Sameer-Naina FF: Kati Patang (Part-30 Updated)PG-134 Note on Pg.143

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#961

Dhamakedaar update Minu darling!

Pehle to thank you- tumhare Naina aur Sameer ko romance karna aata hai 😆

Dusra- let me applaud you on the detailing in this update- right from the beginning...update to update, you are getting a pro at it!

This tale is one of my favourites- especially with the twists and turns woven into the story which started with a simple bet...it now involves so many characters, motives etc, that I was racking my brains to find if there was an accomplice in the midst of the family itself! That's what a good suspense novel does to you! Awesome work!

Baaki- Samaina romance was amazing...Naina ko chakkar aaya to mere dimag me sabse pehle pregnancy aayi...shukar hai wo nahi tha :P coz Samaina haven't consummated as yet!

Wo clothes change karne waala...haaye typical bollywood style...gentleman yet getting turned on! Namrata ki mummy samajhdaar hain! :P

Aur wo Sudip, Vikram kitne kameene hain...kisi victim ki identity chura li! Hadh hai! Bechara Paresh Dewan!

Aur pataka aur bomb kisko bola us behrupiye ne? Sameer sunta na to wahin zamin me zinda gaadh deta!

All in all- a fantastic update, interjected with suspense, romance and thrill at the perfect moments!

Keep writing!

Loads of love

Sur

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Isha

@mystique123

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#962

Minu darling, take a bow, great update👏👏👏

I am in love with the progression in the story.⭐️ From a cute romantic tale, you have transformed it into a thriller and let me tell you I am getting hooked to it with every update. One of my personal favorites, I want to thank you for bringing this amazing piece to my life and let me tell you You have a long way to go,the narration, the description, the emotions, the suspense...you have nailed at my love ❤️

Let me come to the update now: With every update, I am getting attracted to that facet of the characters which you are unveiling slowly and in this my love goes to the Protective, Caring and Loving Father Sameer. His reactions and the dialogues, spot on dear ⭐️

Aww...I really liked the picturization of Samaina romance: subtle yet intense: be it gift, return gift or while changing the dress. Beautiful and yeah I forgot to tell I love Namrata's mother for this😆

And finally the CID Maheswari in action. I am damn sure he will crack the Two Eagles mystery soon, pretty soon. Vikram, Sudip...whoever tries to hurt Naina and Nisha will not be spared by Sameer.

In between all the hungama, I was overwhelmed when Naina asked Swati to send Munna over to the hospital as a support for Sameer. This is what is called love and understanding.❤️

Loved it lots Sweetheart and eager to read what happens next 🤗

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#963

Everything is getting even more twisted🤔

Ab ye fake Paresh Dewan kaun tha?? Kyu tha??

Sameer ka gussa😲

Only Naina can tone it down

The dress changing part was intense, thoda emotional bhi

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Inayat

@Princesswarrior

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Posted: 6 years ago

#964

Minu, I suggest you to take a knife and kill all of us once and for all. Yaar aise tadpaaya mat Karo.🥺.. . Tumhare agle update tak main sochti rehti hoon ab kya hoga, aage kya hoga, sudip kya karega aur Varsha ka kya angle hai?? And you know what, itna dimmag toh maine yeh sochne mein bhi NAHI lagaya tha ki katappa ne bahubali ko kyon maara!! 😆😉🤣

But I know you wouldn't stop leaving your stories with cliffhangers, as they intrigue me (and probably other readers too) alot .. And let me tell you that you are doing a great job in keeping us hooked.⭐️

And I must say you are blessed with writing skills😊. Your written pieces are splendid .. And thanks for pampering us with such long and well written updates...😃

The story seems to entangle more and more. Sameer's possesiveness and love for nisha could be clearly seen in his actions👏. Naina's fear was also highlighted well. Only people whose name starts from n can calm sameer down(nanu,naina,nisha)😆. Typical husband wife who are madly in love with each other wali feels aati hai ab In dono se.. I am glad that sameer has finally realised that naina expects a normal sasural and family. I was literally blushing😳 after reading about samaina romance. I didn't know that even a simple sequence of changing clothes could could make my cheeks red.☺️. Sameer's nervousness was well described and I just loved naina's response to the undressing sequence.Namrata and sameer's bond is cute. So is swati - naina and sameer-munna.. I have observed that you are giving quite a lot of hints about Varsha, seems like you are going to reveal about her past with sameer soon!!

Falling in love with the situation, samiana and your writing skills more and more..

Ps: thanks for the pm..

Pss: a kind request- could you please write more about varsha, preedit and what happened to naina -preeti bond(can't get over it).

Psss:update soon

Warm regards

Inayat

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ashona

@ashona

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Posted: 6 years ago

#965

Thank you Minu, for such an amazing Sameer Naina FF, you are extremely talented and have a vivid imagination to write so beautifully. Read the entire FF the last few days, it was so gripping that I had to finish the entire FF within couple of days. Well done and please update soon. Lots of appreciation for this masterpiece. Lots of love, Ashona

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shravya rao

@shravyarao

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#966

Minnu, girl you are a rockstar!! I mean where do u get this kind of imagination from? All with mind blowing twists n turns, believe me it never gets boring to read ur story, i can't even guess which direction this would be going in the next update, hatts off to ur creativity yaar. I mean it really. I understand that it would have take so much effort to come with this kinda plot. I just caught up with the last 3 updates. I loved it, the emotional bonding between them is growing, the physical intimacy is being dealt with, nisha that cutie is a bundle of joy always, u r covering everything but still maintaining the suspense in the story. After the last update Sameer just got a hint, i hope it helps him somehow, otherwise they can't even go out in peace worrying something might happen to nisha. No one should face this situation. Loved it man. You are completely Keeping us hooked with every update. 👏 ❤️

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Lakshmi

@lakku19

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Posted: 6 years ago

#967

Wow.. awesome update..

It's becoming interesting..

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#968

Two eagles is the same place Naina took Sameer to, right?
This story is really getting interesting and has me on the edge of my seat...
Cant wait for more..

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#969

For me highlight of the update was Sameer as a protective father ❤️ ... Nisha isn't his own blood but still his care and protectiveness for Nisha is something really touchy. . I liked how he scolded every single person what if something had happened to his daughter yes indeed it was scary... Second part which I liked was Cufflinks gift and u know why 😉 the kiss that followed ☺️ ... Kiss se bhi imp tha Sam ka Naina pr haq 😉 though he was hesitant but still those moments of intimacy completed Naina as a wife.. . Aur yeh Varsha Ka chakkar mujhe Jeene nhi dega 😆 jald khatm karo bhai is suspense ko bhi the major fb Jiske liye I m waiting. ... Last mei SJM ki jalak thi Jis swag se usney sab handle kiya I loved it and naya paresh dewan ka twist mast tha.. .. I m eagerly waiting for spl anniversary update now 😃

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bushra

@BushraN

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Posted: 6 years ago

#970

Awesome update asusual... This story has everything from romance, thrill ,suspense and you always end on an intriguing point...

Nisha ka part thoda kam hogaya hai isliye drama utna nahi hai warna she is the drama queen...Missing nisha-rishab bond, can we at least have a phone call between the two...

Sameer Maheshwari is just love! Samaina bond is getting beautiful by each passing day...

And what did the doctor say? sorry mujhe samajh nahi aaya😒? did he ask sameer to wait more before they consummate or did he ask him to do it Jaldi as that would strengthen naina from within?

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