Lafzo mein rang hai pyaar ka,last st on pg 27,Valentine's special - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
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SHOT 2

Raman was sitting holding the paper in his hand when someone tap his shoulder. He folded the letter in a jiffy and put it in his pocket.then he turned and saw ishita standing there.

Raman -arey, ishita tum?? Kya hua kuch kaam tha kya, did they called me or what?? He said trying to act normal when she nodded in no and said -just came to check on u. Tum thik ho naa.

Raman -haan, mujhe kya hua. I am fit and fine.

Ishita -i saw that director shouting on u. Tumhe bura lagaa naa.

Raman -haan, woh thoda jyada khadoos hai. But Maine bhi toh buri acting ki. So he was bit justified.

Ishita -aur Shagun, she didn't stand for u, she didn't stand by u. Uske liye bura nahi lagaa. She asked looking at him. He too looked at her amazed how well she knows him, or how well she can read his emotion. Both shared an intense eye lock which he broke away and said -nothing like that, it's just a drama nothing much. Waise bhi I don't think I can do all this. Mujhe padhai par dhyaan dena chahiye. I think acting is not my cup of tea. He said trying to be strong when she said -can we try??

Raman looked at her and asked-kya matlab??

Ishita -u r not a bad actor, Raman. Bas u need some rehearsal. Aur thode dialogues yaad kar loge then u will rock as romeo. She said boosting his confidence.

Raman look at her and said -u really think I can do it well. He asked all excited seeing her praising him.

Ishita smiled at his cuteness and said -ofcourse, u can. Infact u can act very well. Main keh rahi hoon tum sabse achche romeo banoge. She said smiling.

Raman -thank u, will u help me in rehearsing my dialogues.

Ishita -haan, of course. But agar Shagun ko bura lagaa toh.

Raman -so what, if she don't care about my feelings I too don't care.hum mil kar rehearse karenge. Tum meri help karna. We will not rehearse here. Hum Kahin aur rehearse karenge and then after two days I will surprise everyone. OK. He said all excited.

Ishita nodded smiling and said -ok.

Raman -ok, then let's go.

Ishita -kahan ??

Raman -hamare class mein, we will rehearse there.

Ishita -but mujhe toh sabko dialogue prompt karna hai.

Raman -oh, haan tumhare kaam bhi toh important hai. OK u go. He said with a sad face.

Ishita look at his face and said -tumse jyada important kuch nahi. Wait I just come. She said and ran in the hall. She told the same to mihika. Mihika promised her to take care of everything while she can go and spend time with Raman. Ishita thanked her and went to Raman happily while shagun and others were busy in rehearsing their roles.

Ishita ran to Raman and said -chalo ho gaya.

Raman -kya ho gaya??

Ishita -i gave my work to miku. She will do it for me. And I can help u in rehearsal.

Raman -thank u so much, u r doing so much for me. Don't know how to thank u.

Ishita -no need to thank, just play it part well. I will be happy if u r happy. She said and start walking while Raman look at her and thought -pyaar Shagun karti hai mujhse par nibha ishita rahi hai. She told me that my happiness will be most important for her but ishita is doing everything for my happiness. Samajh mein hi nahi aata what to do and how to feel. I always felt good with ishita but said yes to Shagun seeing her true love for me, but now I have start feeling suffocated being in relationship with her. Uska har samay baby baby karte rehna, I feel irritated by it. Hamesha uski tareef karna, I don't like it. She always disturb me while studying but still I didnt broke up with her thinking may be I am over reacting but, he was lost in his thoughts when he heard ishita saying, chalna nahi hai, chalo.

Raman looked at her lost in his thoughts when she signalled him again to come with her. He nodded and followed her to their class.

Soon ishra were in class, Raman start saying the dialogue. Ishita was looking at him with a serious face trying to hold her laughter but when he look at her and asked -hows it??she burst into laughter and said -omg raman, it was very bad. Kitna bura hai yeh. She was saying and laughing while his face fall hearing this.

Raman -maine toh kaha tha that I can't do it properly, then also u insisted me and now u r making fun of me. U r so bad. He said making a baby face.

Ishita -sorry sorry, really sorry. I shouldn't laugh but really raman it was just so bad. OK wait, let do it another way.pehle main karti hoon,u see it properly .then u will get into the role and then u can rehearse. OK. She said to which Raman nodded.

She start saying the dialogue while he was just looking at her. At first he was seeing her acting but slowly his eyes goes on her face and he started seeing her face thourougly. He was looking and thinking how beautiful she is, her beautiful face, her big eyes, hey cute nose and her naughty smile. He was busy in admiring her while she stopped feeling his gaze. She looked at him, he was also looking at her. He walked to her and hold her hand. She gulped her saliva with his touch while he bend on his knees. Ishita was looking at him, he was also looking at her and start saying the dialogue looking deep into her eyes. Ishita was lost in his words when he completed the dialogue and said -hows it now??

Ishita realised he was saying just dialogues ,she withdraw her hand and said looking away -bravo, it was really fabulous raman. I never knew that u will learn it so soon. Bahut achchi acting ki tumne. She said wiping the cores of her eyes clapping for him while he got happy seeing her praising him so much.

He smiled and said -thank u so much, ab bas achche se pura drama rehearse kar loon, then I will be ready for the drama.

Ishita looked at him and said -yes, u will be ready to become Shagun's romeo, ready to propose her down on ur knees in front of everyone. It will be so great. She said while hurt was evident from her voice. He raised his head to look at her while she turned not to show her tears and said -chalo, I am sitting. U start rehearsing, I will tell u the dialogues where ever u will fumble. She said trying to sound normal while Raman could feel variation in her voice like she is hurt and may be crying.

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

Ps-thanks for 180+ likes in a day, hoping for such response again. Will updt it tomorrow.

Edited by cutieruhi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Nice update.
Raman felt suffocated with Shaggy.
Hope he got to know about her true face soon.
And broke up with her.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Nice update..raman doesnt like shagun...Hope he realizes..Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful ishralicious update di
Raman was feeling suffocated with shagun
Ishita encouraged him
He felt more peace being with ishita
She was really hurt and heartbroken
Lets see what happens next
Cont soon di
Ty 4 d pm too😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome chappy Di
Update soon Di
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy Di

Update soon Di


Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update!!
Loved it.
Ishu motivated Raman n asked him to rehearse with her..
Raman got happy when she said his happiness is most important to her..
He is feeling suffocated with Shagun..
Loved d way he was admiring her when she was making him practice..
Ishu was hurt n heartbroken n he noticed her pain..
Just hope he comes to know about her feelings for him soon..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm dii:)
Edited by Srivalli.t - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome...
Raman could feel ishitas hurt
Update soon
Thank you for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Super awesome sweet update di
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by sharda_123 - 7 years ago

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