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-Love viji❤️
Ps: this story is based on a Tamil movie with little modification 😆
Tamil friends try guessing the movie...
WHEN YOU LEFT US ALONE...
Part 1:
A small house that was situated on a hill top amidst forest, mountains and water falls... And environed with breezy winds.. in the outskirts of city... Where one could experience the chillness and relish the calm nature...The breezy wind and ever drizzling weather added the beauty to the place... There lived the little family with that was surrounded by love and happiness only...
Inside the house... Raman was sleeping peacefully hiding himself completely under the duvet...
Ishita Came and stood beside him pulling the covers off his body...
Ishita : raman...
Raman : ishitaa... Baby why are you this late today... He pulled her making her fall above him...
Ishita : raman... Uto... Abhi tak Aap so rahe ho... Ruhi ko school ke liye late ho raha hoga na... Jaldi uto aur ruhi ko ready karo...
Raman : hmm... Ishita kya yaar... Abhi abhi aay ho... aate hi tumhari lecture shuru kar diya... Let me feel you for sometime... He said pulling her closer towards him...
Ishita : raman... Go freshen up... Aur ruhi ko bhi ready karo jaldi ...
None of her words reached his ears... He was busy nibbling his lips over hers... Carresing her curves making her go weak...
Ishita : raman... Get up baba... It was almost a whisper...
Raman : no... Pehle tum meri morning kiss dho... He said closing his eyes waiting for her to kiss him...
Baby... Baby... Abhi tak bed par ho... Offo yeh baby bhi na aaj bhi mamma ke saath sapne mein romance kar rahe honge.. Everyday he is late... Chalo muthu. . Lets go wake papa up... Came raman's little daughter ruhi shouting loudly with her pet dog muthu...
Ruhi: baby... Uto... She said pulling the covers slightly ...
But raman was still in his dream land... Little ruhi was Irritated not getting any attention from her father... She pulled the covers completely off his body with all her might...
Raman woke up startled by her sudden action...
Raman : rooh baby... subha subha mujhe kyun utaya... He said yawning and rubbing his eyes lazily... Aur uniform pehen kar kahan jaa rahi ho... He said Looking at ruhi who was standing keeping her hands on her hips dressed in her school uniform...
Ruhi: offo buddhu baby... Uniform pehen kar kahan jaaongi... She said hitting her head with her tiny hands... Jaldi uto baby... Mujhe school ke liye time ho raha hai... Atleast today drop me at school on time baby...
Raman : itna bhi kya jaldi hai... Aur papa ko aur 5 minutes sone dho na baby... He said going back to his sleeping position...
Ruhi : babbyyy... She said in a warning tone... Keeping her hands on her hips rolling her eye at him...
Raman saw her dadi amma pose and turned into a scary kitten and the next moment ran to freshen up...
Ruhi : Bichara papa...dar gai... She giggled at her father's frightened avtar...
Ruhi was walking to and fro outside their house with her bag on her shoulders and water bottle hanged around her neck waiting for her father impatiently...
Finally after what felt like ages raman came out... To see ruhi passing a deadly glare at him...
Raman : kya hua baby... Why are you staring at me...
Ruhi : aaj bhi late kardiya aap ne... Aaj bhi meri teacher mujhe daantenge... Aise aap roz late karte jaaogi toh... Mujhe LKG hi 3 saal tak padna hoga... She said staring at him...
Raman (St): offo... Ab mein yeh choti jkr ko kaise manaonga...
Raman : sorry baby... Papa kal se pakka jaldi ut jaaonga... Chalo... Chalo... Ab school chaltien hain... He said picking her in his arms... And started his bike... Driving off to school...
Raman was driving his bike very slowly making ruhi frustrated...
Ruhi : baby... Hume aaj hi school jaana hoga... Toda fast chalao na...
Raman : no... Baby... Safety first... Fast driving is very dangerous...
Ruhi : offo papa... Mujhe neeche utaro... Even if I go by walk... Mein aapse pehle school pahonch jaongi... She said frustrated...
Raman : gussa dekho... Bilkul jkr ki tarah... He said smiling remembering his jkr...
Ruhi : baby ... Mein ek baat poochun?...
She said in a low tone...
Raman : kya hua baby...
Ruhi : papa... Aapne bola na.. Mamma tara bangai hai... Stars toh night mein aate hain na... Then how will mamma be able to see us in mornings... She said looking at the sky deeply searching for stars...
Raman was taken back by her words...
Raman : woh kya haina baby... Mamma is everywhere around us... Yeh roshni dek rahe ho na aap... Mamma hum dono ke life mein subha roshni bankar aur raat ko tara bankar hamare saath hi rahenge... He said stopping the bike infornt of ruhi's school...
Ruhi : sachi... Papa...
Raman : muchi... My baby... Mamma is always with us... He said pecking her forehead... Chalo... Chalo... Ab late ho raha hain na... Jaldi ander chalo...
Ruhi : offo... Mein toh bhool hi gai... Bye baby... She waved her hands to her papa... Running inside the school...
Raman : dekha ishita... How much our baby missing you... Tumne promise kiya na that you will always be with me... Phir why did you leave us alone and go ishita... He said with moist eyes looking at the sky...
To be continued based on response... 😳
Note :This story is based on single parent Raman and his 5 year old daughter ruhi...
Raman lost his loving wife ishita and his family in an accident...
Is Ishita really dead or alive...
Or is she just alive in raman's memories...
Will let you know in further updates...
Index :
Part 1: above
Part 2
Am back with a new story...
I hope you all will shower your love on this story too...
