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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Intetesting dear
Bit a bit confused about the characters..
Will read the part soon dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
a very interesting part
I liked the pihu ishu part
it was lovely
so raman knows all the plans of Nikhil and param
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Part 2

Ishu opened her eyes feeling sunrays on her face. She opened her eyes and first thing that saw was her husband's milky chest. She gently pecked him and moved little upward. She looked his face which had a simple and satisfied smile. She gently waved his hair gently and his smile just got wider. She smiled and said softly "I m sorry Raman. I just wanted some time. Aur when you didnt even tried to listen then helping me; I was frustated. I m sry Raman. I know I hurted you but trust me I was hurt when you didnt supported me as always. I m sorry." and she moved to washroom nafter slipping on her dress which was nearly torn. She blushed remembering how Raman nearly ripped it and moved to washroom.
Raman opened his eyes after listening the washroom door being clicked. He rested his back on bedrest.
"I know maine bohot galti ki hai. To be frank bohot galat kiya hai tere saath; but bohot pyar karta hu tujse. I have always kept you behind all. Pehle Ruhi ke liye saadhi ki; Adi ke liya dur kiya; sab ke liye hurt kiya; bache ke liya hurt kiya; Ruhi ka accussion lagaya. Pata nahi jaan kya kya kiya hai jaan but ab sab tere liye jaan teri khusi ki liye; sirf teri khusi ke liye; meri jaan; meri madrasaan." she ruffled his hair and joined her in washroom not that she minded.
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Romi looked at the sleeping beauty looking even more beautiful with his marks; he slightly pecked her hair promising to himself that he would do anything to keep this smile in her lips.
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Adi pulled Aliya more to himself and lsicth off the AC feeling her shiver. He snuggled more to her to keep her comfortable. "Love you aloo" he whispered to her hair .
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Ishra were almost ready when Pihu running shouting came in thier room and Romi and Adi followed her and jumped on thier bed. They were tickling; doing pillow fight all sort of things. Ishra were just shocked. One second ago it was only them teasing each other and now their room looked like battlefield not from their passionate night but their naughty brother/BIL and kids. Soon Aliya and Mihika also came inside and made a grumpy face.
Finally those three lied on bed and room turned silent again.
"Ye yaha bhi suru ho gaye. Maine hamara room kitne mushkil se settle kiya tha and they made everything up down." Mihika said making sad face.
"Right chitti. Aur mera tho aur bhi kharab hai" Aliya said with a grumpy face.
"wo hamara bhi room hai." both Romi and Adi shouted at same time making Pihu and Ishita close her ears while Aliya and Mihika were super angry. They were about to fight again when Raman spoke making them all slient.
"But ye mera room hai. And guys knock kara siko." he said; making Adi and Romi smirked while Pihu made cute face.
She signalled Aliya to pick her up and and make her move toward her parents.
"Par mei tho apki baby hu na so mai tho aasakti hu" she said making all smile "and mujhe late ho raha hai. Bye" she pecked both Ishra's cheek and ran from there after Aliya put her down. As soon as Pihu wnt out Ishra felt someone kissing their cheel and Adi ran with Aliya saying "Mai bhi". And Ishu just shook her head only to see a smirking Romi and Mihika. Romi said; "Waise kya kar rahe the dono jo privacy chaheye." "Aur nahi tho kya; knock karo and all ha." said Mihika and Ishita just turned red remembering their passionate night. Raman snaked his hands around her waist pulling Ishita close to him. "Meri biwi; mera room; meri marzi" kissing her forhead slightly. And with that Rohika also left their room saying they are being more shameless with their increasing age.
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Ruhi looked at her parents sneeking from the door. "Ap dono ne tho mere liye saadhi ki thi mere liya saath aaye the na? Then why are you loving all expect me. Ap dono apni Ruhi kaise bhul sakte ho? Nikhil sahi keheta hai. Ab app dono mujhse kam pyar karte ho. You love Adi bhaiya and Pihu(with hatered) more aur ab tho aap dono ki nai beti bhi aayi Aliya" and she moved from there muttering how right Nikhil is.
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Raman smiled feeling her blush.
"They are so happy na; jaan." and Ishita just hmmed.
"I m gonna do sth jaan. To keep this smile of their face. To keep your this smile. Tum mera saath dogi. I need your support Ishita. You trust me right?" he asked taking her hands on his. Ishita looked at him and whispered "I trust you; Raman." and hugged him tight thinking "Mai thak gayi hu Raman sabke liye ladte ladte. I always wanted and someone for me. Sirf mere liya. When you are willing to do sth for me; my smile. Mai aapko kabhi nahi rokungi" and both of them just stay in the hug before moving out of the room to face all the happenings.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Hi, everyone. Me back again with new part. Hope aap logo ko acha laga.
Maine last time two part post kiye the

Part 1(a)
Part 1 (b)
But I think all didnt read. I exactly dont know how any readers I have in this story so pls do like and comment taki mujhe idea ho ki how many want to read it. Anyone who missed them can catch up and who want pms pls buddy me.
Bye till next time.

Love you all;
Gia
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Awesome update dear
Loved ishra scenes
Ishradipi scene was cute
Ruhi.. its better I don't say anything about her
She is so disgusting
Update soon dear
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Hi...dear
Its lovely
I think I had given u comments early
But if not
Its awesome
Ishu manofy raman
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Nice update.
Ishra enjoying their life.
And ruhi what to say about him.
Loved the happy family.
Thanks for pm
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Awesome update !!
Loved it.
Loved ishra moments.
Pihu is so cute..
Loved family cute masti moments.
N this Ruhi is disgusting..she feels her parents don't love her now..she is totally got blind in that nikil pyaar..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Lovely update
Ishra romance was nice
Pihu is so cute even Adi and romi became a kid like pihu
Mihika and romi were teasing ishra
Ruhi is jealous seeing adihu getting all the love from ishra
Ishra talk was nice
Pls update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
cute update
ishra are so happy
along with romika and Adi alia
pihu Adi alia kissed ishra and went that is so cute
romika were teasing them
continue soon

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