NEW TS will love happens twice.....? [Epilogue page 50 october 5] - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely character sketch continue soon plz
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thank you so much for your lovely likes and comments friends
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Thank you so much for your lovely response friends

i am back with first update of this story

i am dedicating this update to my lovely readers and sweetest friends who are nida and anju...hope you both will like this update


SHOT 1

in the iyer house

in the ishita's room

alarm starts ringing continuously

ishita lazily opens her eyes by seeing time she gets up in a jerk and thinks : ishita,you gone today...appa will not leave you...get ready for his scolding's...by thinking so she silently comes to hall

in the hall her sister mihika who is 8 years world reading tables loudly...she silently asks her about what appa is doing...her sister answers her that he is doing pooja...so ishita silently walks towards kitchen...as she have to pass through pooja room appa feels her presence and says(he is doing pooja by closing his eyes ) : ishita...

ishita :good morning appa...

appa with closing eyes asks : you took bath...?

ishita without thinking says : ha appa...by saying so she leaves to kitchen...

in the kitchen

madhavi : tumhe subha subha zoot bol rahi hoon sharam nehi hai tum ko(why are you lying with appa early morning...)

ishita : nehi toh subha subha dath khao kaya vus se...

madhavi : mein kya karu tumhare...

ishita : mein bolu...tumhe kya karna hai...meri liy ek cup coffee bana doh...

madhavi looks angrily...

ishita : then prepare half cup...asks with puppy face...

madhavi again looks on but not says anything...ok one fourt cup...please amma...please amma...

madhavi : go and wash your face first then i will give you coffee...

ishita by kissing her : you are so sweet amma...i will be back in two minutes...by seeing so she is about to leave the kitchen she collides with her another sister sarika who is 12 years old...

sarikav:ishu akka...tum abhi takh bath nehi liya...

ishita closes her mouth with her palm says : don't shout yar...agar chilaya toh mar dalungi tumhe...

sarika throws her hand and shouts : appa...ishu akka abhi takh nehi naya...

ishita quickly runs to her room...

vandita is watering the plants in the garden...bala comes from behind and hugs her from back...

vandu : bala...what are you doing...?

bala : i am hugging my wife...is anything wrong in this...?

vandu : bala we are in garden...

bala is tighten his hold around her waist...

ishita ,mihika and sarika are seeing them from upstairs...and smiling on his anna...

bala kisses vandu...

ishita brings one tub of water and pours on them from upstairs...bala and vandu separated and sees towards her...ishita runs away from there while bala is coming inside to scold ishu...meanwhile appa sees him like that...

appa stops bala and asks him : what is this...?why you are wet from top to bottom...?

three naughty sisters are seeing him from the behind the wall with giggling...

bala is finding words to see his appa...

bala : appa...vo...vo...

ishita : i thinks he becomes wet in rain...

appa gives a look to him and leaves...

bala runs to ishu and starts running behind her...ishita is running to save herself from bala...in the process she collides with her appa...she frightens by seeing towards him and says : tumhe badhi hogayi hoon lekin aakal nehi aaya, baat baat par zoot bolt hi hoon...tumhare vaja se tumhare behan bhi tumhare taraha ban raha hai...aaj keliye itna hai aur kuch data na hai aap ko...says ishita before he said anything...

appa smiles and says : go and take bath,today i will drop you to college...by saying so he leaves...

ishita : aaj appa ko kya hogaya mujhe data bhi nehi...

after sometime mr iyer and ishita is going to college on appa's bike...

ishita starts conversation and asks: what's matter appa...?

appa : how do you know that...i want to say something to you...?

ishita : because you are not scolding me from the morning

appa : because someone is come to see you...his name is raman,he is very smart,very intelligent, very handsome,very kind heart...when i went delhi last time...i came to know about him...he is perfect for you...so come home before two clock...by saying so appa leaves from there by leaving sad ishita behind...

in the college

shagun: what's the big issue ishu...ladka acha ho toh shadi kar lo...

ishita: i don't marry the person who i don't know anything about him...it is better to live alone rather than marrying a stranger...says stubbornly...

shagun: what you will do now...?

ishita: i will not go home...?then how he will see me...?

night 10'oclock

ishita comes to home...by thinking all will scold her now...because she intentionally not came to home early but she enters house...she is fully drenched in rain...and enters house like a scared kitten...and shocked to see some one on their hall...

madhavi comes to her and says : he is waiting for you from the 5'O clock by saying so she takes her inside and gives her a nice sari to wear and she sadly wore sari because she is left with no option other than meeting him...

by making her ready madhavi scolds her for not coming home early and also praises raman for his godness

madhavi takes her to him in the way she says : say sorry to that boy...by saying so she brings her to him...all leaves the place to give them privacy...

ishita stands silently when raman said : aap baitye...

