IshRa Drabble : Jo tu mera humdard hain on pg 1 June 24

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hlw frnds back with another drabble & this one is dedicated to my loyal reader cum cutie sis "Amreen99 aka Amu" as I'm writing it bcoz of her & even she suggested me this theme too 😳 hope you all too like it..



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hain


I again woke up with the hope that today something will change & I will get everything back & with the same hope, I knocked the door "Ishita open the door


She opened it & peeped from inside " good morning Raman. Wishing her the same, I tried to step inside but like before she again stopped me "Raman ruhi is sleeping can we talk after sometimes u know kitni mushkil se soyi hai meri bachhi .. & helplessly I left from there towards kitchen to make something. After 5 mins I saw her & my eyes brimmed with happiness I called her bt she didn't responds me & busy with her ruhi " alee mela bachcha bhooku lagi hai wait mumma is bringing ur milk she comes inside kitchen & starts making milk for ruhi I asked her for coffee which nodded smiling & left from there


After pouring coffee in two cups I headed toward living room & saw her trying to feed ruhi & talking with her in her language seeing this I couldn't hold myself back & hugged her tightly keeping aside her ruhi & she pushed me away " what are you doing Raman ? Ruhi is crying or aapne se mere godi(lap) se hata diya & finally I shouts after 3 yrs spells my all grief " enough ishita enough she is not our ruhi she is just a doll we had lost our ruhi 3 yrs ago saying so I started crying pouring out my all emotions ,pain which I had kept inside my heart from last 3 yrs, the day when we lost our first baby due to her miscarriage the baby who came in our life after so many efforts and blessings..

I was still thinking about that day when my chain of thoughts broke after hearing her cry & I immediately hugged her happy that finally she cried pouring out her all grief " ramannn humari ruhi kyu humein chodh kar chali gayi humne kitne sapne dekhe the Raman sab choor - choor ho gye she crying uncontrollably while he trying to console her


Raman - shhh Jaan Jo ho gya use hum badal nahi sakte bt now we can start a fresh I missed you so much Jaan in these whole 3 yrs I was craving for ur love ...saying he broke down on her arms which make her realizes that howuch he suffered all through this that to alone & she wiped her tears and cupped his face " I'm really really sorry raman maine apko akela chodh diya tha in saalon mein


Raman - but now I want ur full attention & u have to pamper ur this baby like hell..he said so cutely wiping his tears


Ishita too wiped her tears & smiles "hmmm now I will love & pamper my first baby a lotyy bt firstly I want to thank you raman for being with me in this phase of my life (he nodded in no bt she continues) no raman plz mujhe kehne dijiye thank u mere " Humdard banne ke liye..both huggeg each other & promised each other for start fresh



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Emotional drabble teee😭
U used theme beautifully😳
Beautifully narrated..👏
Felt bad for ishra...
Ruhi was ishita's mare illusion😭
Loved how raman consoled her...he is her real Humdard...
Last scene was cute...where ishra decided to start afresh...
Keep writing beautifully teee😳


Edited by Amreen99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome n emotional drabble!!
Poor ishra..they lost their baby n
Ishu wasn't able to come out of that..
Raman has lost his wife too but glad ishu realised his pain.
N they decides to start a fresh.
Very beautifully written.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its emotional.
Ishra lost there baby
Ishita talking with doll.
And Raman patience broke.
And Finally ishita realize it.
Thanks for this
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice one dear
So they lost Ruhi 3 yrs back
Nd they became humdard of each other


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Emotional one
Ishra last their ruhi poor ishra from three years ishita was not in proper condition finally she gets fine ishra decided to start afresh
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Emotional drabble 😭IshRa lost their baby 😭Ishu isn't able to come to terms with it n seeing her like this Raman has lost hope but good Ishu understood his pain...Fab narration 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome drabble Harshii.
Emotional one .I think ye concept ek drabble na hokar kam se kam ek TS hota
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