SaIna SS : ab maan bhi jao na. Part 7 page 38 updated - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Well read both the parts.. on special demand lol😆😉
Ok part 1...

It was really well written and explained..
Wo naina ki tadap was well defined and a good base for the story ahead..

Preeti 😆

She is a dumbo sometimes and not naina 😆

Hair Clip scene was recreated nicely..

Maza aa gaya
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2..
Enjoyed reading this part more coz maybe here sameer and naina both were there..
Also maybe because it was dedicated to me😉😆

So VO is here as well

Nice idea

Whole evening was described very well..

Here the difference was nanu and mom were present in his birthday.
But ending was a cliff hanger..😡

Please update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Well read both the parts.. on special demand lol😆😉

Ok part 1...

It was really well written and explained..
Wo naina ki tadap was well defined and a good base for the story ahead..

Preeti 😆

She is a dumbo sometimes and not naina 😆

Hair Clip scene was recreated nicely..

Maza aa gaya


Kia kren ab..
Apki demand pe update soon hogaya
Tau comment bhi soon hona chahiye na..😉

N i am glad apko maza aya..😊

Yeah hairclip wala scene was my fav even😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Part 2..

Enjoyed reading this part more coz maybe here sameer and naina both were there..
Also maybe because it was dedicated to me😉😆

So VO is here as well

Nice idea

Whole evening was described very well..

Here the difference was nanu and mom were present in his birthday.
But ending was a cliff hanger..😡

Please update soon..


Thora twist tau bnta hai na
Wrna wu lagta..

Yeah vl update soon..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
sameer waiting for naina to cut the cake was so cute sameer seeing naina at the doorstep was nice.naina wore the dress as his birthday is her best day.so sweet.sameer confused about when to confess his love to her and she heard everything.she is so sad.hope she doesn't misunderstand him
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

sameer waiting for naina to cut the cake was so cute sameer seeing naina at the doorstep was nice.naina wore the dress as his birthday is her best day.so sweet.sameer confused about when to confess his love to her and she heard everything.she is so sad.hope she doesn't misunderstand him


Misunderstanding tau hogi na😉
But will try to clear it in two updates
Thanks fr comment dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Again a super duper update loved every bit of it ❤️i recalled Sameer's birthday after reading it thank u for that 😊precap awesome...Can't wait now
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Read both the parts in one go.Memories got refreshed and smile inadvertently came to lips..Beautiful updates and trust me ''yeh dil maange more.''
Must say this idea of roothna-manana is marvellous.👏Would love to read about the changing dynamics in their relation.Keep them coming.
Thanks for the pm..😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Again a super duper update loved every bit of it ❤️i recalled Sameer's birthday after reading it thank u for that 😊precap awesome...Can't wait now


Thabks fr da comment
I am glad you enjoyed it.
Update in evening..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Read both the parts in one go.Memories got refreshed and smile inadvertently came to lips..Beautiful updates and trust me ''yeh dil maange more.''

Must say this idea of roothna-manana is marvellous.👏Would love to read about the changing dynamics in their relation.Keep them coming.
Thanks for the pm..😃


Sure dear
Thanku fr the comment
Will update soon..

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