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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi All
This is my first OS
I love Raman's Character a lot, so my OS will be based more on Raman.

Scenario: This happens in the initial part of YHM. Here, Raman is sad, lost and secluded but he doesn't ignore his daughter and loves her the most

Index:-
Part 1 -> Page 1
Part 2 -> Page 1

Start...
Part 1

Raman has started observing the growing bond between Ruhi and Ishita. Initially he fears the worst of losing Ruhi but seeing the happiness on Ruhi's face he keeps mum. Slowly, Raman is accepting the fact that Ruhi needs motherly love which she has lost, so he allows Ruhi to spend as much time with Ishita.
One day, a notice arrives at Bhalla house turning the whole world upside down for Raman.
Shagun wants the custody of Ruhi.
Raman, without losing any time, contacts his lawyer, Neel.
Based on the discussion with Neel, he gets to know his case is loose only in one point, Shagun is the mother and she is going to marry (Ashok).
Raman contemplates the whole scenario. He knows he cannot lose Ruhi at any cost. She is his life. He can't survive without her. That is when he sees Ishita sitting on the society bench from his balcony. He, then and there makes a decision and goes to meet Ishita
[This is the first time Raman is initiating the converstion]
He goes there and calls, Ms. Ishita Iyer
Ishita - (turns and startled) Yes, Mr. Bhalla
Raman - I will not beat around the bush and get to the point,... Will you marry me for Ruhi?
Ishita doesn't know how to react. She is astonishingly watching him.
Raman - Ms. Iyer, did you hear what I said. I will tell you in detail. Actually , I have seen how comfortable Ruhi is with you. Now, Shagun, my ex-wife, is re-opening the custody case. I have spoke to my lawyer, he has advised me to the marriage part, as my case might go weak there. And, I can't lose Ruhi. So...
Ishita thinks for a while. She has seen how Ruhi adores her father. She doesn't know why they are divorced. But the love she has for Ruhi, the want, to stay with her all the time makes her take an instant decision.
Ishita - Yes Mr. Bhalla I am ready to marry you for Ruhi.
Raman is ecstatic. He never thought that Ishita would say yes this fast.
Raman - Ms. Iyer, I am really thankful, but if you need time you can take it.
Ishita - No Mr. Bhalla, I have taken my decision. I am ready
Raman - Ms. Iyer, don't take this the wrong way, but we have to marry without informing our parents. Because if this news goes to Shagun, she might use this against me in the court. So, are you ready for register marriage?
Ishita also thinks for a while, she is almost ready because she knows her amma will not keep quite and she doesn't want that. But her appa, she wants to share it with her appa.
Raman - Ms. Iyer, is there any issue?
Ishita - No Mr. Bhalla, I am ready.


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harshiidiv thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hlw dear
Welcome in yhmforum.
Congratsss for ur first move in writing
Superb start
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on your first write up..

Interesting start..
Plz continue soon..
Thank you..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome awesome awesome update soon next part waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice one
Great start
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good start .. Would love to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi All

Part 2

Raman - Okay Ms. Iyer, will there be any problem with you if we get married tomorrow itself, because I do not want any wrong moves in my daughter's case
Ishita - hmm... Okay Mr. Bhalla. I have no problem

This way, Raman and Ishita got married without anyone's knowledge except Mihir.
[Note: I will not dwell into the family drama and details]
Raman and Ishita together as husband and wife got Ruhi's custody much to Shagun's dismay.
Ruhi was the most happiest of all.

Here, Raman takes the extra mattress and sleeps on the floor.

Life was going smoothly, Ishita adjusted all her schedule according to Ruhi and Raman used to try to spend time with Ruhi in between his busy schedule.

[Here, Ishita comes to know about Adi after marriage]
When Ishita comes to know about Aditya, Raman's son, she is really hurt. But based on thier conditions of marriage, she doesn't get involved or question him anything.

