OS : Main Ishitha, sirf Ishitha - updated part 22 on pg 43 21.11 - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Lovely update .
Nirwaan entry was nice ,but I don't like you treating raman as cmarragant man

Though adi is alive but ishita has shot the person thinking adi and Raman as a father of a young dead son has told ishita that ,so he is not wrong. Waise now I don't want ishra together .
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92
Wow .Nice update .
Introducing nirvana at this stage is a pretty novel idea .
Ishu seems unforgiving .
But Raman is wanting just that from her .
Will anyone break or twist n tweak their promises .
But nevertheless .The'll all live in the same complex .
That's good for starters .
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Lovely update
Update next part soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Awesome update
Ishita accepts to live in same flat but she doesn't want to face bhalllas and raman
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Ishitha Adi shart ye hain ki aap chaar logon ke alawa koi bhi uss ghar mein nahi aayenga aur koi aur mujse baath karne ki koshish nahi karega aur na hi mere saamne aayega.. main sirf tum chaar logon se miloongi.. koi aisa situation create nahi karenga ki muje sab ke saamne aana pade. Bolo manzoor hain.

Raman is shattered. He is terrified as there is no means to convince his wife..

Adi manzoor hain

Part 7

Everyone is wondering how to go about it now. They have realized that Ishitha has completely cut herself from everybody and it is going to be a tough task to get things moving in the right direction.

Nirvaan - Amma, chalo lets go home.. will you make food for me..

Ishitha of course,, enna sappuduve (what will you eat)

Adi Arre bhai, jab thak hum log tamil nahi seekh jaate tum ishima se hindi ya English mein baath karo no..

Aliya smiles and says amma is asking him what he will eat.

Nirvaan Amma, typical south Indian sappadu.. I want sambhar, rasam, potato curry, kootu etc..

Ishitha done deal..

Adi arre hum chaar bhi aayenge wo sab khaane.. naam to samaj nahi aa raha hai par aapke haath ka khaana khayenge zarror.

Ishitha teekh hain. Muje banana main 2 gante lag jayeenge.. aap log aa jana.

Mani arre bhai , main bhi aaonga..Ishitha, tum wo pumpkin ki kootu banathi ho na.. wo banao..

Ishitha teek hai baba.. bana doongi.

Raman feels so left out and lost. He wants to eat food cooked by his Madrasan. He wants to be part of his family again. But now he has to make use of the fact that she is going to live in the same building.. he will have to make opportunities to understand the situation and go ahead.

Ishitha and Nirvaan leave. Mani says he will drop shagun and join them for lunch. Adi says he will bring aliya, ruhi andpuhi in a while..

Toshiji and amma are disappointed that ishitha did not even say a bye properly. She just walked out.

Romi and Mihika go to their room.

Raman goes to his room and sits on the couch.

Raman (ST) kya ho gaya.. kyu hamesha mere saath aisa hota hain. Mera gussa sahin hain.. Arre usne mere bte ko goli maari thi.. to zaahir hain main gussa karoonga.. mujhe todhi patha tha ki ye sab hone wala hain.

Raman (ST) par wo bhi to sahin hain.. mainne usse baath karne ki koshish bhi nahin khi. Hamesha uske saath aisa hi karha hoon. Jab vo pareshani mein hoti hain main usse akela chod deta hoon. Main ye nahi sochtha ki uspe kya beeth rahi hogi.. ab kya karoon.. kaise sab kuch teekh karoon. Jaldbaazi mein kuch nahi kar saktha.. pehle usko yahan aane to de.. phir sochtha hoon. Waise madrasan bachchon se door nahin rahegi.. kuch to karna padega..

Raman is waiting for the kids to come back.. they come back late in the night and everyone seem to be happy having spent time with ishitha.He is happy and jealous at the same time.

He is sitting in the hall and thinking Romi comes to take water. He sees his brother sitting in the hall looking at nothing. He goes and sits next to him.

Romi kya hua Bhai?? Bhabi ke bare mein soch rahe ho?

Raman is startled to see Romi sitting next to him. He was so lost in thoughts that he did not realize Romi coming to him.

Raman ha Romi.. patha nahi kya se kya ho gaya.. ab ye bhi nahi patha ki kya karna hain.. sab jaisa tham gaya hai.. aisa lag raha hain ki sab kuch katham ho gaya. Ab patha nahin aur kya hoga aage aur kya karna hain.

Raman - Romi main galat nahin tha.. kisine mere bte ko goli maara. Main usse gussa kaise nahin hota.. actually mujhe itna gussa aaya ki main us goli maarne wale ko maar doon. To meri kya galti ki maine aise react kiya..aisa kyon lag raha hain ki main galat tha

Romi Bhai, aap galath nahi ho.. aapka gussa jaayiz hain. Aapke jagah main koi aur hota to bhi yahi kartha.. aapne apna beta koya.. to please guilty mat feel kijiye..

Romi - Par bhai aap bhabi ke bare me socho.. vo bhi galath nahi kah rahi.. hum bhabhi ko jaante hain na.. koi museebat main hain to vo khud jaati hain. Vo adi se kitna pyaar karti thi.. yaad hai bhai adi ko bachane ke liye aag me khud gayi.. unhone bus mein se pura parivar ko bachaya aur apne bacche ko kho diya.. aur aaj bhi hum sab unhe baanj bulathe hain. Humne kabhi unke baare main nahi socha.. jab bhi koi musibat hoti hum unko alag kar dete hain. Kyu bhai..kya vo is parivar ki kaabil nahi hain. Arre simmi aur param is ghar me rehthe hain par humne bhabi ko nikal diya.. ye galath hain na bhai.. aap ke paas hamesh hum sab the par babhi hamesha akele pad jathi hain. Kyu bhai.. kya kami hain unke pyaar mein.. zara sochiye bhai.. maantha hoon goli chali aur bhabhi galat thi.. par kya humne socha unke baare mein.. ye to chodiya.. pichle situations mein bhi kya aapne unke baare me socha.. bas badi badi baatein karthe hain par anth mein baanj hone ka ehsaas to hum hi dilate hain na..

