Sameer Naina Three Shot - SORRY

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello peeps !! What's up? Well weekend is here and SAMAINA are not ready to leave my mind. So I have decided to pen down something which I had written 3-4 days ago but was a little shy to post it. This is my take at what will happen now. Sorry if you find it a bit clich . So let's get started .
He loved her. Sameer Maheshwari loved her. He has hopelessly, madly fallen in love with her. Naina. His world. One smile from her brightens up his day. The way she favoured her old friendship, the way she helped his Nanu, the way she had punishment for doing so. The way she fearlessly stood for him when the topic of paper stealing came out and revealed the truth. The way she consoled him even after getting an earful from her father. The way she made him the sweater to making him listen songs, sameer didn't knew when she crept up in his heart. She had not said I LOVE YOU till now but sameer knew he has lost his heart to Naina. "I love you Naina! I love you! He said. "Are Sameer ye kya badbada raha haI? Soja chup chap!" Munna said from his seat. They were returning from their trip to Mount Abu but sleep was far away from him. He wanted to see her, but sadly she was in other compartment. Dejected he closed his eyes in hope to see her next day.
Mount Abu was a beautiful place. It gave students some relief from their hectic schedule. They were on their way to school and Sameer was restless. And it seemed if hus prayers were hears. Naina came towards him and wished him Good Morning. Sameer lost in admiring the beauty in front of him didn't heard anything. Naina was as usual blabbring herself when she saw his lost self. The waving hand in front of him broke his chain of thoughts. "Sameer tum mujhse gussa ho kya ?" Naina asked confused. "Nahin Nahin, vo me toh bas aise hi . He smiled. "Good Morning " he said. He was about to say more but reacher called them for attendence. Munna and Pandit who were observing Sameer's suddenly changed reactions were curious. Pandit asked " Yr Sameer trip toh khatam ho gyi par us behen ji se tu I Love You nhi bulwa paya. Ab toh tere baal gye." Sameer who was smiling told them. "Yr mjhe toh lag rha hai ab mein hi gya !" He told Munna and Pandit how he fell more and more towards Naina with her simple antics. Munna and Pandit who were initially shocked, started teasing him. " Toh ab se Naina behen ji nahi humari bhabhiji hai". Sameer blushed.
"Par bhai ab shart ka kya hoga?" Munna asked. "Nhi yr shart vart ab bhaadh me jaye. Me Naina ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu. Yahan tak ki apne baal bhi katwa sakta hu " said a determined Sameer . " Tum log meri help karoge na ?" "Sameer tu chinta mat kar, hum un shart wale ladko se baat karenge. Hum kuch bhi karke unhe mana lenge." Munna and Pandit reassured him. Sameer was relieved. How lucky he was yo get these people in his life.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So guys this is it for today . Do let let me know how it was as it was my first attempt in writing . Also please ignore the typos and grammer. Please tell me whether I should continue or not .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its cute start dear...please continue...would love to be a part of your first writing...God bless you😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi! Shiny.To aaj tum writer aur Mein masoom reader. 😃 Beautiful attempt at first time.I would just suggest you one thing (hope you don't mind)- Just divide the convos into separate sentences.This way readers can know who says which sentence. 😊 The piece was as cute as our Naina. Write your heart out because stories from heart can only connect to heart. All the best dear. With love- Minu 😳
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Originally posted by: Shinynew

Hello peeps !! What's up? Well weekend is here and SAMAINA are not ready to leave my mind. So I have decided to pen down something which I had written 3-4 days ago but was a little shy to post it. This is my take at what will happen now. Sorry if you find it a bit clich . So let's get started .

He loved her. Sameer Maheshwari loved her. He has hopelessly, madly fallen in love with her. Naina. His world. One smile from her brightens up his day. The way she favoured her old friendship, the way she helped his Nanu, the way she had punishment for doing so. The way she fearlessly stood for him when the topic of paper stealing came out and revealed the truth. The way she consoled him even after getting an earful from her father. The way she made him the sweater to making him listen songs, sameer didn't knew when she crept up in his heart. She had not said I LOVE YOU till now but sameer knew he has lost his heart to Naina. "I love you Naina! I love you! He said. "Are Sameer ye kya badbada raha haI? Soja chup chap!" Munna said from his seat. They were returning from their trip to Mount Abu but sleep was far away from him. He wanted to see her, but sadly she was in other compartment. Dejected he closed his eyes in hope to see her next day.
Mount Abu was a beautiful place. It gave students some relief from their hectic schedule. They were on their way to school and Sameer was restless. And it seemed if hus prayers were hears. Naina came towards him and wished him Good Morning. Sameer lost in admiring the beauty in front of him didn't heard anything. Naina was as usual blabbring herself when she saw his lost self. The waving hand in front of him broke his chain of thoughts. "Sameer tum mujhse gussa ho kya ?" Naina asked confused. "Nahin Nahin, vo me toh bas aise hi . He smiled. "Good Morning " he said. He was about to say more but reacher called them for attendence. Munna and Pandit who were observing Sameer's suddenly changed reactions were curious. Pandit asked " Yr Sameer trip toh khatam ho gyi par us behen ji se tu I Love You nhi bulwa paya. Ab toh tere baal gye." Sameer who was smiling told them. "Yr mjhe toh lag rha hai ab mein hi gya !" He told Munna and Pandit how he fell more and more towards Naina with her simple antics. Munna and Pandit who were initially shocked, started teasing him. " Toh ab se Naina behen ji nahi humari bhabhiji hai". Sameer blushed.
"Par bhai ab shart ka kya hoga?" Munna asked. "Nhi yr shart vart ab bhaadh me jaye. Me Naina ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu. Yahan tak ki apne baal bhi katwa sakta hu " said a determined Sameer . " Tum log meri help karoge na ?" "Sameer tu chinta mat kar, hum un shart wale ladko se baat karenge. Hum kuch bhi karke unhe mana lenge." Munna and Pandit reassured him. Sameer was relieved. How lucky he was yo get these people in his life.
To be continued

Lovely OS ...keep writing. It is wonderf to read about our Samaina on weekends. Wow I am eager to know more about the lovestruck Sameer
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Well done Dear...First shot n wat a great start!..pls update soon ...Happy to know Sam has started to feel the love...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome... Plz continue 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dats so cute😳
Sameer luvs her

Update soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow! nice...finally at least in this story he realized ...please update soon ...eagerly waiting...
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Awesome start
Loved the first part
please update the next part soon

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