IshRa New SS: Ishq Ka Dard (Congo Mitali)

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Hello friends, I here to congratulate "Mitalimotwani1" aka "Mitali" who turned into a goldie. Congrats dear...






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Hello people, I know you must be thinking why the hell I'm starting new stories when there is a lot to complete. Don't worry this one is a short story which will take maximum 5-6 shots to complete.. Hope you all like it



ISHQ KA DARD HAI

CHENNAI

"I can't marry you Ishita, I'm sorry.." Subbu left his fiance at the altar

After that she faced a numerous rejections, just because she can't be a mother or in society's eyes she is baanjh.

The simple 6 letter word that tagged her , "BAANJH" turned her life upside down. The girl who always had a smile in her lips forgot the meaning of word smile. She locked herself in a room not wanting to see her parents being insulted, not wanting to hear the mocking of the society, not wanting to see her parents worrying about her future.

That single accident, that turned her life upside down.


DELHI

"Papa mumma kab aayega.. meli saali fliends ke paas mumma hai.. silf loohi ke paas nahi.. kya loohi itne buli hum.." a lil baby of nearly 3 asked her papa her

Raman had tears listening to his baby. Composing himself he told her,

"Nahi baccha.. papa ne aapko bataya tha na.. mumma jaldi ruhi ke paas wapas aajegi.. Mumma ko kuch kam hai na woh complete karke mumma run run karke ruhi ke paas aajayegi.." Raman said wiping her tears.

"Please wapas aajavo.. dekha tumhari bacchi tumhareliye tadap rahi hai.. mereliye nahi toh ruhi keliye aajavo.." He mumbled to himself

Then both father daughter duo got immesered in their daily chores. Raman made Ruhi ready for her playschool, fed her breakfast. That's when the door bell rang alerting both Raman and Ruhi. Ruhi suddenly ran towards the door shouting and dancing

"Mumma aagayi.. mumma aagayi.."

and opened the door but to her disappointment it was their house maid Neelu. Ruhi came back to Raman with a sad face, tears brimming her eyes. Raman also got sad seeing his princess like this.But this was their daily routine, everyday Ruhi would open the door expecting her mumma, if only she would know that her mumma won't ever come back to her.

Ishq ka dard hai, dard hai ishq ka
Meri duniya mein aake
Mat jaa, mat jaa, kahin mat jaa
Kya maine pa liya hai
Kya maine kho diya hai


That's all for prologue. Hope you all like it. Not to forget to hit the like button and share your views through comments.


Edited by srithika - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats mitali

Congrats for new story rithika
Nice prologue
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats mitali
Superb prologue
Continue soon
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Thanks for pm




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations dear for d new colour!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting prologue.
Loved it.
Both ishra r in pain.
N both r so incomplete in their life.
Poor Ruhi, really feeling so sad for her.
She was so craving for her mothers love.
Eagerly waiting for the update.
Plz continue soon dear.
Thanks for the pm:)
Edited by arshifansiri - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations
Really Interesting Prologue
Update Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations for new story di..
Interseting prologue
Thanx for the pm
Plz updt soon
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Congrats for new story dear
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Superb prologue.
Emotional scene.
waiting for first part. Update soon

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