SaIna FF: Aakhir ho gaya na..; Last part on Pg 44 - Page 30

Originally posted by: bawaswift

me first...

He was on the right path and she was able to see that his efforts are making him a better person who cared for everyone's emotions and feelings. She was herself waiting for that day and that wasn't far now...she could feel this at heart.

Loved the update... n enjoyed every line of it Manisha.. good job dear.. ⭐️👏

Thanks a lot Bhaiya😃🤗

The change in Sameer was evident and she too was waiting for the day when they both would be together😊

I really felt a kindness in this OS towards Sameer at least.. 😳 I feel show is not giving him good time to rest n get relieved.. but yeah you have made him more joyous.. as he has the support of his real friends.. n his one friend who is not away from him.. but is not even close to him.. ! Loved your take on the development of his character.. !!!⭐️

The show is actually making things really difficult for him and I feel that all this is meant to show his growth as a person...to prepare him for the worse that was waiting for him😳

Liked the way the phone convo went n he got the inspiration to his guitar competition.. he felt n made the song.. n completed it as an ode to his beloved.. so cute n cordial.. !

The way he helped his Munna.. n then his name was announced n his only soul helped him getting sum time n it helped him having the space at the stage.. But what is noticed is the mind n soul of Naina.. who kept composed.. did not panic n felt for a time he needs ,, wherever he be.. ! What a lovely n strong will that worked.. !

The song.. it can be many.. but only few can handle the situation Sameer dealt with.. !

Yeah his friends are very important for him and winning the guitar competition too was very important...who knew it better than her...so she tried her best to gain some time for him and thankfully he didn't let her down...he never would do that😃

The little but a beautiful convo they had.. the eye lock n its feeling.. the hearts that are one but need to be said.. ! The souls who know each other.. but needs good time spent.. n waited for that time,, n still waiting..❤️

This is a beautiful version of Un dino ki baat hai,, jab dil se dil mil jaate the aur pyaar ka bandhan banta tha.. jab emotions sache hote the aur pyaar mein marna hi jeena hota tha..

Epic.. ⭐️👏

Thanks so much sis.. keep the flow going..

God bless you. . !

Thanks a lot Bhaiya for your lovely comment and the last lines about the show...just loved them...thanks a tonne😃🤗

Bless you too 🤗

Originally posted by: Anjali33

So sweet update

I loved that he saw Nanu first.. otherwise almost always d guys see d girls only..which I find wierd😕

I'm so happy for our Chenu

Last part..tum bhi story khatam kr rhi ho😒

But anyways update soon

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Manisha!

The update really surprised me at first and by the time I completed reading it I had such a big smile.The words painted the accurate picture and it all looked as if happening for real.Was terrified at first that Sameer would miss the competition but was so happy to see Naina asking chances for him and that clearly showed the lost trust back in their relationship.She trusted that he would have been in some deep waters and her belief in him made him truly victorious.The trophy was just another feather in his cap but she is his actual triumph,his prized possession.

Felt bad for Munna.Could never imagine him being sad and broken.But all that happens happens for a reason.Swati pacified and confessed.So all that starts bad doesn't mean continues to remain bad.

The best part which personally touched me was the ''musing'' part.Yes! The people close to heart can only come when you close your eyes.He found his musing and it had to be her.His ''Pari''.While reading the song'' Agar tum Saath Ho'' was going in my mind in loop.😳

All in all loved the update.👏👏

Thanks for the PM and update the next part soon.😳

Take care.❤️

With love-

Minu😳