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Shinynew

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Its cute start dear...please continue...would love to be a part of your first writing...God bless you😊

Thank you so much Manisha Di ! It's so good to hear from you . Thank you for this beautiful comment ❤️ I am glad you like it . I will surely update soon.

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Shinynew

@Shinynew

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Hi! Shiny.To aaj tum writer aur Mein masoom reader. 😃 Beautiful attempt at first time.I would just suggest you one thing (hope you don't mind)- Just divide the convos into separate sentences.This way readers can know who says which sentence. 😊 The piece was as cute as our Naina. Write your heart out because stories from heart can only connect to heart. All the best dear. With love- Minu 😳

Thank you Minu Di!!😊 It's feels so good when you get appreciated for your thoda ajeeb first attempt.😳. I will surely work on your suggestion. This is my very first writing ever and also I use my phone for this so just a little confused soul 😆. But you will see the improved version in the next update for sure . Thanks again .

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Shinynew

@Shinynew

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: chandu80

Lovely OS ...keep writing. It is wonderf to read about our Samaina on weekends. Wow I am eager to know more about the lovestruck Sameer

Thank you so much chandu ( sorry I don't know your name). Weekends ki chhodo , they are never ready to leave my mind 😆😆. I am happy that you liked it . Yeah abhi toh more lovestruck Sameer is about to come. Will update soon.

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Shinynew

@Shinynew

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: mehraan
Well done Dear...First shot n wat a great start!..pls update soon ...Happy to know Sam has started to feel the love...

Thank you so much Mehraan di ! I wasn't really expecting this appreciation at all. This is my very first attempt ever. Thank you for liking and appreciating it ❤️