ishita says : i don't want to sorry to you...because i did whatever i like...i said to my appa i will not be a perfect wife to anyone still he arranged for this...so i not came...and promise idon't have any intention ti disrespect you and my parents may tell you that i am good,well mannered,kind...but those all are lies...i get angry easily,i don't know what right and what wrong,i am very short tempered...i have a big ego...after knowing about me you want to say anything to me...?

raman says : i kie you very much by saying so he leaves leaving a stunning ishita behind...

raman says to her appa that he likes her and will marry her and leaves from there...

after raman left...

mihika : akka...jeju is living in delhi...you will also will live in delhi...i am so excited says mihika...

all are planning to how to do marriage when ishita says : i don't marry him...

madhavi: why...?

ishita: i don't want that's it

appa : what is the reason ishu...?

ishita: i want to study further...

appa: you study after your marriage...

ishita ; no,i will first study and will marriage says stubbornly...

appa : tab itna acha ristha nehi aayega...says loudly...

ishita looks on...

appa : dekho ishita...i am just a government employee .i am going to retir in four years...and i have responsibility of your sister also...he is very good boy,well mannered, he is highly educated, and moreover he don't want anything big big gifts he just want to marry you in simple way...he is not even asking for dowry...

ishita : agar koyi bhi aakar bolega ki bina dowry ke mein shadi karunga...toh aap mujhe cus ko bej denge...

appa got angry on her words and slaps her...

ishita runs from there to her room... and fell on her bed and starts crying...

after fifteen minutes

she listens loud noises from the down stairs and she silently went and sees what is happening there...and shocked to see her appa is on bed and doctor is checking him...

doctor : is it his first stroke...?

bala cries and says : yes doctor...

doctor: take care of him...please make him stress free...otherwise no one will do anything by saying so he gives medicines and left...

ishita shocked after knowing that her father got heart attack,she is the reason behind for his stroke and brokes into tears...

after two days

ishita came to appa and says : i will marry that man...

appa : if you don't want to marry him...it's ok khanna...

ishita: no appa,i will marry him...says and went to her room in the next movement...

from the next second marriage preparations starts in iyer house...as raman has no one, their marriage was completed in between all family members of ishita only...

ramanis smiling by seeing ishita beside him but smile is far away from her...raman tied tali(mangal sutar ) around her neck and their exchanges gharland...

and soon their marriage rituals completed.

after marriage ishita sat in the garden sadly and thinking about how her life changed in two days...

madhavi comes to her and says : ishu...go inside raman is waiting for you...

ishita cries and says : he is a stranger to me...how can i amma...please i am scared amma...i don't want to go...please don't force me...

madhavi: stranger...? what are talking ishu...he is your husand...he married you in between all rituals...

ishita : no amma i will not go to him...

madhavi: ishu aisa nehi bolthe beta chalo...

ishita not ready to go inside then vandita says : i will bring her amma...you go...then madhavi leaves...

after that vandita convinces her by saying more thing then she agrees and went inside...

raman in the room: sab dulhan apni dulha keliye intazar karta hai...lekin yahi mein apni dulhan keliye intazar kar raha hoon...his self talk stops when ishita enters the room...

raman moves to the door and closes it...ishita is observing him silently...

after closing the door he came and sat on the bed and says: ishu...idhhar aao mere pas...

ishita with baby steps went to him and he makes her sit beside her...

raman forwards his hand to touch her but she move little back her hand...

raman : may be she is shy by thinking so he takes her palm into his hand and pecks her hand while ishita is uncomfortable with his gestures...

raman moves close to her and kisses her temple and then kisses her forehead but stops kissing her by listening her sobs...

raman : ishu...what happened...?why are youcrying...?

ishita in between her sobs : i want to sleep...

raman : that's it...you have to see that before na...you are getting sleep...

ishita : i am saying now na...says like a baby...

raman : now you want to sleep...?

ishita nods her head...

raman : then sleep...

ishita confusingly looks on

raman: it's ok...you go and sleep...

in the next movement ishita went to her side and sleeps by facing her back to him while raman takes his position in chair...

that's all for now friends.hope you like this update.please hit like buttons and do share your views on it.

thank you


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Edited by Lovely_IshRa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
hi friends
shot 1 added
have a look
nida as i promised you i updated this one dear😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Wow.. What a start
Please update more often
Can't wait to read
Evn update dhakkan If possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
superb update
ishita is so naughty she lied to appa she took bath ishita poured water on vandu and Bala who were romancing appa asked ishita to come home early raman is coming to see her she reached home late raman was waiting for her ishita told raman she is short tempered raman likes her and told her parents ishita said she will not Marry raman appa tried to make her understand but she was not understanding appa got heart attack ishita was guilty she got ready to Marry raman ishra got married
pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Nice character sketches
Update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Awesome chappy
Hope she won't break his heart
Raman is so nice
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

Hope she won't break his heart
Raman is so nice
Update soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply

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