SamAina FF:- A Broken Future of Togetherness? (NOTE Page 34)

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: 9211
Loved it! Update soon okay?!
Keep writing ❤️

Thank you so much!

I'll try my best to update soon next time 😆

Muskan

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

Hey dear Muskaan...I'm really happy that I could motivate you to write on this story further...n I feel you are way better than I am at expressing your thoughts through writing...😊😳 honest opinion! 😊

The reason I loved this story is because of the simplicity it conveys...it's quite similar to watching the show itself...another good thing about it...is it's well paced...n I really like how you shuffle between past n present here...I'm kind of trying that n realized it can be difficult at times...to maintain a coherence in the story...

Another thing I loved about this story is that Naina knew of the bet since his birthday...the precap made us assume she'd heard it...Sam n Mundit too feared she'd heard them...but you took up that point n built a story around it...thank you for that...the way you showed Naina's emotions here...the way she looks at herself now...the changes she sees n feels are portrayed fabulously! Naina knew of the bet...yet chose to give chance upon chance to Sameer...in the hope that one day he too would love her back ...I know many argue that she lost her self-respect here...but then, when someone is in love, there is no right or wrong...nothing else matters except the will to be with that special someone...n Sam inherently wasn't a bad guy...just an arrogant teenager who was trying to hide a helpless child, devoid of love on the inside...n his actions somewhere were also the results of the misdeeds of Naina, Arjun n their father...though playing with a girl's feelings isn't the correct thing to do...I want to see how Sameer realizes his love for her here n wins her back!

Hope to see regular updates from now! 😳

PS: I intend to read the past story as well...I remember it faintly...set during the Abu trip...but need some time for that!

Love

Sur

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Still so much pain and hurt evident between the two.
Seems its going to be a long journey before Sameer atones for his mistake and has Naina's forgiveness
Thank you for the pm.

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Muskaan!! Do you even know how long I've waited for this very update!?

Jaan mein jaan aa gyi seeing your update😃

No matter how much Naina tries to hate Sameer, she just cannot do that.. Coz stubborn heart never listens to anyone!!

She had been bearing all the pain n heartbreak ever since that day.. The most special day for her which turned out d most heartbreaking one💔

BTW, are you a marwari?? I've seen your story in Wattpad too n your username was Muskaan Surana.. So I was just curious to know as I'm also a marwari😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Reserved! :)

Yayayayaya!

Can't wait! 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Still so much pain and hurt evident between the two.
Seems its going to be a long journey before Sameer atones for his mistake and has Naina's forgiveness
Thank you for the pm.

Thank you so much! 😃

It will take some time...Naina's forgiveness will surely come

Thank you for commenting 😃

Muskan

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Prizi
amazing update

Thank you so much! 😃

Muskan

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Thanks a lot for this amazing update Muskan👏

The birthday party was the day when Naina started listening to her heart above everything else...and when she came to know of the bet...she cursed the day when she lied to her family😳

Amazing update and waiting for the next one very eagerly😃

Please do update soon😊

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Muskaan!! Do you even know how long I've waited for this very update!?
So sorry to keep you waiting...! Which reminds me, when are you updating 'Roommates'? Can't wait for that! I love it! 😃

Jaan mein jaan aa gyi seeing your update😃
Thank you so much! I myself felt so happy when I pressed the button 'Post Reply' 😆

No matter how much Naina tries to hate Sameer, she just cannot do that.. Coz stubborn heart never listens to anyone!!
That's what love does to a person😉

She had been bearing all the pain n heartbreak ever since that day.. The most special day for her which turned out d most heartbreaking one💔
Yes...however, the question remains unanswered, "Why did she let that happen?"

BTW, are you a marwari?? I've seen your story in Wattpad too n your username was Muskaan Surana.. So I was just curious to know as I'm also a marwari😃
I definitely am a Marwari...you are too! What a coincidence...what's your full name? 😃

Thank you so much for reading and commenting...

My comments are in purple😃

Muskan

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#100

Unres on pg 13...btw another comment...I love the way you are portraying the thoughts on both the sides...something even I'm trying in expectedly unexpected :)

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