SaIna TS: Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai. Part 4 page 14 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Nice update...it brought back the memories of the cigarette incident and i really loved the temple scene... even i have experienced thing thread tying in temples and mosque and its such a divine feeling which I cant express in words...thanks for the update nida😃


Thanks manisha
Em glad u luv it
Means alot..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ForYourEyesOnly

Aah those cig moment

Nice Nida..keep it up


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update dear
Liked it !!
Naina wants Sameer to share is pain and anguish with her. She was trying to mend his ways and wants to take way his worried. Loved Temple scene dear
Thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear

Liked it !!
Naina wants Sameer to share is pain and anguish with her. She was trying to mend his ways and wants to take way his worried. Loved Temple scene dear
Thanks for the pm !
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Thanks anu
Em glad u luv it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Note

Hey guys
I an back again to give another update of Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai..

I hope you all will like this
And its the 2nd last part


So hope you will like this part

Luv
NIDA❤️
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3

Sameer woke up and heard his mom calling him to wake up
He lazily woke up and went down to have breakfast to see his mom vishaka feeding his step brother already to go to school while he is still in his night suit and seeing him in night suit she shouted

Vishaka: sameer ye kia hai tum ab tk tyaar nhi hue school k liye aur tumhare chote bhai ko dekho tumse do saal chota hai phr bhi school k liye tyaar hogaya time pe..
(What is this sameer you are not ready yet look at your brother rohan he is all ready to go)

Sameer: mom please ab ap subah subah..
(Not in morning mom)

Vishaka: sameer ye kia tareeqa hua baat krne ka mai maa hun tumhare
(Sameer is this way to talk em your mother)

Sameer: maa maa shabd ka matlab bhi janti hai ap ap ne apne khud k bete ko chod kr shaadi kr li aur itna hi nhi mjhe chod dia.. akela krdia..(do you even know what a mother means you left your own son and got married you left me alone)


Sameer had tears in his eyes while vishaka was looking down as she knew she did wrong..

Rohan came to sameer but sameer pushed him away and went in his room and within few mintues he was out of the mansion.

Sameer who was going nanaji tried to stop him but he went away taking his bike...

Sameer was going to school was his bike stopped in a jerk.. he was already in anger and his bike stopped in the mid making him more angry he kicked his bike in frustration

He was looking her and there to find someone who could help him but he found no one.

He thought to call munshiji to bring a mechanic when he saw an old lady trying to come down but step was higher so she could not get down he thought to help her when naina who was going on her cycle stopped and helped that lady and in return that lady bless her.

Sameer who was angry his anger flew away seeing naina she was simple and so helpful.. and her smiling face and sparkling eyes when that old lady blessed her


Naina felt someone looking at her and she looked up to see sameer looking at her actually admiring her she smiled back while sameer looked away seeing her looking at him.. naina walked to him seeing him looking away

Sameer found her coming towards him he straightened himself and tried to focus on his bike

Naina: sameer kia hua tumhare bike kharab ho gaye kia
(What happened sameer your bike broke down)

Sameer: han vo actually(yeah actually)

Naina: yaha billu chacha ki dukan hai agli gali mai tum unhe apni bike de do aur shaam mai le lo
(here is billu chacha's shop you can repair your bike there and take it in evening..)

Sameer nodded and gave bike at the shop and started to walk to go to school

Naina called him sameer and he looked back and naina reached to him in few steps and started walking dragging her cycle

Sameer who was still standing there while naina looked back as she didnt found him beside her

Naina: chalo ab school nahi jana kia...
(Comeon you dont want to go to school)

Sameer ruffled his hair.. and followed her naina who was dragging her cycle with difficulty sameer found her that she is not able to drag her cycle he hold it and she left it for him

Both were walking silently.. not knowing what to talk when sameer looked at something and went near a bush and plucked a pink flower and gave it to her saying sorry...

Naina took it and smiled back while she forwarded her hand saying friends

Sameer shaked back and said friends
Soon both reached school and sameer parked her cycle

As they have reached earlyso they both walked to the class sameer was going back while naina hold his hand and nodded her head in no

Sameer looked at her and settled at next bench in the same row


Soon everyone started showing up and everyone was surprised ro see sameer siting on the first bench but couldnot say anything even sameer was feeling awkward but everyone had already seen him so now he cant go back..

Soon lochan sir showed up and to his surprise sameer was sitting at the first bench. So he could not say anthing..

Soon class was started and everyone was looking at him every now and then so sameer started to focus on studies..

And as per routine when lochan sir asked sameer a question. For the very first time sameer answered correctly as he was concentrating..

Lochan sir told him to sit down and naina smiled at him.. and he smiled back..

Naina was happy that atleast sameer is opening up and again concentrated on her studies


After the period naina looked at sameer to see him talking with munna and pandit so she went away to have her tiffin naina so wanted to talk to sameer but all day when ever naina wanted to talk with him munna and pandit were around him..

She disappointedly decided to go when she found a bar of chocolate was kept on her cycle with a thankyou note

She took the note and kept it safely in her dairy and went home..


Thats all for now..






Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
part 3 updated
Have a look
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
nice update


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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Very lovely update NidaAnother gem from u😳Loving the way u have portrayed SaIna ❤️Eagerly waiting for the next partUpdate soon😊

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