Do post your views on it...
And forget not to hit the like button...
Njoy reading..
-Love viji❤️
Ps: this story is based on a Tamil movie with little modification 😆
Tamil friends try guessing the movie...
WHEN YOU LEFT US ALONE...
Part 1:
A small house that was situated on a hill top amidst forest, mountains and water falls... And environed with breezy winds.. in the outskirts of city... Where one could experience the chillness and relish the calm nature...The breezy wind and ever drizzling weather added the beauty to the place... There lived the little family with that was surrounded by love and happiness only...
Inside the house... Raman was sleeping peacefully hiding himself completely under the duvet...
Ishita Came and stood beside him pulling the covers off his body...
Ishita : raman...
Raman : ishitaa... Baby why are you this late today... He pulled her making her fall above him...
Ishita : raman... Uto... Abhi tak Aap so rahe ho... Ruhi ko school ke liye late ho raha hoga na... Jaldi uto aur ruhi ko ready karo...
Raman : hmm... Ishita kya yaar... Abhi abhi aay ho... aate hi tumhari lecture shuru kar diya... Let me feel you for sometime... He said pulling her closer towards him...
Ishita : raman... Go freshen up... Aur ruhi ko bhi ready karo jaldi ...
None of her words reached his ears... He was busy nibbling his lips over hers... Carresing her curves making her go weak...
Ishita : raman... Get up baba... It was almost a whisper...
Raman : no... Pehle tum meri morning kiss dho... He said closing his eyes waiting for her to kiss him...
Baby... Baby... Abhi tak bed par ho... Offo yeh baby bhi na aaj bhi mamma ke saath sapne mein romance kar rahe honge.. Everyday he is late... Chalo muthu. . Lets go wake papa up... Came raman's little daughter ruhi shouting loudly with her pet dog muthu...
Ruhi: baby... Uto... She said pulling the covers slightly ...
But raman was still in his dream land... Little ruhi was Irritated not getting any attention from her father... She pulled the covers completely off his body with all her might...
Raman woke up startled by her sudden action...
Raman : rooh baby... subha subha mujhe kyun utaya... He said yawning and rubbing his eyes lazily... Aur uniform pehen kar kahan jaa rahi ho... He said Looking at ruhi who was standing keeping her hands on her hips dressed in her school uniform...
Ruhi: offo buddhu baby... Uniform pehen kar kahan jaaongi... She said hitting her head with her tiny hands... Jaldi uto baby... Mujhe school ke liye time ho raha hai... Atleast today drop me at school on time baby...
Raman : itna bhi kya jaldi hai... Aur papa ko aur 5 minutes sone dho na baby... He said going back to his sleeping position...
Ruhi : babbyyy... She said in a warning tone... Keeping her hands on her hips rolling her eye at him...
Raman saw her dadi amma pose and turned into a scary kitten and the next moment ran to freshen up...
Ruhi : Bichara papa...dar gai... She giggled at her father's frightened avtar...
Ruhi was walking to and fro outside their house with her bag on her shoulders and water bottle hanged around her neck waiting for her father impatiently...
Finally after what felt like ages raman came out... To see ruhi passing a deadly glare at him...
Raman : kya hua baby... Why are you staring at me...
Ruhi : aaj bhi late kardiya aap ne... Aaj bhi meri teacher mujhe daantenge... Aise aap roz late karte jaaogi toh... Mujhe LKG hi 3 saal tak padna hoga... She said staring at him...
Raman (St): offo... Ab mein yeh choti jkr ko kaise manaonga...
Raman : sorry baby... Papa kal se pakka jaldi ut jaaonga... Chalo... Chalo... Ab school chaltien hain... He said picking her in his arms... And started his bike... Driving off to school...
Raman was driving his bike very slowly making ruhi frustrated...
Ruhi : baby... Hume aaj hi school jaana hoga... Toda fast chalao na...
Raman : no... Baby... Safety first... Fast driving is very dangerous...
Ruhi : offo papa... Mujhe neeche utaro... Even if I go by walk... Mein aapse pehle school pahonch jaongi... She said frustrated...
Raman : gussa dekho... Bilkul jkr ki tarah... He said smiling remembering his jkr...
Ruhi : baby ... Mein ek baat poochun?...
She said in a low tone...
Raman : kya hua baby...
Ruhi : papa... Aapne bola na.. Mamma tara bangai hai... Stars toh night mein aate hain na... Then how will mamma be able to see us in mornings... She said looking at the sky deeply searching for stars...
Raman was taken back by her words...
Raman : woh kya haina baby... Mamma is everywhere around us... Yeh roshni dek rahe ho na aap... Mamma hum dono ke life mein subha roshni bankar aur raat ko tara bankar hamare saath hi rahenge... He said stopping the bike infornt of ruhi's school...
Ruhi : sachi... Papa...
Raman : muchi... My baby... Mamma is always with us... He said pecking her forehead... Chalo... Chalo... Ab late ho raha hain na... Jaldi ander chalo...
Ruhi : offo... Mein toh bhool hi gai... Bye baby... She waved her hands to her papa... Running inside the school...
Raman : dekha ishita... How much our baby missing you... Tumne promise kiya na that you will always be with me... Phir why did you leave us alone and go ishita... He said with moist eyes looking at the sky...
To be continued based on response... 😳
Note :This story is based on single parent Raman and his 5 year old daughter ruhi...
Raman lost his loving wife ishita and his family in an accident...
Is Ishita really dead or alive...
Or is she just alive in raman's memories...
Will let you know in further updates...
Index :
Part 1: above
Part 2
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