Ishra TS_When you left us alone...[New story ]part 2 pg 17, July 13th

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Start

So Ishita is already dead its Raman right that imagines her
but he also says look Ishita how our baby misses you which means that
Ishita was there for a while with Ruhi before she died

Thank you so much for the lovely comment

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: parvathyskumarr
beautiful... theri with raman , ruhi and ishitha... a fantasy come true...waiting eagerly for the next chapter...

Thank you
Vl Update shortly dear

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: keyzest
Emotional story viji
Want ishita to b alive in true sense, not only in ramanz memories

Thank you for the suggestions roshi

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Hello friends...
Am back with a new update...
Do post your views on it...
And forget not to hit the like button...
Njoy reading
- Love viji ❤️

Part 2:

It was late evening... Raman and ruhi along with muthu were lying down in the garden area.. Raman was lying with his eyes closed... While Ruhi was looking at the stars... With muthu beside her...

Ruhi : papa... She called raman slowly still looking at the sky...

Raman : hmm... He said with his eyes closed...

Ruhi : papa... Aap so rahe hain... Uto na papa...

Raman still hummed with his eyes closed...

Little ruhi was now irked by not getting her papa's proper attention...

Ruhi : papa.. Utooo... Mujhe ek doubt hai... uto na... She shook him vigorously with all her might making raman open his eyes...

Raman : kya doubt hai ruhi... He asked rubbing his eyes...

Ruhi : papa... Itne saare stars hai isme mamma kaha hai... She asked looking at the sky...

Raman was taken back by her question...

Raman : rooh... Idhar aao papa ke paas... He got up and made her sit on his lap...

Ruhi : bolo na papa... Mamma kaha hai...

Raman :hmm... Mamma yahi hai beta hamare saath... look there... The star that is shining the most is your mamma... Woh wala... He said pointing towards the star...

Ruhi : that star is mamma? Muthu udhar dekho... That star is our mamma... She said with utter happiness...

Raman just passed a meek smile caressing her hair...

Ruhi : papa... mamma ke paas kaise jaatein hai... Even I want to become star like mamma... Mujhe bhi mamma se milna hai...

Raman : ruhiii... He sushed her keeping his hand on her mouth... Aise nahi bolte bacha... He said with moist eyes..

Ruhi : papa... Mujhe sirf mamma ko ek baar dekna hai... Uske baat mein wapas aajongi... She said innocently...

Not able to take that unknown tears started flowing from raman's eyes...

Ruhi :papa... Aap ro kyun rahe ho...She asked cupping his face...

Raman : aap bhi chali gayi toh papa akele ho jaaonga na... Papa ke paas koi nahi hoga... He said with a breaking voice... Hugging her to his heart...

Ruhi : Aap please... aise ro mat papa... Mein kabhi aapke chodke nahi jaaongi... She said wiping his tears...

Raman : papa ko kabhi chodke mat jaana princess... Aise baatein bhi kabhi mat karna... He said hugging her tightly...

Ruhi : I am sorry papa... Mein aise baat phir kabhi nahi boloongi... she said in verge of crying seeing him crying...

Not wanting to make ruhi worried... he wiped his tears and composed himself...

Raman : ruhi... Aise rote nahi hai bacha...Dekho... Papa nahi ro rahe hain..
If you cry like this... Mamma upar se hame dekh rahe hai na... Toh mamma will become very sad seeing you crying...

Ruhi : toh aapko bhi aise rote dek kar mamma sad hojaonge na... abhi papa will also not cry... And princess will also not cry... Tab hum dono kush tabhi mamma kush honge... She said twisting the same towards him...

Raman smiled at her cleverness...

Raman : Sorry my bacha... Dekho papa... Kaise has rahe hain... He wiped his tears and smiled flashing his dimples...

Ruhi : abhi papa has liya toh ruhi bhi hasegi... She smiled flashing her dimples just like her papa...

Raman :meri dadi amma... He said Kissing her forehead...

Ruhi : papa... Ek baat poochun?... She said in a serious tone...

Raman : kya baat hai beta...

Ruhi : papa... Mamma kaise dektein hai... Meine unki photo bhi nahi dekha... She said with her lips curled down...

Raman : aapne mamma ko nahi dekha aaj tak ?.. How sad... Ruko ek minute... He said running inside the house...

Ruhi was totally confused...

Ruhi : muthu... papa ke paas mamma ke photos hain? Toh itne din mujhe kyun nahi dikhaya... She was speaking to muthu... With all confusions... Muthu was just waging his tail keenly listening to ruhi...

Raman came back hiding his hands behind him...

Ruhi : papa... Mamma ki photo hai aapke paas... Mujhe dikhao na...Ruhi was jumping... peeping to see what was in his hands...

Raman : haan... I will show you mamma... Pehle Aap aankhen band karo...

Ruhi closed her eyes immediately excited...

Raman smiled at her excitement...

Raman :Ab aankhe kolo... He said showing her the mirror...

Ruhi opened her eyes with full excitement to see her mother for the very first time...

