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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ishra Os( The day Raman Kumar Bhalla gained his memory back)

Suitable for all ages...

The story takes place after the marriage was completed, and the veil was lifted to reveal Ishita underneath Raman left the wedding mandap. Then, there was the truth revelation of Ishita-Mihika-Romi, trio's great plan to bring back Ishita into Bhalla house again.

The scene starts with Ishita's grahapravesh into Bhalla house, when Mrs. Bhalla comes and stops it saying that Raman does not accept the marriage so she can't come into this house.

Raman comes out from his room and says "maa usko ander ane dho, wo is ghar par reh sake par mere patni kabhi nahi ban payegi. After telling this he walked back to his room. Then, Ishita follows him to the room calling out his name "Raman! Raman! Raman ruko, mera baat sunlo, but he doesn't bother.

Scene shifts to their room, where Raman is standing showing his back towards Ishita. She comes in and says, "Raman mera baat to sunlo, muhje yeh karna tha... She continues says, " Main apka patni hu... but he cuts her off in the middle saying " Tum meri patni kabhi nahi ban sakthe, tum muhje dokha diya...main tumhe kabhi nahi maaf karungi

Ishita moves toward their cupboard and takes out an album and shows to him while saying, "ise dekho humari shaadhi ka album hai..., Raman interferes shouting, "Mujhe kuch bhi nahi dekni hai. So, she goes in front of him and tells him "Humari pehle bhi shadhi ho chuki hai, aap is shadhi sai nahi, par iske pehle bhi aap mere pati hai...iss album ko dekho tab apko sab kuch pata chaljayegi.

Raman looks at the photos and gets some flashes of his marriage with someone, not once but twice. He also sees flashes of somebody calling him Ravaan Kumar and him calling the person Jhansi ki Rani. Then, suddenly all blackouts and he is seen falling to the floor, while Ishita shouts "Raman!!!!

The Bhalla family rushes into the room to see Raman lying on the floor. Romi and Adi carried and put him on the bed. Then, Mrs. Bhalla started he melodrama saying, "Tum iss ghar par ayi ho, mera puttar ka jaan ka khaatra banagaya After saying this she began to curse and scold Ishita. They then called a doctor to see him.

The doctor, after checking Raman says that he just strained himself to remember something, so he collapsed. She then also told them not to give him any stress and told Ishita to take care of him, when Mrs. Bhalla interrupted and said "usko kyun bata rahi hai, mai uska maa hoon, mai uska kayal rakunga...aur us aurat ki vaja sai mere puttar iss halat mei hai. The doctor left.

In Ishra room, Ishita refused to go out, so Mrs. Bhalla and Simi stayed back stating they can't leave their son or brother with her. Ishita sat on the bed beside Raman holding his hand.

An hour later when both the mother and daughter left to have lunch, Ishita was alone with Raman. Then, came in Ruhi, Adi, Pihu, Romi and Mihika with food for Ishita, but she refused to eat saying that how can she eat when her husband is in this condition. While all were trying to persuade her to eat, they suddenly heard a sound saying "khalo kyun ithna nakre dekha rahi hoon, MADRASAN. Everyone were shocked with this statement. Raman then sat upright and said "Tum sabkho kyun aisi dekh rahi hoon jaisa main bhoot hoon. All shouted with happiness saying, "Bhai aap thek hogaya hai, "Jiju aapko yaad agaya hai, " Papa aapko sab kuch yaad agaya hai and only one person sat silently watching him while tears were streaming down her face. He was confused seeing all this reaction and asked, "Muhje kya yaad agaya? aur main kisko bulgaya tha, yaad karne ko? "Aur MADRASAN tum kyun rorahi ho, main toh tek hai...aur tum kyun khana nahi chayiye...kya tum tumhari weight ko kam karna chana hai...

Lisstening to all this, Ishita just moved closer to him and hugged him tightly saying, "Mera Ravaan Kumar ko, muhje yaad agaya hai... at the same time she kissed all over his face, forgetting that her children, Mihika and Romi are there. Raman stopped her saying " ab bas karo MADRASAN, kuch toh sharam karo, bache hai yaha...kya hogaya tumko...ithni besharam hogaya kya? Tum toh muhje besharam keh rahi thi...ab dekho, tum kya kar rahi ho. Ishita stopped and looked at him and smiled saying "Ravaan Kumar vapas agaya hai...

Raman who did not understand anything asked, "Main kahan gaya tha vapas ane keliye? Muhje kuch samaj nehi arahi hai...Somebody please tell me, what happened? He asked confused. Then, Romi told him everything that had happened in the past till the recent marriage that happened yesterday. After hearing everything, Raman looked very angry but he was also quite amused to hear the dramatic planning of his Jhansi ki Rani, brother and saali. He jokingly said "MADRASAN tum ktni baar muhje shadhi karoghi, pehli ruhi keliye, aur uske baat jab tum 7 saal ke baat ghar lautne se, aur ab ek aur baat... Hearing him saying this, Ishita just glared at him and said "Apko mere saathhi rehna hoga agle 7 janmam keliye, mujse aapko koi nahi alag karpayega. Seeing it getting a bit serious, Romi joked saying, "Mera bhai vapas agaya hai, ab muhje mar khane keliye tayar hona padega... listening to this all started to laugh and Raman smacked on him shoulder twice.

Later that day, Simi and Param were arrested while Mr. and Mrs. Bhalla got badly scolded by Raman. Then he took the decision to leave the house by the next day with his real family, the ones who stood with him during the memory loss fiasco. At night, Raman and Ishita spent some romantic time together in the confines of their bedroom. The next morning, Raman took Ishita, his children, Adi, Ruhi and Pihu, his brother, Romi and saali, Mihika, his in-laws' family and left to another apartment away from Mr and Mrs. Bhalla.

I hope all of you would like this story. I was getting fed up with Raman's memory loss fiasco, so came up with a version of what I would have liked to see in Yeh Hai Mohabbatein in the pass few episodes.

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superb os 👏
even I want this to happen in the show
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Nice OS .
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