The RKB's Doll(updated part 5 on Dec 21) - Page 11

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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely updt
Ishra r jist too cute
Ichu and laman
He thinks she is doll
A doll who goes to school unlike other dolls and robots
Loving their bonding
Updt soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 4

Raman was looking at sleeping Ishita intenly when he felt someone's hand. After seeing his Dadi his just appeared in a bright smile. He tried to get up but could as Ishita was sleeping on him.
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Dadi was really tried from moving here and there to find a good doll but couldnt find that satisfactory so ordered a new one. The only problem left was how to make raman understand it but she though she will think sth. When she found Raman and saw sth on him she was super happy. She just went to him.
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"Mil gayi?" she asked to him and he just nodded happily.
"Jara hum bhi tho dekhe!" she said pushing Ishita's face a little. Raman look at his Dadi with expecting eyes but she saw sth which he coulnt name properly. And Dadi was shocked. It was human; A GIRL; not a stupid robo aur doll but a FREAKING HUMAN BEING.
Daddi' s mouth just opened and closed continiously; no words came out.
"Aap goldfish jaise kar rahe ho" he said making Dadi to close her mouth completely. She causiously pick the girl in her arms.
"Yhe kon hai Raman?" she asked sternly while patting her softly.
"Mere doll" he said like it was the easiest ques ever. Dadi shook her head controlling the anger she felt toward Raman. She somehow controlled her and asked Raman what actually happened and Raman naratted everything.
She somehow got the hold of situation and she needs to finch this cute girl's parents.
"Dadi challona Doll karidte hai." Raman said pulling her hand.
"Raman; its not a doll sweety. She is a girl. Just like Sommi." she said in a soft voice trying to make Raman beleive.
"Yeh Doll nahi hai?" she asked sadly and Dadi nodded but he again said "Hum Iscu ke sath ghar chale." he said again.
"She isnt a doll; Raman. We cant take her" she said again.
"But wo to unn dolls ke sath thi na!" he said trying to make his point stronger "tho maybe wo kho gai ho. Aap usse yese hi chod doge." Raman said in most innocent voice.
Dadi look at the sleepng Ishita and looked around Doll House. Everyone was busy; some were pulling dolls with them; leaving them; buying selling but noone was paying attention to other. She couldnt leave here just like that.
"Ok but mei reception mei batake aati hu." she said only to bang with a slim lady in light blue dress.
She looked at Ishu and strech her hand to take her. Dadi stepped back causing the lady to frown.
"Gayatri" she said making Dadi to frown then she added "hamara naam". And Dadi nodded; "hamari beti" she said pointing to Ishita.
"Ohh" Dadi said; she was giving her but Raman spole in mid.
"Haam nahi denge." pulling Ishita to himself "hum kyu mane" he asked. Dadi rolled her eyes seeing hom asking all sort of detective ques while Gayetri smiled.
"Aap kaise manange?" she asked softly.
"What is her name?" Raman asked after thinking and Gayetri said "Ishita" in her british ancent.
Raman face just glowed with a new light "Dekha Dadi in he to naam bhi nahi pata hai. Yhe tho Ichu hai" he said softly making Dadi laugh loud while Gayetri look at him with sweet smile.
Hearing Dadi's laugh Ishu stirred on her place and then opened her eyes only to see her Mumma bending at her height. She just jump to her saying saying how hungry she is while Raman made a cry baby face when Dadi pointed to them.
Hi!Back again. I know its short but have a test tommo so jo bhi samajh aaya likh diya only because of akriti Di. Hope you will like it Di along with you all. Bye bohot padna hai😭
Need 35+ likes for next one. Got really low in prev one.

Love you all;
Gia.
Edited by Gigli - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice updt dear
Ishu is too cute..
I just love her a lot...
Raman can't see his doll crying...he found her so cute...
Raman thinks ishu is his doll...
Ishu ko nidhi aur shagun ne pareshaan Kiya...
Raman felt bad for Ishita...
He will punish shagun and nidhi...he assured ishu that he will company to Dadi also...
Ishu is so comfortable with Raman...
Loved how Raman was consoling Ishita...she is chooo cutu
Raman was happy to know that robots do have feelings he is happy that Ishita goes to school...
Do continue soon
Thanks for pm



Edited by Amreen99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Updated next part. Waiting for your response. Bye.
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update
both r too cute..
ishu see her mom n jump on her..
raman dont want to leave ishu his doll
update soon
n all the best for ur test
thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear
But too short
Ishu is so cute
Raman is uber cute!!
His antics to take ishu home was making him adorable
Update soon
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update.
Poor Raman .
Hope ishra became friends.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Too cute to handle !
Lovely update😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update dearloved it
ishra are so cute
Update next part soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
aww nice cute update
very sweet
Raman was so protective about ishu
continue soon
best of luck for ur test

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