Main tujhme apni jaan rakh doon,st 5 on pg 28,teaser on 31,11/1 - Page 7

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Emotional teaser di

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Posted: 5 years ago
#62

Sad teaser di..

So ishu is pregnant.. Poor Biwi she can't share the good news with him..

Plz plz update soon and thanks for pm di

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Posted: 5 years ago
#63

Interesting teaser

Please update soon its a request

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very interesting & emotional teaser 😍❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#65

Emotional Teaser


will be waiting for the full update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice teaser

Pls update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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SHOT 2

Ishita was making tea and snacks for Raman but her mind was still stucked when she saw him committing suicide.

She gulped her saliva in fear and said-agar ek pal ki der ho jaati,toh aaj meri duniya tabaah ho gayi hoti.main kaise jeeti apne raman ki bina,thank u murugan ,unhe bachane ke liye,unhe sambhalne ke liye ,ab bas hume iss musibat se nikaal dijiye ,taaki hum apni zindagi pehle ki tarah khushi se bita sake.uss shagun ko harane ka koi raasta dikha dijiye,aakhir hume uss choti si bachchi ria ko bhi toh justice dilana hai,please murugan show us some way.she was thinking and praying when Raman came to the kitchen and wrapped her in his arms resting his head on her shoulder.

Ishita realised his restlessness and said-kya hua, Raman??

Raman-ria ki tabiyat bahut kharab hai,usse bachne ke bahut kam chances hai.maine mihir ko call kiya hai,reports mein hai ki kisi ne sach much uske saath galat kiya hai,ek baar nahi,ek hi baar mein kai baar.aur woh choti si bachchi ,bahut takleef mein hai.he said while tear roll over his cheek.

Ishita turn to him and said-dont worry ,raman.hum koshish karke aapko innocent prove karenge.aap please mat roiye,she said wiping his tears.

Raman-its not about me,it's about her.that baby girl,yaar woh bachchi hai,itni choti,itni naazuk aur kisi ne uske saath kitna galat kiya hai aur shagun aise insaan ko bacha rahin hai,kaisi maa hai??

Ishita-woh uski sauteli maa hai, Raman.

Raman-but maa toh hai naa,forget about being her mother,she is woman.how can she support such heinous crime.uss bachchi ne abhi zindagi jeena shuru bhi nahi kiya tha,aur kisi ne uske saath aisa kar diya .she is just a baby,ishita.just a small baby,koi kaise itna pathardil ho sakta hai.he said sadly while tears roll down his eyes.

Ishita hugged him tight and said-sambhaliye khud ko,aapko apne aur uss bachchi ,dono ke liye ladhna hai,kyunki woh khud ke liye ladhne ki haalat mein nahi hai.

Raman wiped his tears and said-u r right,mujhe hum dono ke liye ladhna hoga,aur main jarur ladhunga,jisne bhi ria ke saath galat kiya hai,usse saza dila kar rahunga .aisi saza ko kabhi kisi ko naa mili ho,kyunki uska gunaah itna ghinona hai.main usse nahi chodunga,aur naa shagun ko chodunga ,uss insaan ka saath dene ke liye.they both r culprit and deserves to rot in hell.

Ishita-haan Raman,hum unn dono ko sazaa dilayenge.mujhe toh Ashok sir ke liye bura lag raha hai,apni bachchi ko aisi haalat mein dekhna,kitna mushkil hoga unke liye.

Raman-he was crying so bitterly,ishita.mujhe itna bura lag raha tha unke liye,though he was pouring his anger on me,but phir bhi mujhe khud se jyada unke liye takleef ho rahin thi.apne bachche ko aise dekhna,it's worst then dying ,he said and ishita's hand involuntarily went to her tummy protecting their unborn child.

She closed her eyes and calm herself down-relax bachcha ,relax,tumhare saath kabhi aisa nahi hone denge hum dono.mumma-papa aapko hamesha protect karenge.she thought trying to calm herself while raman was still mourning over ria's condition.

She couldn't listen it anymore,as she was feeling horrified and said-please raman,chup ho jaiye.main nahi sunn paungi.murugan kabhi kisi ke bachche ke saath aisa naa kare,actually kisi ke saath aisa naa kare.she said almost shivering in fear.

Raman got shocked seeing her so horrified and said-hey jaan,tumhe kya ho gaya achanak,abhi tak toh tum mujhe himmat de rahin thi,aur ab khud hi itni badhawaas ho rahin ho.

Ishita-aapki suicide ke baare mein soch kar darr gayi hoon.just hug me tight ,raman.let me believe ki aap mere saath hain.

Raman -i am so sorry bachcha,maine tumhe iss tarah daraa diya.he said and took her in tight hug.she hide her face in his chest and close her eyes feeling solace.

