Read all the eight chapters together and it was all perfect..Naina's anguish and Sameer's changing character shade as he felt the guilt creeping inside him. Love your twist..how Naina knew it all along and she had a hope of him changing.
One thing I have noticed in your works is the flashbacks and I simply love it especially in this story, it was needed. The story started where their relation ended and also a betrayal so to completely connect with it and feel it as our own, we needed glimpses from the past.
I am sorry dear I am unable to reply to all the chapters one by one but I promise you will get my review on all the upcoming chapters as this story as kept me hooked.
The flashback of Sameer asking whether Naina had male friends in the past showed how his mind has started to drift away from bet and a sense of ownership came into his mind.
The end, the cliffhanger. I personally love cliffhangers as it makes the wait worth it. So, can we expect a possessive and a jealous Sammy? A new angle would be quite interesting..
The end conversation between Sameer and Munna on this news was impactful, I don't know why but I could visualise Munna saying it as he's more emotional in the show too.
I just can't wait for the next! When will you update?