[This happens after Param tries to molest Ishita, and how Raman keeps mum early in the serial]

Everyone support Param when Ishita is told to leave the house, Ishita looks at Raman.
Raman doesn't know what to do. He knows Ishita would never do this but there is a small part in his brain which keeps reminding of his ex-wife's betrayal. After thinking hard, there is only one name which occurs to him, his Rooh. Ishita feeling defeated, seeing her husband silent, is about to turn, when Raman holds her hand and takes her to her Amma's place leaving everyone stupefied.
After reaching Amma's place, he asks her to be here, till he is back.
Raman comes back to his place and asks Romi to bring Ruhi to Iyers' as soon as she arrives.
Toshiji - What are you saying puttar?
Raman - Maa, who is most important in your life? In my case, are my kids, Ruhi and Adi. And I have not seen Ruhi more happy than now she is. And I want nothing, I mean, nothing to affect that. Papa, as of now I don't know what is right or wrong, but till this mess is sorted out, I, along with Ruhi, will be staying at appa's place. Please forgive me Papa if you feel this wrong but Ruhi comes first, and always first.
Romi please do what I said.
This whole conversation is heard by Ishita as she followed Raman to know what he is upto.
Ishita doesn't know what to feel. Raman is doing everything right but still she is very hurt as he is not doing out of his trust on her.
In Ishita's Room, at appa's place
Ishita - So you do not trust me?
Raman - Does that matter?
Ishita - What? What does that mean?
Raman - Ishita, first and foremost, we both are Ruhi's parents right, and as Ruhi's mother I trust you completely. Second, As a husband, do I trust my wife or not, that should not matter in our relation. Chalo, lets say, you were really going through that all, did you tell me anytime? ... no... why?... because even you know we are not husband and wife in that aspect. And somewhere you felt I will not trust you. Am I right?
Ishita was numb. Because everything Raman was saying was right, but she could do, as emotions are not justified through logic, she was unable to let go of that hurt that Raman did not trust her.
Raman - Ishita, now you look exhausted, and Ruhi is gonna come in some time, let us discuss about this situation after dinner, okay?
Ishita -(turning her face to other side, unable to control her tears) okay

It was a long battle to explain Ruhi about their stay a Paati's place.
After dinner,
Raman - Ishita, is Ruhi asleep?
Ishita - not yet
Raman - Okay, let her sleep with Paati, we have to go out
Ishita - Out? But now? where?
Raman - You talk to Amma and come, I will be waiting outside
Raman called Mihir and told him that they will be at their place in short time
At Mihir's Place,
Raman - Okay, Ishita now you have to tell us from the beginning what happened and how it came to this state? And, if you do not trust us, you can call Bala. But you will have to tell Ishita, otherwise we will not be able solve the problem.
Ishita, without any hesitation told them everything from the beginning
Raman - Mihir, you heard her right? So first thing we have to do is carryout complete background check on Param. I mean Everything, along with his stay in Dubai and why he had to return. And we have to do this very silently. No one, especially simmi or Param, can know about this.
[I will not go into details of the investigation]
It took seven days to collect everything against Param. After getting to know about Param, Raman regretted not doing background check on him before giving Simmi to him.
Raman - Ishita, we got all the evidence against Param including Sarika's. I am sorry Ishita for not trusting you back then but trust builds slow and steadily with time. I hope you understand that. Anyways, Param, will be arrested only after non-bailable warrant is issued against him. and let police arrest him when he is outside the house because Simmi blindly trusts Param. I do not want any fuss in the house.
Ishita was somewhere happy. She always dreamed of a husband like Raman. But the point Raman said about trust did not go well with her but she kept quiet knowing there is no use in telling him right now.


[Note - I apologize to all the Ishita fans. My story will be concentrating more on Raman and then IshRa]

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update..
IshRa got married..
Raman isn't connected emotionally with her but doing his duties well..
Sometimes Ishita was hurt by his actions but didn't voice out..
Plz update soon..
Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update dear
So ishra got married
Loved the way raman went with ishu taking ruhi finally he collect all evidence against param..
Continue soon

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