Samaina FF : HUM TUM Note on pg.64 feb 20,19 - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyp



Hehe sure dear.. ll update tmrw hopefully.. n yeah ll pm😊



Thank you!! will wait for ur update!!!
Hamara weekend sudher jayega!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
NOTE


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4956246
Hey guys.. I hv written a short story on samaina.. link is given above.. it's 16+ hope u all like it..
Edited by dreamyp - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Pt 14

In corridor

As planned preeti n pandit came in corridor to meet..
Pandit - munna dhyan rakhio..Koi aae to ishara kr dio..
Munna whispered in his ears - theek h pr sameer ke sath apne dil ki bat b bta dio..😉

munna stand in stairs to watch..

Preeti n pandit were hesitant to talk..She was confused why pandit called her there..
So she asked - ummm sb theek hai?
Pandit - haan.. (fumbled) haan sb badiya n gave nervous smile😊
Preeti - toh aise muje yahan kyu bulaya? She was lil suspicious now..
Pandit (getting straight on point) -muje tumse jruri bat krni thi.. sameer or naina ke bare me..
Preeti - sameer or naina ke bare me???
Pandit (serious face ) - haan

At library

Shanti mam came to listen their final speech..N praised them..
Mam - award to iss bar hmara hai pkka.. tum dono ne bhot acchi speech tyar ki hsi.. n smiled😊
Sameer n naina also gave smile to each other..
Mam - debate agale 1 ghante me shuru hogi.. to ab hme chlna chahiye.. sameer tumhare pas bike h na?
S - ji mam..
Mam - theek h tum bike se jao.. me or naina rikshaw se aate hai.. hum tumhe seedhe wahin milege..
Sameer nodded..Ok mam..

Sam n naina remembered yesterday bike ride..
N looked to each other.. they like each other company.. somewhere sam wants naina to come with him on bike n similarly naina too.. but both unable to understand own wish..
Mam - naina..
Naina is lost..
Mam - naina...
N(coming out from thoughts) - ji mam..
Mam - kahan khoi ho? Chalen?
She nodded..Ji.. n they went for debate competition..

At corridor

Pandit told to preeti everything..She was smiling.. seeing her smile he got confuse now..
Pan - tum muskara rh ho?😲
Preeti - jb tum dost hoke sameer ka dil padh skte ho to kya me apni behan ka dil nh padh sakti?😉😆
Pandit - mtlb tumhe sb pta hai?? He is shocked now..
Preeti - haan.. uski dil ne jo bat ab tk use nh btai muje bta di..

Pandit smiled😊 seeing the sisters love n understanding...

Pandit - toh ?😳
Preeti - toh ?😳

Munna came from behind - toh ab aage kya krna hai? N spoiled the moment hihi
Preeti - hme kuch krne ki jrurt nh hai..Unhe waqt do wo khud hi apne mann ki bat samajh jaege..
Pandit n munna agreed..

At ABC school

Sam had already reached there..He was standing by wall folding his hands waiting for naina n shanti mam.. girls who were passing from there were going gaga😆 over him.. u know sameer 's charm hihi

One girl from other school came to sameer.. she was pretty n looks modern..
Girl - hi mera naam preety hai.. Xavier school se..
Sameer Gave a smile n said hi..
She tried to make a conversation but sameer looks so uninterested..His eyes were fixed on door..
Preety - kiska wait kr rhe ho?
Sameer - naina ka... Mtlb meri partner or mam ka..
Preety - ohh..

Naina n shanti mam arrived.. naina saw preety n sameer talking.. she felt jealous the way preeti was talking with sam.. sameer kinda observed her angry face.. he excused himself n came to them..
Naina in anger😡 just make her eyes down n doing activities with her fingers..

Mam - sammer naina tum dono hall me jao..Me seedhe wahin milugi..
They nodded n shanti mam left from there..
Seeing naina's angry face sam said

Sam - wo khud aai thi mujse bat krne..Me to use janta b nh.. (he was kinda scared 😆)
(In mind - me kyu ise explanation de rha hu?😕)
Naina got relaxed now..But why she was jealous n why she is happy now.. she smiled n seeing her smile sam also got happy..😛

Naina - chalen ?
Sam - hmm chlo.. n they went to hall for debate competition..
Preety was also present there with her partner.. seeing sameer she came to him n gave a disapproving look to naina.. both noticed but didn't said anything..
Preety - to ye tumhari partner? (In a tone like ye kahan or tum kahan🥱)
Naina felt bad..

Sam - nahi.. me iska partner hu.. or iska nam naina hai.. topper of our school.. n gave a proud look to naina.. she smiled...😊
Preety felt dejected.. n left from there

Naina - thanx..
Sam - kisliye? Koi b tumhare bare me galat bolega to me sunuga thodi...
Naina - kyu? Tumhe bura lga?
Sam - haan bura lga..
Naina - kyu??
Sam - kyunki..

Naina was waiting for answer but announcement made that competition is about to start so take your seats..
She felt sad.. sam noticed her sadness but didn't said anything..They took their seats n comptetion starts..

Competition went well.. everyone applauded for sameer n naina.. they won👏.. shanti man n samaina were happy.. they received the trophy.. only one person was burning in anger.. preety..😡


P.S. husshhh .. I wanted a sweet with no negativity story but kya kre villain b jruri hai😉 tbi to aaega kahani me twist😆
Do like n comment plzz.. n motivate me for writing .. thnkeww😊
N I had written a short story .. jinhone nh padhi go n read.. here is the link.. only for 16+ people

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4956246
Edited by dreamyp - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woo...nice one I as it is love naina being jealous!!!the way Sam gave an explanation understanding naina anger.. yr hamari heroine Kuch kaha Na kahe hamara hero samj hi Jata hai!!Preeti n pandit k bhi Kya baat hai..they understood n decided to flow with time...with maturity...which generally our Preeti has!!!

Nice one...u shd write more...n if posb a bit bigger one...itne se dil nahi bharta 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Preedit ❤️
Samaina ❤️
Loved the update, please update soon
Chotu sa update se dill manta hi nahi 😭👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Update...

Want Naina and Sameer Win the Competition...

Or we want the Bike Ride after the Competition...

Waiting for u r next update...

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Posted: 7 years ago
again nice one...marina was J .hehehe.loved it..
now predict story will start grt ..
btw is this villain gonna stay for some more parts. ??
anyway plz give us lil more long update. dil aur mangthi hai
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow
. Loved the update
Loved jealous Naina..
Pandit preeti conversation was awesome.
Please update the next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Excellent Update...waiting for the next part...hopefully Bike ride back to School...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niakhush

Woo...nice one I as it is love naina being jealous!!!the way Sam gave an explanation understanding naina anger.. yr hamari heroine Kuch kaha Na kahe hamara hero samj hi Jata hai!!Preeti n pandit k bhi Kya baat hai..they understood n decided to flow with time...with maturity...which generally our Preeti has!!!

Nice one...u shd write more...n if posb a bit bigger one...itne se dil nahi bharta 😉



Hehe I know me long update nh de pa rh but kya kru time hi nh milta.. ye part b rat ko 12 ke around likha.. plzz bear with me.. n Thankewww dear😊

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