Ishra OS || Humari Adhuri Kahani || updated || jan/10

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Posted: 7 years ago
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hi friends

I am here with one shot on current yhm track after seeing the recent promo about raman health getting critical i cant stop myself from penning this down... I have no hopes from cvs because they will foucs more on drama not on ishra pain...

Enjoy reading

Ishra One Shot || Humari Adhoori Kahani ||

Simmi shouting and accusing ishita: dekha bhai... I told you na this ishita is too clever she was behind all this she wants to ruin us... Kiyon ishita thand nahe pari mujhse meri beti ko cheen kar...

Ishita: mein nahe... Trust me...i didn't know anything...

She walsk towards the person and angrily asks: who are you?? Why you are lying... I dont even know you... Sach bolo...

Simmi: bus kar ishita... Aur kitna jhoot bolygi...

Ishita: raman... Why i will do anything like this...

Raman was too shocked to react.. He was just looking at ishita... His trance was broken by simmi who shook him and says: bhai... Sun rahy ho ap...

Ishita looks at each family member but none spoke in her favor... She looks at raman straight into his eyes... Both shares an eyelock..

Simmi comes forward and pushes ishita and says: just get lost... Ishita was about to loose her balance adi and ruhi comes forward and holds their ishimaa...

His hands start shivering, he start having difficulty in breathing he tries to balance himself but couldn't as he feels he is loosing control... Vision start getting blur and he falls on ground whike white foam start coming out of his mouth...

Romi shouts: bhai... All looks shocked seeing raman in this state... He was shivering... His body start getting cold while his face gets paled...

Ishita: raman... She shouts and rushes towards raman taking his head in her lap she caresses his hairs and cries...

Ishita: raman... Open your eyes... Please... Open your eyes..

Romi: bhabhi... Bhai condition is getting worse we should take him hospital...

Ishita nods and worriedly says: jaldi... Jaldi doctor kay pass lay kar chalte hain..

Romi adi and mani took raman and all drives towards hospital... Ishita was getting worried as raman was not responding.. She shouts at romi: kitna slow chala rahy ho drive fast...

Romi looks at his bhabhi who was totally devastated holding raman close... He felt bad seeing his bhai and bhai in this condition he quickly send prayer for raman getting alright and everything gets fine...

Soon they reaches hospital... Doctor seeing raman condition takes him for treatment... Ishita was crying looking at the stretcher at which raman was being carried...

Ishita closes her eyes and says: murugan please mere raman ko kuch mat hone dena... I cant loose him...

She was crying and continuously praying for raman when simmi again start her drama...: why you are here... Its because of you only that raman bhai is in this condition...

Ishita ignores simmi talks as her sole concentration was on raman...

Simmi: papa jee i am telling you jab tak ye bhai ki zindagi mein rahegi bhai kabhi khush nahe hongay... Ye sab iski wajah say hai... Bola hai bhai pehlh hi depression mein hain per ye bhai ko itna stress deti dekha na apne kiya halat kardi isne...

Mr bhalla walks towards ishita and holds her hands and start dragging her outside.. She struggles and says: papa jee.. Raman needs me.. I will not leave my raman like this...

Mr bhalla: i cant lose my son ishita just go away from his life... Jab tu nahe thi jaisa bhi tha jee to raha tha na.. Ab dekh kiya haal hai uska...

Ishita shockingly looks at the man standing in front of him who was acusing her for raman state...

Mr bhalla: simmi theek kehti hai.. Tu chali jayegi to raman theek hojayega...

Ishita: i will not go anywhere... I am his wife i have full right to be with raman.. You cant do this...

Mr bhalla: jab raman tujhe nahe pehchanta to kiyon...

Ishita doesn't let mr bhalla complete his sentence and says: he will remember me one day papa jee... Please let me be with him... I beg you... She folds her hands and pleads to the heartless man...

Adi: dadu ap ishimaa kay saath aisa kaise kar sakty hain...

Mr bhalla: tu chup kar... Ishita chali ja yahan say...param ise bol yahan say chala jaye...

Param comes and smirk at ishita and says: ishita jee will you leave on your own or i... He forward his hand to touch her but adi comes and holds ishita... And says: chalo ishimaa...

Adi walks away with his mother.. Ishita was just dragging her feet she was turning back looking for raman that he will come on his feets and console her... She was crying remembering their past beautiful moment and their new memories they have created in budapest their Christmas celebration and their new year celebration...

Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

She cries over her fate that how every time they have to get separated due to their foolishness or due to the circumstances... Why they cant be together why they cant share their life with each other having so much love...the moments they spent together is the only solace she have...

Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani..

Adi makes ishita sits outside the hospital on bench.. He cups his mother face and says: ishimaa...

Ishita breaks down and start ceying loudly...adi hugs his mother and consoles her...

Ishita: adi... Raman... He will get fine na..

Adi: ishima dont worry papa jaldi theek hojaingay...

Ishita: pakka... She wanta assurance that her raman will be with her all safe and sound...

Adi nods...

Ishita: adi... Go and be with your papa...

Adi: no ishimaa... How can i leave yoi here...

Ishita: no adi... Go... Your papa needs you... Tum muje batate rehana sab...

Adi: ishimaa..

Ishita: please..

Adi nods and leaves to see his papa while ishita hides her face in her palms and cries... She only wants him... She has return from death for him only... She wants to spend the rest of her life with his... But he was not with him...

