FF Alfaas kuch vyaan naa KR payeeeee part -1 updated 25-7-20

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Character sketch ...

Raman bhalla--- bussiness man..

(Nevers shows his emotions in front of others)..

Ishita iyer--- dentist by profession.....







Prologue:

Raman--- congratulations Ishita...

Ishita iyer--- Raman kis liye.

Are for ur marriage

..

Thnx Raman....

Raman--- vese who is the lucky guy...

Ishita iyer--- with smile pratik..

Raman---- I am very happy for u Ishita..

Papa,papa where r u ..

Ruhi barged in their conversation ...

Papa I missed u ....and hugged Raman...ohhh Mera bccha ,but happened ru ....

Ruhi---- kuch ni bs ,apki yaad aari thi..

Ishita----- acha Raman Mai chlti hu.....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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A very nice prologue please update 1st part soon to know how Raman and Ishita will get married

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting prolouge

Pls continue ur other stories too

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part --1

Ru--- papa mujhe neend ni aari ...

Ra-- kyaa huaaa ru,koi problem h Kya?

Ru--- papa ,sbki mamma unko pyaar krti h,pamper krti,unko teyaar krti h school ke liye...papa Meri mamma khn .why Dadi do all my work instead of mamma and started crying.

Ra- ru ,Mera bchaaa ,and hugs her. Mai bhi simmi ko bahut miss krta hu bcha...but don't worry papa...I will pamper u lot....khush Mera bchaaa,chlo so jaooo. .

After making ruhi sleep Raman moved to his balcony ..

And starts recalling his promise with his sister simmi.

Flashback..

Bhalla house....

Toshi-- Raman kidr h tu....papaji bula rhe tujhe...

Raman---ohhh mummy g aara Mai nichee..

Bhalla g-- ohhh toshi g shant ho jaooo.

Raman comes down.

Han g papa ji bolo ..are Tere maa chahetee h Tere shaddi fix krnaa...puttar g ab tum dono hi bhesh kro ispe mujhe bhich Mai Mt laoo...

Bhalla g yeh ap keh rhe ,Raman Meri toh koi bt sunta hi nhi...itna bda bussiness man bn gya ,ab toh iski Umar hori h shaddi ki...

Ra--- maaa Mai abhi 24 ka saal ka hu...itni jldi mujhe shaddi nhi krni.

Both mother and start fighting over it....

There land line rings....

Bhalla g- bs kro ab tum dono..neelu jra phone uthna...

Neelu - papa g hospital se pH aara h..

Bhalla g took pH ...

And got silent...

Ra--- Kya hua papa.

Bhalla g-- pram or simmi ka accident ho gya h..

Toshi g started crying ,bhalla g mere bchee.

Bhalla family moves towards the hospital..

City hospital

Ra--- how r the patient.

Srry Mr .bhalla ,param is no more..and the condition of URS sister is not Soo good ,her pregnancy is also affecting her ...

We r trying r level best to save both duo ( mother and daughter)

Toshi collapsed on the floor after daughter wordict.

We r shifting her for operation..

But before that she wants to meet Raman bhalla.

Raman moves to simmi's room.

There she was lying on bed with alot machines joined to her...

Tears comes in ramans eyes simmo.

Simmi- Bhai plz do me favour...

Raman--- Han bol .

Simmi-- I know Mera bchna bhut muskil h...Bhai swear on mere mrne bd ap mere bche ka khyaal rkho ke,usse Puri duniyaaa ki khushiyn Doge...

Raman--- hn simmi..

And then doctor moved simmi to OT

After operating for long , doctor couldn't save her.

Simmi left us...but left behind her ansh Meri ru.

Flash back ends...

I miss u simmi..and a tear comes out from his eyes..

Next day..

Ru--- Dadi aloo ka prantha chaheyee meko...

Toshi----achaaa laa ri hu Mai hu..tum phele bala toh finish kro..

Raman comes down..kisses ruhi cheek.

Achaaa daddi ko tng KR ri ho...

Ruhi giggled.

Acha maaa Mai office ke liye nikla hu..

Moved out from his house..

In his society compound he his ishitaaa talking toh her sister...

Raman moved to his office..

Office..

Raman was not happy with the news ..

Ishita marriage had been fixed pratik...

Last night he couldn't complete his talk with due to ruhi sudden arrival..

Tears comes in his eyes..

I luv u ,Ishita...I can't see u with another man..

Yaaaa what why u will choose me ,becoz u thought I am widower and single parent....due to simmi's promise I can't tell u that I love u dammit...

But tumne kbhi Meri aankhen nhi pdi....tu kehti thi naa ,we r frnds ...fir kyo KR ri ho us prtik se shaddi.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part-2

Raman was crying .

Mihir enters his cabin and sees his brother crying ..Kya huaaa Bhai ap roo kyo rhe ho..

Raman--- nhi aankh Mai kuch chla gya ...thaaa

Mihir--- u share anything with me Bhai.

Rm-- esa kuch nhi mihir,jaooo km kro...

Other side...

Ishita in her cabin..

I don't know why I find Raman totally ignorant towards me...

Aaj phele br boh mujshe bt liye bgair chle...

It's weird.

Khi vandu akka sch toh nhi keh rhi thi...ki Raman mujshe pyaar krte h...(except Ishita all iyer family knows regarding smmi and ruhi.becoz at that tym Ishita was in New York and due simmi and Raman they shared this thing with Ishita)

Nhi esa ho skta ,hum sirf ache dost h.

Or mujhe bhi Raman or ruhi psnd h...pr Mai Raman se pyaar nhi krti...Raman shaddishudaa h or unki beti....akka ko koi misunderstanding Hui hogi....

Partik call Ishita..

P--- ishu how r u.

I---- I am fine..

P--- r u free ishu,can u company me to mall ,yr I waanaa do some shopping .u know naaa shopping sense is not Soo good ..we u company me.

I---- why not pratik...u'll send me the address of mall

Other side

Ru calls papa I want new dress ...doremon Bali

Ap leke aaoge naa ru ke liye...

Ra--- hn Mera bchaaa...Mera bchaa bole or Mai uska khena na Manny esa ho skta h...

Tq pApa u r the best...

Shopping mall.

Ishita was helping prtikk in choosing his dress

I---- oh commmon pratik why u behaving like shy guy..

This pink will shoot u..

P--- no ishuu.

I---- kk fine.choose whatever u wanna choose...

I'll shop something for me( in this Ishita use to wear modern clothes,and she had no infertility issue)

Ishita moves to ladies section..

There she sees Raman talking to a girl...a kind of jealousy took place in her.

I---- I don't care , whatever he wanna do he can do.who the hell I am to him..

And start shopping..

After some tym both Ishita and prtik joined themshelf.and sees them..

He got red due to anger...I can't tolerate his Ishita with anyone..I will kill this man .

Then phones rings.

Han ru

Ru---papa u brought my doremon dress na

Hn Mera bchaa,

Ru--- ap jldi ghr aao,I waiting for u...

Ohh God I missed them .

In bhalla house

Ru was too happy to see the dress and wear it..

Daddy daddi dekho Mai bhi doremon bn gyi.and started dancing.

Entire family started dancing with each other...Raman was thou Happy for ru...but Ishita was not leaving his mind..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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lovely update continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Both the updates were beautiful when Ishita realise her love and cancel the wedding please update next part soon to know how she will come to know that Raman loves her

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow, nice..ishita too has feeling but us unknown to the facts inside n outside...


Raman is torn....


Hope you update next chapter soon please 🙏🙏🙏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update on u r update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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nice updates dear...


cont soon

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