Sameer Naina FF: Ek naya rishta; Last Part on Pg 13 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Radhika03

Hi...loved the OS...but why is it a OS...please continue it...😳

Initially I was upset with Sameer...becoz Naina helped his Nanaji but still he was acting all pricey with her at home...but but...at the end he did realized he should thank her for that...so sweet of him 😊

Love the way you write...i liked you put that song in between "dil deewana" it gave a 'show wala' feeling 😆

Originally posted by: miss_writer

Its awesome. I loved it.

Don't make it a one shot. Do continue as a FF.

Arcane😊

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN

Nice one..

Yr ab tum itna acha likhogi

Tau mai jo os likh rahe hun

Vo koi nhi parhega..

Ye galat baat hai

Tau ab next time thora kaam acha likhna🤣

Kidding

Mere mazaq krne ki adat hai

Bohot buri

It was superb.

Specially bye naina mai chalta hun

Haye..

Waiting fr dat scene in da show..

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Lovely OS Manisha... ⭐️👏

Positive approach.. but as they say Love is blind... here also i fear if Sameer will ever acknowledge her feelings for him,,, 😳 as she blindly faiths n love him... !

Nice one.. loved Naina helping Nanu,,,, n Sameer out of nowhere came with her books ,, back to her... to her .??/ .. really...??/ 😳

Manisha.. this Os needs to be added with more parts to it.. i wud love to read more in this very story..

Hope you will write more.. thanks dear for this Awesome one take... plzz consider for more parts..

God bless.. !!!

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

The teenage love, the innocent love and sometimes cuteness prevail!

Lovely OS Manisha, my sweet dearie ❤️ 🤗

Lovely narration 👏 and a stupendous story you have created from the scene taken!

I loved your shot giving an imagination as how and what Sameer wud have felt on getting punished! How he get out of it and how he reacted on seeing Naina with Nanu!

Nice twist at her home, and Sameer coming back with her books to make her falling more for her and dreaming deeply of him!

The teenage love, the first love can be called infatuation, but when one start taking pains for the other, the love blossom to fill the gap and it's beyond any limitations!

Naina's love is such, but what about Sameer? I wish you write more of the outcome of Naina's love to him and the reaction that rejuvenate or change Naina's life. All depending upon his heart and mind's response!

Thanks dear, with a hope to read more in this very shot, in wait!

Luv ya sweetie ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: faishar02

mazza aa gaya

so continue ad ff

Originally posted by: babita..

Very nice OS Manisha di 👏👏

But why stopped here only ?? Plss continue this as an FF 😊

I loved the scene where Sameer showed his worries for Nanu, same as he recollects how Nanina helped him coming back home !

Loved to see Chachaji taking her side at home and Sameer coming back on realising how she must be feeling and he must be a kinda support for her. I so loved this one di, too pure as a writer's imagination ⭐️⭐️

Loved every part leaving Naina feeling more for Sameer and O me looking for more here. 😳This looks like unfinished as we don't have the POV of Sameer except his realisation,

Plss continue this one di, request mano ye order, But U have to 😉

Thnkuu sho much for this one, plss keep writing, your write ups are masterpiece always 👏👏

Lovees, huggies ❤️ ❤️

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

superb OS dear.. 👏
waiting for more stuff

Originally posted by: Krutikarainbow

Your story was really good I was able to imagine everything. I wish the serial had something like this it would have