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Hey! So I passed my exam, thank you all for the lovely wishes they helped so much and I got a grade better than I expected.
This is dedicated to the person who asked me to write on Raman and Ishita's current situation.
I hope it depicts their emotions properly.

Forever-

The songs is Total Eclipse Of The Heart, I thought it was quite relatable to Ishita and Raman's current situation. Song lyrics are in bold, do let me know your thoughts

Ishita stood behind Raman. He was facing away from her, she felt sick.
She wanted so much to be wrapped in his embrace once more.

Every step he took away from her physically was like another step out of her life
It was becoming hard to breathe as she watched him talk to Simmi.

She couldnt speak for fear of alerting Raman that she was crying, but her heart was calling out his name.
For once she just wanted it to be easy

Just turn around. Turn around.

Like she had spoke it aloud, he turned, finally facing her


Turnaround, every now and then I get a little bit lonely
And you're never coming round
Turnaround, every now and then I get a little bit tired
Of listening to the sound of my tears
Turnaround, every now and then I get a little bit nervous
That the best of all the years have gone by
Turnaround, every now and then I get a little bit terrified
And then I see the look in your eyes
Turnaround bright eyes, but every now and then I fall apart
Turnaround bright eyes, every now and then I fall apart


Raman stepped closer to Ishita's crying figure
"Now whats wrong"
She wanted to touch him but she was so scared he would push her away

And then she was in his arms.
Nothing mattered more than his body against hers

She needed Raman to understand her plight, to just for once see how hurt she was and how much she needed her Raman.


And she knew forever was what you made of it
"Let tonight be our forever please" she whispered
Raman had no idea what was happening, but like he needed to comfort her, his body had a mind of its own

His arms raising and holding her

And I need you now tonight
And I need you more than ever
And if you only hold me tight
We'll be holding on forever
And we'll only be making it right
'Cause we'll never be wrong together
We can take it to the end of the line
Your love is like a shadow on me all of the time (all of the time)
I don't know what to do and I'm always in the dark
We're living in a powder keg and giving off sparks
I really need you tonight
Forever's gonna start tonight
Forever's gonna start tonight


Raman's arms around her were the safety she needed from the negativity
And even if only in this moment

He was hers again, but she would always be his
Digging her nose into his neck she took in his smell

You always remembered how the ones you loved smelt
It was the scent you associated with home

Once upon a time I was falling in love
But now I'm only falling apart
And there's nothing I can do
A total eclipse of the heart
Once upon a time there was light in my life
But now there's only love in the dark
Nothing I can say
A total eclipse of the heart


Wiping her tears she pulled away
She was so close to just giving up

She was clueless how to win this fight
Her hand squeezed his
It was a promise

To love him for as long as she breathed, she would be his but she couldn't fight like this anymore

She turned to walk away but halted


Turnaround bright eyes, every now and then I fall apart
Turnaround bright eyes, every now and then I fall apart

Raman wasnt sure why he felt so incomplete without Ishita in his arms

Why was it that when she turned away
It felt like the end
The end of Ishita in his life

And I need you now tonight (and I need you now)
And I need you more than ever
And if you only hold me tight (and if you only)
We'll be holding on forever
And we'll only be making it right ('cause we'll never be wrong)
'Cause we'll never be wrong together
We can take it to the end of the line
Your love is like a shadow on me all of the time (all of the time)
I don't know what to do and I'm always in the dark
We're living in a powder keg and giving off sparks
I really need you tonight
Forever's gonna start tonight
Forever's gonna start tonight



He wasnt sure what he felt for Ishita
But his heart hurt as her shoulders shook

"I cant look at you and say this and you wont believe me but I am your wife, your Ishita, your madrasan, the mother of your children, you have 3; Adi, Ruhi and Pihu"

She was right, he didnt believe her

But his heart
Oh his heart believed her
More than anything


Once upon a time I was falling in love
But now I'm only falling apart
And there's nothing I can say
A total eclipse of the heart
A total eclipse of the heart
A total eclipse of the heart
Turn around bright eyes


With that she walked away
Further and further away from the man she loved and would always love

Pausing at the door, she turned to face him one last time
Her face tear streaked

Taking him in, she would savour this image of him
It would stay with her forever

Because forever could be for as long as you wanted it to be
And in these last moments as she stepped outside the door

She knew, that Raman would stay with her forever
If not in person, than in spirit
Always

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh wow such an emotional OS!!
Both Raman and Ishita's thoughts captured superbly!!!
Ishita knows she loves him and will do so forever!!
He is feeling empty as she walks away!!!
His mind does not believe her but his heart does!!!
Ishra's final look at each other!!!
A heartbreaking OS!!

Please continue with more OSs!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nafnaf

Oh wow such an emotional OS!!
Both Raman and Ishita's thoughts captured superbly!!!
Ishita knows she loves him and will do so forever!!
He is feeling empty as she walks away!!!
His mind does not believe her but his heart does!!!
Ishra's final look at each other!!!
A heartbreaking OS!!

Please continue with more OSs!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!

Hey thank you!
Im so glad you like it!
No problem:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations...
Emotional OS...
Both couldn't voice out their real feelings...
They were incomplete without each other...
beautifully written...
Thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: myangels

Congratulations...

Emotional OS...
Both couldn't voice out their real feelings...
They were incomplete without each other...
beautifully written...
Thank u...

Hey thank you, glad you liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey thank you

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