It was all my fault(updated part 3) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
i like adi n Aliya than Adi n Roshni..
Plz continue soon dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Thanks for clearing it gia .
But like you I too is hating this and cannot tolerate rukhil so I m away from this .
Sorry ,but I cannot read anything in current track .
Please understand.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Sorry gia but I will not read any ruhil story
Hope u understand I just hate them
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
it's nice start
Adi alia is nice but I'm mainly concerned about ishra
hope it's not a rukhil story otherwise I don't want to read it
they are plain irritating and I just hate them so can't bear it
plz continue soon
waiting for ishra parts
Edited by DikshaN - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi! I m back. Ok coming to the point I m making some change on plot kyuji itna raita mei tho nahi samel sakti. And the current track of story:-
Ishita's outbrust, Rukil's engagement, and Raman went out. Pooja is good. No Pooja and Romi scenes. Pihu and Ananya are in school they dont know about Rukil engagement. Adi-Aliaya went to long drive to fresh up. Ladies are in kitchen except our two highnesses who are in their room.(Ya Simmi and Ruhi) and there Prince charmings are gone out.
PART 1

Pihu enter inside the house crying. All ran to her. Toshiji was first to reach and she hugged her claiming her down. Ishita was about to hug her but when Pihu spoke "Mumma" and her hand stopped itself. She dont know why but she wasnt over the fact that her daughter isnt her; not from now but from the start. She tried to consell her heart but she just couldnt so she moved to kitchen making an excuse of calling Sagun.
This whole scene was witnessed by Raman. He just came back but couldnt muster the courage to meet her eyes. The way she pulled her hands back; the way her expression changed from concern to hurt to concern and hurt; his heart pained everyway possible because he knew he was the reason for this.
Pihu again cried saying "Mumma" and began to look here and there and ran to kitchen. Ishita faked her smile rubbing her tears and turn toward her showing her phone; "I m calling your Mumma baba. Ap itna kyu ro rahe ho?" but a wave of emotions ran through out her system when Pihu hugged her legs saying "Mumma". Her legs just went weak so much like she couldnt handle her weight and she just fell on her knees hugging crying Pihu consoling her. Slowly Pihu's cries lessen and Ishu got the courage to ask the question that was bothering her so much.
"Ap kyu ro rahe the?" and Pihu almost cried again but Ishita somehow controlled her.
"Wooo *hiccup* wooo *hiccup* Ritu's mother left her *hiccup* aur aur *hiccup* unhone bola ki ab Ritu unnhe aunty bole. Maine bhi to aap ko aunty bola aur mai to apko MUMMA bhi nahi bolti na; tho kya aap mujhe chodke chale jawoge?" she said innocently explaining everything to her.
"Kabhi nahi jaungi; never." Ishita whispered hugging her tight to herself. She picked her up settling her on her hip and she showed her various foods made by them distracting her. And soon others to joined them and sth hit Ishita's head and she spoke; "Pppiiihhhuuu".
Pihu lookes with her most innocent face thinking all the possible masties she had done but nth came on her mind.
"Where is ur bag; baby?" she asked folding her hand. Pihu slapped her forhead with her plam and ran shouting; "Ma ananya ko apne bag ke saath bul gai" and all laughed seeing all sweaty Ananya glaring Pihu and Pihu now and then muttering sorry doing quick up and downs.
Raman looked at the laughing Ishita; she looked ethernal; Mihika was laughing looking tensionfree and kids were happy. This is family and he wouldnt let anyone destroy this family; not anyone; not even Ruhi. And thinking sth he went inside Ruhi's room where even Simmi was present.
*
Adi parted from the kiss. "Damn this women" he muttered looking at Aliya who was smiling closing her eyes while she rested her head on the seat on his car.
"Thanks for doing this for me Aliya. Gharme" she silenced him putting her finger on his lips.
She remembered how Ishita handeled her car keys whispering to cheer his mood up and her too.
"Pls enjoy this moment; Adi." she said slungging closer to him.
"Mujhe kabhi kabhi lagta hai kash mei ek supergirl hoti." chuckling loud so did Adi.
"Kyu kya karti?" Adi asked playing with her hair. He really loved her hair; soft and silky just like his Ishima's hair.
"Amma; Papa; Chitti; Chachu and Pihu ko leke udd jati. Kahi dur. Where sirf hum ho aur hamhari khusiya."
"And what about me." Adi asked with pout.
"Agar mei Supargirl hungi to you will be superman ofcourse" she said with fake serious tone.
"Smart aloo" Adi said starting the car making Aliya pout.
They were going back home in comfortable silence but looking at Adi's face she knew she had placed her first brick on correct place and with time she will put other too. Making a good house she will live there with him and their family; enough of the family drama. She want a happy family and she deserve that so does her amma and chitti. She smiled hugging Adi side ways making Adi smile.
*
It was dinner time and everyone was silently eating. Ishita looked at Raman whose eyes were puffy; Adi who was little better and saw Mihika looking at tried looking Romi.