Ruhi : papa... Yeh toh mein hoon... She said in a sad tone...

Raman : rooh .. Aap sad kyun ho rahe hain... Aapko mamma ko dekhna tha na... Mamma toh bilkul aapke jaise hi dikti hai... Look into the mirror... Aap same to same mamma jaise hi hai...

Ruhi : sachi papa... Mein mamma ki tarah hoon... She asked with a bright smile... Looking inti the mirror...

Raman : muchi my princess... Bilkul... Deko Mamma ko bhi aise hi aap jaise lambe baal... Aur aap hi ki tarah badi badi aankhe... Aur Mamma bhi meri princess ki tarah bahot cute... And then... Aapki mamma the Badi jkr aur aap choti JKR... He said tickling her making her forget all worries and laugh wholeheartedly...

Raman (St): why did you do this to me ishita... Our baby is so much yearning for your love and care... Kyun hame aise akele adhoora chodke chali gai thi tum...

Ruhi : papa... Chalo... Andher chaltien hain... Baarish ho raha hai .. She shouted pulling his arms... him breaking his thoughts...

Raman picked ruhi in his arms and went inside followed by muthu...

He tucked ruhi to bed and covered her comfortably with duvet..

Ahhh... She winced in pain all of sudden making raman confused...

Raman : ruhi... beta... Kya hua...

Ruhi : ku... Kuch nahi papa... Mujhe neend aah rah hai... She said closing her eyes...

making him more worried...

Raman : ruhi... Papa se aap kya chupa rahe ho... princess toh papa ki best friend haina... Papa se nahi batoogi kya...

She slowly opened her eyes and looked at him apologetically...

Raman : kya hua beta... He asked caressing her hair...

Ruhi : papa... Woh... Mujhe chot lagi hai... Idhar dekho... She said showing the wound in her knees...

Raman : ruhi... Yeh chot kaise lagi...
He asked making her sit...

Ruhi : woh... Papa.. Ek ladka meri class mein mujhe bohot bully karta hai... Kabhi dekho meri choti ko pull karta rehta hai... Toh aaj mujhe bahot gussa aaya aur meine usse maara... So he pushed me down... She said without meeting his eyes...

Raman : ruhi... Kisiko maarna bohot bad manners haina beta... Aapko usse pyaar se samjaana chahiye tha na...

Ruhi : I am sorry papa... Next time mein aise fight nahi karoongi... She said meekly...

Raman : koi baat nahi... Kal papa us ladke se baat karta hoon teekhe... He said smiling... Ab hum iss chot ka ilaj kartein hai... He applied antiseptic cream on the wound and made her lay comfortably on bed and settled beside ruhi... And was patting her to sleep... His mind automatically diverted towards his jkr...

(Flashback)

It was a rainy day, ishita iyer a doctor by profession was sitting in her cabin... Going through the medical history of few patients...

She was looking at her phone from time to time from corner of her eyes... Finally after done with hell waiting for the day she took the Mobile in her hands...

Ishita : ravan Kumar... Kahan chale gai... Subha se ek phone bhi nahi kiya... Aaj kis ke saath lad rahe honge pata nahi... When he is all time behind me like a puppy... I just shoo him off... But now not listening to his voice since morning.. I feel so restless... She was cursing him looking at his pic on her screen saver...

Nurse : ma'am... The nurse came knocking the door... Breaking her thoughts...

Ishita : yes... Come in..

Nurse : ma'am, Koi patient aaya hai... He is injured... Gunda jaise dik raha hai madam... Lagta hai... Kisi ke saath maar peet karke aaya hai...

Ishita : kya hua... Severe injury hai kya..

Nurse : Nahi ma'am...

Ishita : then what's the problem.. Go treat him... Dressing karado...

Nurse : wahi toh problem hai ma'am... He wants you to treat him... He is not allowing anyone near... Meine boldiya... Aap senior doctor ho... But he is not ready to listen... Chilla chilla kar saare staffs ki dimag karab kardiya... She said irritated...

Ishita : he wants me to treat him?... Kaun hai... Jo mujhe jaanta hai... She got up and went towards the treatment room...

She was completely shocked seeing the person who was shouting at the staffs not allowing anyone to come near him...

Ishita : ramann... Aap?... She ran towards him...

Raman : ishita ... Yaar... Where were you... Kabse tujhe bulane ko keh raha hoon... None are ready to listen to me...

Ishita : raman yeh kya hai... How did you get injured ... Itne saare khoon... She held his arms... Aaj bhi kisi ke saath jagda karke aay ho kya... She stared at him...

Raman : ahhh... It's hurting yaar... He said shrugging her hands off...

Ishita just glared at him and started treating him with knowing verywell that he is trying to avoid her question...

She held his arms and wiped the blood from his wound with cotton...

Raman : ahhh... Madrasan it's hurting...

Ishita : let it hurt... Woh sab ladai karne se pehle sochna hoga... She said rubbing his wound with utmost anger...

Raman : ahhh... Pagal madrasan... Bohot dard ho raha hai... He winced in pain making the nurse beside laugh at him...

