IshRa OS : Now rate me ravan kumar on pg 1 April 7

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Hello everyone,

Back here with an OS after long.

Actually the YHM nostalgia gripped me and I ended up writing this on one of my most favourite scenes of YHM, the morning after confusion of ishra, one of the most hilarious post consummation scenes I had ever watched. So here is my take on it since it was never cleared in the show

Hope you enjoy the OS😳

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NOW RATE ME RAVAN KUMAR




Raman was in washroom & smiling remembering about last night (Consummation)

Raman : finally all distances between us dissapeared , now we had became one in all senses, i never thought that one day this madrasan will became my life with whom i can't stand for while & now i never want to be away from her, uff madrasan what had done you to me.. He ruffles his hair thinking about it & thought to ask ishita about it

Ishita was having idli & chutni brought by waiter when raman called her "Ishita"

Ishita : ha raman.. Said munching the idli

Raman : how's is it?..je asked about last night experience while she thinks it's for the breakfast

Ishita : ok ok tha raman..keeping the plate aside

Raman murmured "ok ok, raman kya tujhme ab wo baat nhi rhi (he asked to himself)

Raman : achha ishita if u have to rate it out of 10..

Ishita made face "5"..

Raman (Self talk) : raman beta it's so insulting to hear that you could not satisfy your wife in ur s** life , what if she shared this with her sisters h they will share with bala & mihir, tu mazak banke reh jayega..thinking he decides to ask for second chance so that he can show his madrasan & how good he is on bed

Raman : achha ishita when will we do it next time?

Ishita : no raman not next, we should avoid it, as it's not good for health..

He pissed off with it & came out of washroom after getting ready

Raman : I'm going for a meeting, tum ghr chali jana ..said angrily

Ishita : but breakfast..

Raman : tum hi thooso..saying he went from there while ishita was confused with his behavior " what happened to him? Maine to hotel ke breakfast ko bola isme inko itna bura kyu laga, inhone bnaya tha kya" soon she too left from their

Raman reached office in very bad mood shouting on all

Raman : you guys are so careless, here I'm giving 100% ,& getting this in return, complete all assignment asap..saying he throw the file on table & went inside cabin

One employee : i think sir had fight with his wife..others smiles & got busy in their work

Raman : have i really so bad last night?..he thought holding his Head

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Other side ishita reached home & found mihika,vandu & simmi were sitting there , ishita tried to run inside her room but her way blocked by mihika or simmi

Mihika : kaha bhaagi ja rahi ho akka?

Ishita : what's this mihku & simmi , leave my way..

Simmi : aaye haaye glow to dekho iska..saying she pinched on ishita's hand

Ishita : ouchhh simmi , kya kar rahi hai tu, jaane do mujhe , stop bothering me..

Mihika : ha na simmi di don't bother my akka waise bhi kal raat jiju ne kafi bother kiya hai, haina akka.. She winks

When vandu's eyes fell on the red mark on ishita's shoulder

Vandu : ohho ishu raman has given u so many love bites, i think he was so rough na..

Ishita : no no akka he was not at all rough..she said in a go then bit her tongue realizing that what just she said & trio circled around her & teasing her to no end meanwhile amma & toshi ji came

Toshi ji : oh kudiyon(girls) whats going on?..ishita immediately runs to toshi ji

Ishita : glad u both had come see these three are not leaving me ..shw thought now they will got scold but toshi ji & amma to smiles

Amma : ishu kanna tell them na ..

Toshi ji : ishita puttar tu mainu dass(tell me) main to teri modern saas hu na..

Ishita : amma, mummy ji you both too … saying she runs inside her room & locked it while all the ladies laughed

In office raman was still thinking about that

Raman (st) : i think madrasan don't know how's it felt, yeah after all it's her first time na so, but still how can she rate me on 5 & also decided to avoid it, tu to gaya raman badi muskil ke baad to wo raat aayi & now its tough to control myself, kuch soch raman kuch soch..he starts thinking then something strikes in his mind & he opened his laptop & opened a p*** movie site ..but immediately closed it "chee raman ab ye din aa gye that you have to search for these type of sites to satisfy your wife, ish madrasan ke chakkar mein kya -2 karna padh rha hai"meanwhile mihir comes inside

Mihir : bhai can i get ur laptop actually mere laptop ki charging khatam hai & i have to send this presentation to Arora's..Raman just nodded & mihir take it & send the mail while closing he saw the search history & starts laughing

Raman makes irritated face "kya hua email ke reply mein they send any joke "

Mihir : no bhai but just tell apko ye dekhne ke shauk kabse aa gye, you never liked it but now watching it aap to aise nahi the.. He said laughing uncontrollably while raman snatched his laptop from him & scolds him too

Raman : it's all because of your bhabhi..he said with irritation

Mihir : now don't hide your fault name of bhabhi & tell me whose wife ask to watch these types of things..then raman narrates him everything now mihir's laughs more hard unknow to them their all talk heard by mihika who has come here to mihir but now left after hearing all this to decides to tease her akka

Mihika reaches bhalla house & directly went inside ishita's room

Ishita : mihku now please don't start all that again i had told you all everything..saying he turned & found mihika laughing uncontrollably

Mihika : but u didn't shared your experience on number…

Ishita : kya bol rahi hai btw why are you laughing this much?...

