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Posted: 7 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: DikshaN

waiting for your next update


Thanks and its in the way.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sreeu12345

Waiting for your update


Thanks its in the way.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
Hi! I m back. Lets start first.
Part 1

He looked her body from up to down but didnt find any switch. He then remember how the scientist used to start Chitti. He pressed his forefinger on the left side of her forhead. And feeling some she opened her eyes. She was blinking looking at him while Raman was very excited.
"Tumhara naam kya hai?" Raman asked her eagerly.
And she softly said "Ichu"
*
Ishita looked at her mother who was busy choosing some doll for Sagun. She met her at school at she wasnt even her friend why should she attain her birthday party. She was very tired because of travelling here and there so she just stood beside a cupboard leaning a plank and looking the toys. She didnt realise when her eyes get closed. She opened her eyes feeling something cold on forehead and saw a totally strange boy. She blinked her eyes not understanding why is he happy?
"Tumhara naam kya hai?" he asked.
"Ichu" just slipped from her mouth. She tried to looked her mouth not understand why she couldnt pronounce her name correctly.
*
Raman looked at her while she was looking her lips pouting her pink lips. He really found it amusing.
"Hi! I m Raman Kumar Bhalla." he said proudly like his father used to say and put his hand froward.
While Ishita just opened her mouth to say sth but then looked shocked. Though Raman wasnt happy by her not shaking hands but he was more curious to know why is she so shocked.
"Kya hua?" he asked.
She wishpered, "Ittna lamba naaam!" she pouted "Main laman bulau?" she said tilting her head. Raman was just looking her face. He was the youngest in family and he was finding that cute cute face and emotions of her face very amusing. She looked ... he dont know what but he liked looking her.
"Bollooo na." she said pulling his coat's seevel.
"Call be Raman; Ichu." he said thinking thats only her name like it was chitti in movie sweet and simple.
"Laman; ichu nahi iiccchhuuu" she said.
"Arree baba ... Chodo" he said not wanting to scare her.
"Tum kaise ho?" he said ruffling his hair not knowing any thing to ask. He pout looking around for his grandma so that he could take her home.
"Achi hu." she said rubbing the right side of the forhead.
"Kya hua?" he said taking her snall face on his small hand.
"dukhh laha hai" she said and her eyes become glassy.
"Tum ro sakti ho?" Raman said amusingly looking her eyes.
Ishita's eyes became glossy remembering how Sagun pulled her hair saying clybaby as she entered the room with glossy eyes. She just cried remembering that; "uucchh uucchh na *hiccup* hale tana" and was crying. Raman pulled her to him not knowing what to do so he just did what his instict told him to and pulled her to him though he didnt understood anything. He rubbed her tears by his thumbs and kissed her forehead repeating what father does to her mother. He looked here and there to find sth to sit. He saw a dice seat and pulled her to him and made her sit on his lap not before her cries subsided.
"Ab batao kya hua?" Raman asked to her.
Her eyes began to get glassy again.
He took her hands on him and said "shhh. Bina rohe kaho baba." he said and Ishita nodded. "Tho tum batao kya hua; ok? Main Dadi se kehke usse punish karun ga." he said.
"Aap punich kaloge?" she asked. Though he was a stranger she felt good talking with him and her Mumma had teach her to make friends in this new city so she talked to Raman sry sry Laman and when he asked for her pain; rubbed her eyes and talked to punish Sagun he just stole her heart without knowledge of any of them.
"Hmmm" Raman said.
Ishita put her head on his chest over his shirt as she was very tired from moving whole day(even if its in car) and crying.
"Aaj na me jab school gayi ..."
"tum school jati ho?" Raman asked cutting her as he found it quite unusual. She dont need to right afterall she will know everything Raman thought.
"Aaj fisth day tha." she said casually leaning to him more as she found his soft cotton cloth really comfortable.
"ha tho jab me clathloom mei gai tho tasug aul nidhi ne mela hail taha aul mudhe clybaby bola." Till now Raman had understood that her L; T means R; S and understood that someone picked her at class.
"Mei dadi se kahunga; ok?" Raman said controlling his anger for whoever made his doll cry.
"Aapki Dadi hai?" she asked excitely forgoting the school incident.
He smiled looking her excited big eyes, "Ha; Dadi; Papa; Badima; Rajveer bhai; Simmi and Maaa." he said looking for his Dadi. When he looked at Ishita he saw that she was sleeping. Maybe robots dont cry; maybe robots dont go school but his doll does and he loves his doll more than that robot.
And this is how Raman's Dadi found them.
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Updated the next part have a look.
Ok this much for today. I know I'm being irregular but have a lot to catch after vacation so little busy. Hope you liked it. Will be waiting for your response and special thanks to all who liked and commented without me sending any pms.

Hoping for the same response like in prev.
Love you all;
Gia
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
Thanks finally...but very short...waiting asap next...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Ichu n laman are so cute😛
Plz udate regularly n next update more of their babyish talk.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Awesome update
So adorable ishra
Laman get angry on shagun n Nidhi
Ishu sleep on Raman
Update soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Awesome update
Loved that ishra scene
They are so cute and nave
Raman thought she is a doll
And loved Ishu's babyish language
Update soon dear
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
Amazing update
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
Nice update.
Loved small rkb and ichu.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.

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