Raman : oyee... Daant kya dika rahe ho... Isme hasne wali kya baat hai... He shouted at the nurse...

Ishita : raman... Yeh aap kya kar rahi ho... Bichari ko kyun daat rahe ho...

Raman : arey yaar... Tum kar rahi ho na... Iski kya zaroorat hai... Chase her out... He said irritated...

Ishita : ramann... Chup... Nurse aap jao... I am sorry on his behalf...

The nurse made dirty face at raman and went from there...

Ishita : enna ramann...

Raman : Mujhe uski shakal dek kar gussa aa raha hai... Mere dard dek kar has rahi hai pagal... He said looking at the doorway...

Ishita cleaned the wound and now applied antiseptic lotion on the wounded area...

Raman : Madrasan... Ahhh... Pyaar se karo yaar... Meine teri staff ko daata toh aise badla loge kya... He said shrugging her hands off...

Ishita : raman... Antiseptic lotion hai... Jalan hoga na... She said resuming her work... With utmost care...

After all his tantrums... She did dressing for his wound...

Ishita : hogaya... Itni si chot ke liye poore hospital sar pe utaliya... Yeh toh nurse bhi kar sakti thi na... She said glaring at him...

Raman : haan... Nurse bhi kar sakti thi... Par nurse toh... Tum jaise pyaar se nahi karegi na... He said pulling her by waist...

Ishita : raman... Kya kar rahi ho... Hum clinic mein hai...

Raman : toh kya... Meri girl friend hai... Mein kuch bhi karoonga... He said moving his hands beneath her pallu.. She grasped And pushed him by his wounded arms by mistake...

Raman : aah... Madrasan... Maar daalne ki irada hai kya... He said holding his arms... Shrieking in pain...

Ishita : sorry... Sorry... She took his hand in hers and kissed it lovingly..

Raman : hayee... Iske liye toh... I am ready to break all the bones in my body... He said dreamily...

She smacked his arms blushing cutely...
But immediately glared at him keeping her hands on her hips...

Raman : kya hua... He asked confused...

Ishita : aaj kiske saath ladai kiya hai aapne... Yeh kya hai raman... Aap aise karoge toh mein appa amma se aapke baare mein kaise bataon...

Raman : arey meine kya kiya... I dint fight with anyone yaar...

Ishita : woh toh dik raha hai... Aaj nurse bhi mujhe aakar bataya koi gunda treatment ke liye aaya hai... Mein mere appa se batao kya... That his to be son il law is a gunda?...

Raman : madrasan... He pulled her again by his waist... Mein koi gunda nahi hoon samjhi... I am a private detective...

Ishita : haan... Farak kya hai... Dono same to same hai... Har roz criminals ke saath ladai jagda...

Raman : ishita... Aaj jo criminal hamne pakda na... He was about to do an acid attack on innocent girl who denied his proposal... Tumhe pata hai... How happy that girl and her family was... Woh kushi ke saamne... Yeh choti moti chot mujhe koi maine nahi rakthi hai... He said pecking her nose...

Ishita : par meri appa ko lagega na raman...

Raman : you don't worry my jaan... Appa ko patana... Itna mushkil nahi hoga... Jitna beti ko patane mein hua... He said nibbling her earlobe...

Ishita : raman... Kya kar rahi ho... Koi aajeyega...

Raman : aane dho na ishita... Ek kissie dedo... He said caressing her lips with his... But she pushed him carefull enough not to hurt his hands...

Ishita : pehle appa se baat karo... Uske baat kissie vissi... Sab doongi...
He made a puppy face not getting anything from her...

( end of flashback)

Raman smiled thinking of ishita's cute antics...

Raman : ishita... You always told me not to fight with anyone... Aaj hamari beti ko dekho... She is totally opposite to you in this... Gundi bangai hamari rooh... But don't worry... I am there to correct her... Jaise you corrected me... He said caressing sleeping ruhi's hair and pecked her forehead and slept beside her...

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Diksha Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

fabulous and very beautiful update
ruman are missing ishu a lot
poor them
loved the flashback
do Raman is a private detective and ishu doctor
waiting to read what exactly happened to ishu
do continue soon

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Rithika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

awesome update dii

it was emotional as well as so cute

part where ruman missing ishu was so emotional

ruhi wanted to go to her mumma once

raman cried seeing ruhi craving for her mother's love

ruhi is a chotu jkr. she slapped that boy who bullied her

ishra scene was so so so cute

so raman is a private detective and ishu is a doctor

update soon

thanx for the pm

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Mdwst

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Good update..nice fb...feeling sad for both

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gargpoo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Superb update .
Ruhi is so cute n innocent she wanted to b star to meet ishita Raman panicked n broke down he can't lose her ..
Ruhi tod him she fought with a classmate Raman made her understand its wrong
Fb ws awsm. So Raman ws a detective who used to fight with criminals to rescue innocent ppl. . he lashed out on Hosp staff hahaha kud kud kumar ishita treated his wound n asked to stop fighting n talk to her appa
Curious to know abt ishita
Waiting for next