Mihika : aapne kiya hi aisa hai, bechare mere jiju ka kya haal bnaya hai..saying she told her everything now both sisters laughing hard

Ishita : oh god poor raman , he was asking for that & i thought it's for that breakfast.. Said while laughing

Mihika : akka u should have to there jiju ka face dekhne layak tha..

Ishita hits her playfully "don't make fun of my husband"

Mihika : ok but now what will you do?..ishita narrates her something

Ishita : you will do it na?..

Mihika : yes boss anything for my jiju n akka ..saying she went from their

Ishita : now wait n watch raman..

Later in night raman came back to home found all darkness there, tried to switch on lights but its not happening

Raman : bahar to light hai, humare ghr ki light ko kya hua..thinking he called his mother but don't

"get any response in return meanwhile he got message from simmi

"bhai we & iyers going to pammy aunty's house as she arranged for a party so we will be late"

Raman reads the message "chalo that's gud madrasan too went with them now i don't need to be embarrass" he headed towards his room & opened the door & found the whole room was fully decorated with flowers & candles

He smiles seeing this & called ishita when she hugged him from behind & he holds her hand & make her stand in from him she was wearing a sexy lingerie with diamond studs while her hair are curls

Raman : whats this madrasan ? Irada kya hai..she encircled her hands around his neck

Ishita : irade bahut nek hai..she winks & take him to bed then pushed him on it & herself landed on his chest & starts touching him with sensuously making him lost & smiles seeing her effect on him & tried to open his shirt's button but he holds her hand with questioning eyes

Ishita : may i get honour to love you mr bhalla?.

Raman : with all pleasure mrs bhalla.. Said with opening his arms

She starts Unbuttoning his shirt's buttons one by one leaving her lipstick mark on that place now his shirt taken off h his whole chest colored with her lip mark, now she starts kissing on her face soon captured his lips & he holds her by waist & she was trying to deepen the kiss but as she is new in it, he take the charge & relish all flovour from mouth they kissed for long time & then break the kiss for need of air..both panting heavily.. Both saw each other smilingly & again lock their lips for another round..Likewise they kissed each other many time finally broke in need of air..

Raman : btw i never new that this madrasan is this much bold..he said locking her in his arms

Ishita : all credit goes to my ravan kumar, the way you had kissed me last night, that feeling out of this world & i can rate that kiss 100/100..

Raman immediately leaved her "so mihir told you evetything, i will not leave him"

Ishita :no he didn't but mihika has told me..saying she told him everything

Raman : oh god you all madrasi are same kisi ki baatein aise suni jati hai..saying he turned his face other side while she cupped his face "I'm glad raman that she heard it & i come to know about it & you know raman love never measure on number & anything , its a beautifu feelingl which just can feel & you know what yesterday night was bestest in my whole life, u had made me feel desirable & lovable, u know i never felt like this before thank you for making me feel this...she said with so much love while her eyes well up while saying this , he wiped her tears nodding in negative & start caressing her face lovingly & kissed on her temple lovingly she closed her eyes he smilies seeing her & then he kissed her eyes ,nose cheeks ,finally claimed her lips while his hand roaming on her back freely soon they drowned in their pool of passion & again became one in all senses.. & he fell on her she wrapped her arms around him and she kissed on his temple lovingly..

Raman : madrasan

Ishita : hmm..

Raman : btw today was ur turn to love me..said with mischeivious smile

Ishita : as u say my lord ...saying she starts loving him & he closed his eyes feeling her smooth touches on his body , this round runs for long & soon both get tired

He fell on bed & pulled her on him when she said "NOW RATE ME RAVAN KUMAR" with wink

Raman : teri toh .. Both again drowned in their pool of passion..



That's all for this os hope you all liked it hit like button, do comments also..

Love

Harshita

Edited by harshiidiv - 5 years ago
harshiidiv thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Updated an os, enjoy reading

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey Harshu...


Very nice OS...

Loved the backdrop and how you handled the confusion was funny

Loved how she used her own ways to explain Raman that his or their love cannot be measured in numbers...


Lovely :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you for the PM!!! It’s so amusing with a slight touch of emotions... Raavan Kumar wrongly presumes that Ishita had rated him 5 for his “hardwork” last night and in turn get disappointed... However, Ishita was referring to the “quality “ of something else 😉😉


A depressed Puttar who used to gloat about himself is now reeling from the shock.. In the process he creates a mess at his workplace like usual.. But the Despo Kumar tries to take the help of Internet, (he often does 🤣🤣) but aborts it thankfully..,


Mihir browses through Raman’s laptop and comes to know about this romantic escapade 🙊🙊 and Puttar eventually spills out the beans which was listened by Mihika as well.. Contrary to Raman, Ishita is still blushing and gushing over the last night and the family was making it more embarrassing 😊😊


However, when she learns about the depression of Raman, she plans a surprise for Raman.. And Puttar pounces upon her like a tiger waiting for a prey... And that small talk between IshRa, wherein there pour out their hearts was so telling 🥺🥺..,


Perhaps, it’s time to rate this beautiful story too, 10/10 should do 👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was too good👍🏼

Hilarious yet romantic 😆❤️

Loved it

Ty 4 d pm too

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome and naughty os

Thanks for Pm

Sorry for the late reply

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's cute hot and Romantic update

Kaash yhm mein ye clear hota

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Absolutely mind blowing...

Poor ravan 🤣5/10

Ishita became naughty

Superr

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was hot......

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