Raman has tears in his eyes..

Romi bhai tande dimaag se sochiye aur phir kadam utayiye.. waise bhi bhabhi yahan 2 din me aa jayegi.. isi building mein rehegi to hum kuch kar payenge.. aapne pehli baar ruhi ke liye shaadi ki, phir adi/aliya ke shaadi ke liye shaadi ki, phir ruhi key liye ki.. iss baar ye rishta apne liye karo bhai.. shayad theek tharah se nibha payenge.

Raman nods positively and has no words to say.. Romi wishes him good night and goes to his room. Raman is looking at the walls blankly. He has no idea how to go about it.

In the Iyers house Mr and Mrs iyer are sad that ishitha did not even acknowledge them. Kiran comes there with bala and says - sorry Amma Appa, I was in touch with Ishitha.. main usse chod nahi sakthi thi. Bahut bura lag uske liye , issliye...

Amma interrupts and says - Kiran, koi baath nahin.. bhool jathe hain. Tum dono jao aur so jao. Subah bachcho ko school bhi to jaana hain.

Amma cries after they leave. She feels bad ishitha did not even acknowledge them. Appa is hurt more but is now thinking ways of putting things back in place.

Alia is happy Adi is back. Adi is tired and is sleeping peacefully after a long time. eVen Ruhi and pihu are happy that they have got back their ishima. They don't have to meet her in disguise.

Nirvaan is also tired..

Ishitha is happy to have spent time with her kids after a long time. She is also happy that now she can meet them whenever she wants without being guilty..

She remembers the way Raman held her hand and asked her to stay. One part of her heart was happy to be with him but she was hurt beyond repair. She does not want to go back to that life again. She is happy being alone and would prefer it that way.

She does not know what to do and then decides to take things as it comes. She only madeup her mind not to go weak emotionally but to evaluate everything. She went to bed with a smile as her kids were back.

The next morning was a new beginning for everybody in the bhallas and iyers.

Raman and Romi asked Adi to take enough rest at home before he joins office. They also ask Aliya to take a break..Ruhi says she will handle Aliya's work also..

The house was back to the normal chirpiness but with ishitha missing. Raman was missing her the most. He wished she was around to see this. He sighed realizing he has difficult task to perform.

Just then Mani walks in with Shagun. He says hi Raman, muje tum sabse baath karni hain.

Raman haan bol Mani, kya baath hain.

Mani Raman, hume police ko inform karna chahiye.. Adi is alive. Uska death certificate bhi issue ho gaya hain. Humme usko revoke bhi karna hain. Ishitha ke against case ko bhi badalna hain. Simmi, param aur suraj pe case karna hain. Wohi hi jante hain uss humshakal ka naam aur details. Hume lawyer se baath karni hain.

Raman ah!! Main to iske baare mein socha hi nahin.. hume chalna chahiye.

Mani hume ishitha ko bhi bula lena chahiye.. roshni uske saath thi aur uske upar case bhi hain. She should know.

Raman ah of course, usko bhi leke jayenga.. waise main kehtha hoon tum adi aur aliya ko lekar police station jao. Main lawyer aur ishitha ko leke pahunchtha hoon.

Mani tumhe patha hain na.. ishitha ne shart rakha hain ki koi uske saamne nahin jayega..

Raman jaanta hoon mani.. agar wo madrasan hain to main bhi uska raavan kumar hoon. Aise thodi jaane doonga. Everyone smiles hearing raman back in action.

Romi bhai, ye hui na baath.. jayiye..

Raman takes his car keys and drives towards his madrasans house.

Ishitha on the other end is unawareof the unexpected guest to her house. She is up and has decided to take the day off. She wants to be at peace after a long time. She has called and cancelled all her appointments.

She is sitting with a cup of filter coffee and the door bell rings. She opens the door and is shocked to see Raman standing there with his killer smiles and dimples.

He lovingly says- Madrasan, chal kuch kaam hain tujse.. mere saath chal.

Ishitha is shocked and says kahaan?

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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
hi all,
have updated the next part.. a small one.. do let me know if i have missed out anyone in the pm list.

secondly also let me know if i should prolong for some more parts or finish it.. will update the next part quickly.

do let me know your reviews.. this will help me decide on the way forward.

thanks

aarthi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Awesome update
Loved it
U should definitely prolong this story ..dont end it
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
Awesome update
Don't end it dii.. update some more
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Love the way you have penned down Ishita's version and made Raman realize where as a husband did he go wrong.


I dunno which course of direction you have decided to take this story forward, but since this OS is based on current track and also you have summed up how every time the family has shunned Ishita in the past, so making a small request.


Can you please make Ishita and kids understand Raman's POV also in this track and how they had been neglecting his emotions and pains not only in this track but in every track of the past also.


Yes ! He used to scream and utter brash words but at the end never did kids or Ishita think about things from Raman's POV also, it had always been Ishita. Kids and all stayed back with Raman, but never were they standing with him, they always had only blamed him or tried to hide things from him.


How Ishita never - ever did trust in him and never shared the problems with him. He always found out things when everything had escalated etc.


Also let Ishita realize how wrong she was by neglecting Aaliyah at the most crucial juncture of her life.

Let this story be double sided and not just one sided realization.


PS : the above is just my request , if you can accommodate it in your story, it's fine otherwise no problem. 😊 No intentions of hurting anybody.

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