Continued in next page. Pls like both parts and comment; if you want me to continue guys:-
Part 1(b)
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Continued from above post
Romi was damn tried because of the work pressure and the problems going on home. And he was very frustated that Mihika wasnt able spend much time with him. He may sound selfish but he need some time with his wife; period. He was groaning to himself when he felt her hand on his shoulder massaging softly and a smile made his way itself. And looking at the beauty in black see through dress he knew he is gonna be tired tomrrow too but for whole new reason.
*
Raman was looking at the dark pleasant night. It looked clam and very nice. Maybe because he knows now what he is gonna do is gonna make him happy; his family happy.
Suddenly he felt someone's hug from back and he knew very well who it was.
He tried to unclasped her hand when she whishpered in a sensuous tone; "I m sorry; Raman." He very well know why it was for but he think to enjoy the whole manofy session because he gets very less time with her nowadays and he is gonna enjoy this time.
He turned towards their bed then he realised the dimmed light of the room. He felt her licking his earlobe and he crushed himself because it was a huge turn on.
"Sssttooppp" he whishpered and himself was uncertain if she heard or not. Ishita smirked listening his tone; she knew his all weakness afterall. And in a swift of moment; she was pinned on the bed while he was looking at her with lust; passion; love and admiration.
"Raman I m sorry for" but he silenced her with his kiss. He knew what she wanted to say but he didnt want to listen. When they are in so much problems; her doing this much for his happiness mean a lot to him.
He glanced down her body and "f***" word just left his mouth looking the short black dress. And the desire just went higher and higher so did her face with red colour.
He bend down to open the knot with teeth causing the stars to shy away and hide behind the clouds.
*
Up in the sky, Gia was hiding behind the cloud and moving behind and she got collide with a figure.
She saw angry Moon Goodess looking at her. She make a scraed face causing the clouds to be black.
"When will you understand Gia, you should control your emotions baby. Your emotions cause the night nature." She was saying other things also when Gia try to peep what the couples were doing. And saw Raman pecking the head of sleeping Ishita on her head and she blused thinking of someone for her too. She felt someone's glare and saw Moon Goddess looking at her. She was very embarassed so just ran with a red face while Moon Goddess just shook her head looking her naughtiest daughter.
*
Back in the earth
Raman looked at sleeping Ishita who was sleeping with a contented smile. He looked outside and a saw a shooting star. Red star was looking very beautiful and he just did what Pihu would always. He closed his eyes and whished; "Pls make my family happy shooting star."
The convo of Param and Nikhil's convo that he heard and Ruhi and Simmi's response came on his mind.
[Nikhil; Ruhi; Param; Simmi]
"Ek baar yeh saadhi ho jaye tab uss Mr. Bhalla ko bataunga. I will take my revenge through his daughter;"
"Pls Papa! Nikhil loves me. And he is over this. Aap aur Ishima kahani banana baad karo";
"Yaar jab tumhari saadi ho jaye gi tab to Ruhi ke shares bhi tumhare ho jayenge aur Simmi ke mere. We will show that Raman what he has done;
"Ohh pls Bhai! Paramji to tujhe galat hi lagenge. Par wo yese nahi hai. He loves Ruhi so he is supporting them aur mai bhi karungi. Ap tho uss Ishita ke chakar me apni bacchi ki khusi nahi dekh rahe ho".
He looked at Ishita's happy face and slept pulling her to himself.
Sorry ki Pihu's story didnt went good as I thought and being late for the update.
Ok this is how this ff is gonna be. Hoping for the honest reply.
I know I dont have many readers like in other one so I need everyone who want to read to like and comment. And who dont wanna read they are free and I respect them so pls dont hesistate. And if I get good response I will write long updates. And pls like both parts who ever want to read these types of long part otherwise I will thimk that I should update short one only.

P.S I know that star idea was very very very bad but it just came in my mind so penned it down.
Love you all;
Gia


Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Seems interesting
Loved pihu calling Ishita mumma
Adi aliya, romi Mihika and of course Ishra scenes were awesome
Loved that gia moon part.. it was cute😊
As always simmi param ruhi and nikil uncle are disgusting
Update soon
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Awesome update
Ishu is hurt as she has no right on pihu
While Raman was guilty
Pihu ask ishu that she will never leave her na
Adi Superman n Aliya Supergirl
Update soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Awesome update
Ishu manofy Raman
Raman was thinking about ruhi nikil simmi n param
Update soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Awesome update gia...
Loved ishra part..
Pihu ask her if she will not leave her..
Nikhil & param as usual kaminey..
Thx for pm..

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