SamAina FF:- A Broken Future of Togetherness? (NOTE Page 34)

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Priya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

M waiting eagerly for your update plzz updates

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vandana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#152

Muskaan...Read the full of in one go...

Beautifully written...

I'm anxious to know how the story proceeds further...

Please update kar do

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Too good Muskan😃👏
Rohit seems to be a fast forward character...and Naina who is recovering from an emotional crisis...how can she accept his love proposal like this😳
But one person who is following her every moment is Sameer...who is trying to get her forgiveness but here he is seeing his love like this...im sure his heart would be shattered and he needs a lot of courage to come out of this😳

Amazing update Muskan and thanks for the pm😃

Thank you so much braveheartdoc (I'm sorry I don't know your name 😕)

Rohit indeed is... ab Naina pe kiska dil na aaye...but he doesn't seem to respect Naina's moral values like Sameer, which starts to worry her. Naina, on the other hand, isn't ready for any sort of commitment as she hasn't been able to get over this emotional pain and betrayal caused by Sameer. Though she says she hates Sameer, you can't ignore that fact that she also said that you fall in love only once.

Let's see whether Rohit's entry into Naina life marks a turning point for Sameer and whether he finally realizes his love for Naina or not...😉

Thank you so much once again!

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Radkam
Awesome update but itni jaldi khatm ho gaya 😔 I can already c a jealous Sameer... jaldi de do! But I dnt want Rohit up scare her...kchhuea mat hine dena plz!!! & dnt keep us hanging! Jaldi update karo!

Thank you so much!

Will update by today! 😃

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Ek nahi 100 likes bante hain! This Naina mirrored me. You can't fall in love twice. I sincerely believe that! Either the previous one was an infatuation or this one is. I loved everything about this update. Rohit was perfect, yet he was not Sameer. And Sameer wasn't perfect- yet he'd never touched her without her permission. That line said a million things to me. And then, the way her hands grazed Rohit's, no butterflies erupted. I was reminded of their study sessions in the show, when Naina and Sameer's hands touch accidentally and then Naina starts trembling. And then the way his feet accidentally touches hers when he's trying to steal her shoes- the first touch by a boy! So Mr. Maheshwari is getting jealous. Though my sympathy is with him, I would say he deserves to bear some pain that he inflicted upon her. Yes, Naina is actually the one he truly fell in love with. But you have to win back your love! Just clenching your fists won't help. I so wish that Sameer was present there to save Naina from that Rohit. He seems to be an obsessive lover and he scares me. Thankfully no specs here- otherwise I would have imagined Tibrewal's face there! Haha!
But Muskan! This was too short- it left me craving for more. The flashback was adorable. Chemistry ke chakkar mein khud ki chemistry set ho rahi thi dono ki!
I hope we get more frequent updates now hehe! I'm eager for the next!
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Sur

Thank you so much Sur Di! Great minds think alike, after all. 😉😆

I'm glad to hear you liked the update. We tend to always crave for perfection but end up falling for the imperfect things in life. Everyone has flaws in them and sometimes you just fall in love with their flaws. Sameer, despite his cocky self, never ventured into a territory banned by Naina, never made her feel uncomfortable around him, even if it were for other reasons. However Rohit, though modern with his 'friendly' advances, wasn't modern with his thoughts. She had flinched once already, clearly told him she didn't like his touch, not yet. But he wasn't one to relent.

Ab toh baat sach ho gayi hai ki great minds think alike. Because the same scenes had been playing in my mind while writing that section. Naina realizes, but she isn't ready to admit. She's scared to accept the fact that Sameer and only Sameer is able to erupt butterflies within her. She's scared to accept the effect he has on her. She fears that Sameer will be one chapter of her life she'll never be able to forget, no matter what.

Sameer on the other hand is clueless on this sudden wave of jealousy within him. He still hasn't been able to see his love for Naina toh confession toh dur ki baat! 😛 That, I consider one of the drawbacks in writing in first person narration. Although you relate to the characters better, yet you can't be omnipresent and express everyone's feelings simultaneously. So I guess, you'll have to wait for the next chapter to know more about Sameer's feelings.

Tibrewal!! That just reminded me of UE all over again! For some reason I've been imagining Rohan here...😛

As they say, 'Good things come in small packages'. When it comes to SamAina, even the lengthiest update seems short...I'll try my best to update today, Di. 😃

Not too sure about frequency of updates, but know for sure that I ain't leaving writing anytime soon 😃

Thank you so much once again, Sur Di. Your comments make my day! 🤗

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Purv_01
Finally a jealous Sameer...
Would love to read what happened next.

Thank you so much! 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani
Nice update

Thank you so much!

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Please update soon na Muski😔

I will...pakka! Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai Aarti Di!

Jaldi karungi. 😃

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Mayashika
When will you update Muskan

I guess I'll answer this question with the update itself 😉😃

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: -vandy-
Muskaan...Read the full of in one go...
Beautifully written...
I'm anxious to know how the story proceeds further...
Please update kar do

Thank you so much Vandy!

I'm really pleased to hear you liked it! 😃

Will update very soon! 😃

Muskan