Sameer-Naina SS-Holding It Together (EPILOGUE UPDATED) - Page 15

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Hi Minu...first of all sorry for the delay in the response...been keeping too busy n unable to keep myself upto date on the forum...

Well I read the epilogue just yesterday n I have only one complaint- why is the epilogue...please plan to write a follow-up series...I want to see Sameer n Naina together!!! 😳
I tried posting my review twice last night, but my internet connection did not seem to like it- so two beautiful reviews were lost..I'll try the third time...😊
This is the most emotional update I've seen here. This series is my favourite from you. I loved Sameer in his casual black too 😆😉 n Naina in sari has always been my dream- tried to write that long back myself, but somehow didn't find the right situations. Though it is still on my mind. 😆
You know I personally faced a situation very similar to the one Naina is. You two love each other desperately and can't stand a moment apart- yet sometimes life asks you to take the difficult path. Luckily enough the situation was averted for me, but I could feel Naina's pain firsthand. I was like no, no...please Sameer no! I somehow still wish Naina would surprise him n take admission in MU instead of DU! Anything for love n Mumbai has good colleges too 😆 (I'll assume it this way unless you follow this with another series 😆😉)
Coming onto the kiss- that was hot. Period. This is the most decent word I could find. 😆 I loved how it started innocently, from the kiss on the bangle (just pure love yaar), to the kiss on the arm, the knuckles, Naina holding him tight afraid to let go, he reciprocating and I'm so happy to see Naina initiated the kiss. Goes a long way to show how much she loves Sameer that she shed all her inhibitions to show him what he means to her- that she is his and his only. And Sameer- he would have craved to kiss her umpteen times, but would always hold back, lest it hurt Naina- that it wasn't the right thing to do. But after such a kiss, it is kind of good, that they would not meet so frequently 🤣 the kind of passion Sameer n Naina have- it is difficult to conform to limits when it comes to love. Their meetings in vacations would be fraught with love, passion n desperation and would lead to I'm sure umpteen kisses like these. The STD phone calls, the letters, perhaps a secret visit by Naina to Sameer on his birthday as a surprise...God I'm imagining so many scenarios already! Sorry for the diversion, coming to the kiss again- how beautifully you've portrayed their emotions- looked straight out of a romance novel...they were lost in those few moments as if nothing else mattered except the two of them, and like there is no tomorrow. Classic! I almost thought Nisha of Kati Patang might happen if these two don't get interrupted 😆 (sorry for being so straight, but this was the impact of this expression of love).
Splendid!! 👏👏👏
And I really really hope that you would write some more on Samaina.

Such a long reply...😲 No worries dear.Take your own time to go through the works.
Okay about your comment---I am speechless ☺️ What to reply I am falling short of words.You have already imagined the scenarios for a sequel.👏 Nice scenarios ..must accept.You should be tagged ''Romance Queen".😉 And that separation---OUCH!That hurts..terribly hurts..😭😭 Kyun itna buri hoti hai kismat..Kyun juda kiya..Why?
Somewhere I felt complete with them sharing the bonding and shedding inhibitions.😳
I was lost with them while writing this.Just went with flow..😆
And coming to your review of kiss--I was skeptical about the choice of words. It had to create impact but remain true to essence of characters.😳 Haila! Kya bol rahe ho...Bache hein..Bas kuch jyada emotional ho gaye..☺️ Thank you for the appreciation.😃
With love-
Minu.😳
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you dear Prachi.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: misha.as

Very very nice Minu...
Naina's selection and Sameer congratulate her... Very nice and lovely...
Sameer wants to see Naina in Saree... And Naina wear it... So pretty...
The best part is temple's part where Sameer tells her that he would be leaving... It's so emotional...
Very Well written Minu...
Awesome...


Thank you so much dear Misha for reading this piece and appreciation.Glad you loved it.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
What a beautiful ending to a wonderful story 😳
Epilogue was simply magical Minu
Brilliantly written 👏
Loved reading every bit of it
I'm gonna miss this SS
Please keep writing!
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
That was pure magic ... I wish you continued with this story ... But anyways do write more stories on Samaina
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: .Khamosh.

What a beautiful ending to a wonderful story 😳
Epilogue was simply magical Minu
Brilliantly written 👏
Loved reading every bit of it
I'm gonna miss this SS
Please keep writing!
Thanks for the PM

Thank you dear Ani for the appreciation and sweet reply.Thank you for staying with it and making the journey all the more memorable.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

That was pure magic ... I wish you continued with this story ... But anyways do write more stories on Samaina

Thank you dear for the appreciation.Glad you loved it.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res.
Sorry for all these reserved post..But you understand right.
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Posted: 7 years ago
You wrote it beautifully dear.. each word had own deep meaning.. loved their kiss.. m sad that it ends.. bht I wish j came back with season 2.. loveyyaa
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyp

You wrote it beautifully dear.. each word had own deep meaning.. loved their kiss.. m sad that it ends.. bht I wish j came back with season 2.. loveyyaa

Thanks dear for the appreciation 😃 About the sequel not thought but will write if any thought comes that suits the storyline.😃

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