Ishita-yeh sab baatein ek aurat ke liye toh darawani hai hi,but ek maa ke liye usse bhi jyada hai.kaash main abhi aapko apne iss darr ki wajah bata paati,but abhi aap itne pareshan hai,ki main chah kar bhi aapko yeh news nahi de sakti,she was thinking hugging Raman while he was caressing her hair softly comforting her.

After sometime,

Ishita-aap room mein jaiye ,main chai laati hoon.

Raman-nahi tum jao,main laata hoon.

Ishita-nahi Raman,let me do.aap already itne disturb hai.

Raman-tabhi toh,kuch kaam karunga toh achcha lagega.moreover tum bhi kaafi tired lag rahin ho.tabiyat thik hai naa tumhari??he asked touching her forehead.

Ishita-i am fine,bas sab kuch thik ho jaaye .she said and Raman send her to room.

He came after sometime taking the tea and both start sipping it silently lost in their thoughts.

Ishita-kya soch rahen hai??

Raman-yahin ki kaun hoga,jisse shagun bacha rahin hogi.

Ishita-kuch samajh mein aaya??

Raman-not precisely,kyunki main usse bahut achche se nahi jaanta,but shayad koi boyfriend ho uska,jisse woh bacha rahin ho.

Ishita-boyfriend??

Raman-haan,ho sakta hai.ashok sir ke saath uska relationship achcha nahi hai .she married him just for money,he is much elder then her,toh ho sakta hai uska koi boyfriend ho.

Ishita-nahi,agar boyfriend hota toh woh aapko kyun seduce karti.

Raman-ho sakta hai main uske boyfriend se jyada sexy hounga.he said trying to lighten the environment.

Ishita look at him and smiled.

Ishita-think seriously,yeh mazaak ki baat nahi hai.uska koi boyfriend hai,yaa nahi.

Raman-mujhe pata nahi hai,but atleast we can think,kaun ho sakta hai, boyfriend??

Ishita-yaa phir uska bhai,koi bhai hai uska??

Raman-shayad,main mila hoon shayad usse pichle party mein.

Ishita-kaisa insaan hai??I mean uska behaviour kaisa tha,cheap hai kya??

Raman- I really don't know,itna dhyaan toh maine diya nahi .bas itna khayal hai ki uska ek bhai hai .

Ishita-itna pyaar karti hai kya usse,ki usse bachaye .

Raman-its not about love,agar Ashok sir ko iski bhanak bhi lagi toh woh shagun aur uske bhai ko chodenge nahi.

Ishita-haan ,yeh baat bhi hai.i think we should inquire more about her brother.

Raman-main mihir ko bolta hoon ,woh pata karega.he has his sources.

Ishita-haan,usse bata dijiye,this will help him.

Like this they talked for long and finally Raman started feeling tired due to the happenings of the day.

Seeing him feeling so tired ,ishita said-aap thoda rest kar lijiye,Raman .aap bahut thake hue lag rahe hai.

Raman hold her hand and said-tum mere paas hi rehna ,mujhe akela mat chodna.

Ishita-main hoon aapke paas,aap rest kijiye.she said laying next to him.

She started patting him and he slept in no time.

Sometime passed,Ishita was patting Raman slowly as he was still disturbed after the incident and was turning in his sleep also.

Seeing him finally sleeping she softly kissed his temple and said-dont worry,Raman .hum sab thik kar lenge.i know bahut mushkil hoga sab kuch thik karna but hum sab thik kar lenge .she said and was going when she felt hold on her wrist.

She saw him holding her hand tightly .

Ishita-main aapko chod kar kahin nahi jaa rahin,Raman.she said settling next to him.

She was caressing his hair when she felt like throwing up .

She ran to the washroom and throw up .she hold the wash bowl and washed her face.

She stood infront of the mirror and said caressing her tummy-sorry bachcha,main tumhare aane ki khabar papa ko nahi de paayi.but kaise unhe yeh khabar doon,itni badi khushi ke saath itni badi problem joh aa gayi hai.but don't worry,mujhe pura yakeen hai ,iss nayi khushi ke saath hum apni saari problem solve kar lenge .jaldi se sab thik kar dijiye murugan,taaki main yeh good news Raman ko de sakun.unhe keh sakun ki Raman aap papa banne wale hai,aur unki muskaan dekh sakun,unhe admire kar sakun.bas ussi waqt ka intezaar hai ,ki har problem dur ho jaaye aur hum apni iss nayi khushi ko celebrate kar paaye,till then rest here comfortably.she said caressing her tummy lovingly.

That's all for now,enjoy.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#68

Fabulous and emotional update di

Both of them were disturbed 😢

Ishita was more scared because she’s pregnant and cannot lose raman🥺🥺🥺

They are each other’s strength 💘

Their love and determination will fight against injustice 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Hope everything goes well

Lets see what happens next

Ty 4 d pm too di

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very emotional update ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice and emotional update..

Loved it..

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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