisi ko dekha ciggerrate peete hue(naina do you know who did it or have you seen someone smoking near)

Naina looked at sameer standing near the crowd and sameer came forward as he knew naina would tell the truth

Naina was wondering what to do but all she could remember was chachaji's word

"Agr tumhe kisi ka vishvaas jeetna hai tau use tum par bharosa hona chahiye"

Seeing sameer coming forward naina quickly told

Naina: nahi sir mjhe nhi pata(no sir i dont know)

Sameer looked towards naina while naina just blinked her eyes and assured him

Sameer stood there all shocked that after so long someone did something for him and instead of scolding him someone protected him after his nanu

Soom everyone was told to go to their classes and pack their bags to go home

Everyone was happy to have half day holiday.


Everyone was gone while naina was waiting for preeti to come when sameer came near her

She looked at him while sameer smiled for the very first time and said thankyou and passed her a chocolate which she took it in a jiffy and sameer went away..

Sameer went home and hugged his nanu who was pleasantly surprised to find sameer happy..


Nanaji asked: aj tu school se akr itna khush kyun hai
(Why are you so happy)

Sameer narated everything how he scolded naina still she helped him and told him that how mistakenly that ciggerate fell down of his hand and he was looking for it and it blasted and how he wanted to tell the truth but naina saved him..

Nanaji listened everything carefully and told sameer not to smoke as its not good and to say sorry to her which he nodded..

While other side naina was happy that finally sameer is opening up and now maybe she could help him

She thanked chachaji in the evening that his adviced worked while he blessed her to stay happy always.

Hope you all will like it .šŸ˜›







Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2 updated
Have a look and comment for sure..
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
It's luvly
But very short..but I understand your exams r on

Anyways all d best n update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice partsšŸ‘šŸ‘ Naina trying to take away all worries of him was way too good.Loved the temple scene.😃 OMG! Smoking.Naina is going to have a tough time in mending his ways.Great going.
Update soon and don't be disheartened.Readers will always find their way to stories;sooner or later.😊
Thanks for the PM.
Keep writing and Keep smiling.😊
With love-
Minu
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Nice update...it brought back the memories of the cigarette incident and i really loved the temple scene... even i have experienced thing thread tying in temples and mosque and its such a divine feeling which I cant express in words...thanks for the update nida😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Aah those cig moment
Nice Nida..keep it up
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

It's luvly

But very short..but I understand your exams r on

Anyways all d best n update soon


Thanks anjali..
Will try to update till friday..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Nice partsšŸ‘šŸ‘ Naina trying to take away all worries of him was way too good.Loved the temple scene.😃 OMG! Smoking.Naina is going to have a tough time in mending his ways.Great going.

Update soon and don't be disheartened.Readers will always find their way to stories;sooner or later.😊
Thanks for the PM.
Keep writing and Keep smiling.😊
With love-
Minu


Thanks minu
Ur comments are always heart warming..
Really..
N i am glad u luv it .šŸ˜›

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