Ishita: raman jaldi theek hojao... Ap muje bhool gaye per mere samne to thy... Mujse larty mujpe taunt karty... Why you are making your ishita alone... Mein kaise jeeongi raman...she cries..

She start waiting for any news regarding raman state...

Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye

Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan

Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani..

Hospital

All were tensely waiting for doctor to come and tell about raman state... Param and simmi were faking their concern for raman...

Doctor comes out adi ruhi runs to doctor and says: doctor... Papa kaise hain...

Doctor looks at adiru and shook his head and says: he is in very critical condition... We have found a very dangerous drug in his blood... The continuous usage of the drug has made his internal system all weak...

Ruhi: but papa has stopped taking those medicine...

Doctor: i dont think so... He is taking it...

Adi: he will get fine na...

Doctor: i dont want to give any false hopes...

Listening to doctor both the kids stumbles romi holds them and asks: what... No... Please save him...

Doctor: we are trying our level best he is not responding to any treatment.. His pulse rate is too much high.. Situation is getting out of control... Keep praying...doctor leaves...

Adiru cries: chachu... Papa...

Romi: adi.. Ruhi... Bhai theek ho jaingay...

Adi: chachu... Ishimaa.. She is outside... What will I answer to her...

Ruhi: chachu papa ko bolo na uthain...

Romi: shush.. Bachy... He will get fine..

Adi: chachu ap hi ishima ko bula lo aur bata do sab.. I cant face her... Wo toot jaingi...

Romi nods...

Simmi : romi tu phr us aurat ko lene ja raha hai...

Romi: mrs param khurana.. Shut up... And dont your dare to say anything to bhabhi.. I will not spare you...

Romi warns simmi and goes outside to see ishita...he sees ishita walking to and fro in tension...

Romi: bhabhi...

Ishita: romi... Raman ko hosh agaya..

Romi: bhabhi come lets go inside...

Ishita: simmi...

Romi: koi kuch nahe kahega... Ap bhai say nahe milogay...

Ishita smiles through tears and nods...

Inside hospital

Romi ishita comes there and gets shocked to see adiruhi crying while doctor was saying: drastically his pulse is dropping... Bus kuch samay hi hai unke pass we tried but nothing worked... You all can meet him

Ishita: no... No... No...she shouts and runs towards ward...all follows her behind..

Ishita sees raman laying while wires and tubes were attached to his body... She sits beside her and touches his hands.. Her one touch makes his heart beat fast... Doctor looks surprisingly at them...

Ishita couldn't be able to call his name she start crying uncontrollably... Making raman finger move...doctor looks astonished...

Doctor: he is responding... Continue...

Listening to doctor ishita wipes her tears and says: raman...

He takes a sharp breath... Doctor signs ishita to continue... Romi adi ruhi were happy that raman is responding...

Ishita: ankhain nahe khoolo gay raman... Mere liye apni ishita kay liye...she cries... Unable to hold more she hugs raman and says: i love you raman... She was so close to him hugging him closely... His pulse start getting normal his vital signs also start responding normally... Doctor shows thumbs up to the family and says: he is alright...

Ishita looks at raman and caresses his face and says: muje pata tha raman ap muje kabhi nahe choor kay jaogay... Aur kaise jate apki jkr apko kahin jane hi nahe deti.. Ab ankhain khool lo aik baar...

Pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega

Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..

His eyelid start moving... She caresses his hairs he slowly opens his eyes and sees ishita so close to him... Ishita smiles widely while tears of happiness start flowing from her eyes seeing her raman fine...

Raman: miss ishita... He says with much difficulty

Her smile vanish as reality hits her that she is only an investor and neighbor for him.. He doesnt remember her as his wife...

Hamari adhuri kahani... Hamari adhuri kahani

She closes her eyes and says: ap theek ho... Raman nods... Ishita moves back while he gets surrounded by his so called family while his eyes never left her as she stands in one corner looking at him

Hamari adhuri kahani.. Humari adhuri kahani...

That's it my dear friends i really hope that you all will like it... Waiting for your comments do share your views regarding this one shot and dont forget to hit like also...

Love you

Riddi
Edited by ishrasoul - 7 years ago

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cooldilkaur thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Awesome os di
Loved it totally
Ty 4 d pm too
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Posted: 7 years ago
#3
Awesome os...
Thank u for sharing this.
sanjana_nanda thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
Superb os ...
Plz update epilogue
Thank you for the pm
ishrasoul thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjana_nanda

Superb os ...

Plz update epilogue
Thank you for the pm

Thanks dear
Glad you like it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice os riddi
Beautifully written
So emotional and heart wrenching
Raman condition was so bad and seeing him like this ishita condition was no less
She was in so vulnerable condition
Every family member is pathetic i don't even want to talk about them
And sorry riddi but i can't even connect to adi ruhi especially with ruhi after today's episode
I m really sorry for that
I can only connect with ishra and pihu
At last ishita love brought back raman's life
But again reality hit her hard
For raman she is just ms ishita not his Madrasan

And you are right riddi cvs sirf aur sirf drama dikhayenge show mein

But thanks a lot for this
Really beautiful
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
Awesome os Di
Plz make him remember her

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome os Di

Plz make him remember her


Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
awesome mind blowing fantastic fabulous

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