Ishra SS- || Yaara Tum Bin || Part 6 on Pg 30 on July 19

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Naazrt

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

many many congratulations for your new story dii...
Wonderful prologue..
continue soon..
thanks for pm dii

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Ishraru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Interesting waiting for next congratulations for new story

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Partha Maiti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Obviously it is very interesting

You have shown the actual fact that should happen to our so called show

What to do actually they(cv's) have no time to think about us what we need

Please... give a quick update...

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aishwarya

@angeliash

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

awesome introduction di..
plz continue soon..

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Twinkle Solanki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Interesting
story
update soon
n
thanks for pm

- TWINKLE

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Divanru

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Congo for new story .

Nice prologue .

Do update soon

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PremPBSB

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

New story

Interesting prologue...

Continue soon..

Thank u for pm & update

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pari21v

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

nice

interesting prologue

new concept

it will be different to see calm n sweet raman (just opposite to what he is) in the situations

waiting

thanks 4 pm

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keyzest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Yeppiee...lovely plot

I was witing for such a storyline

Do write di

Waiting to read

Thnx for da pm

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Sarthi Sharda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Prolouge

Ishita's operation was going on. Raman was still not believing that his madrasan is alive. He was on the top of the world seeing his love, his madrasan alive. He immediately call adi to give him this news.

Raman- Adi tu...

Adi- Kuy phone kar rahe aap mujhe. Aapko samaj nahi ate ki me aapse baat nahi karna chata

Raman- Tumahre ishima zinda ha

Adi- Ye kaya Mazak kar rahe rahe ha app, aa...

Raman- Me sach bol raha hu adi, tum jaldi se pihi or ruhi ko lekar Mumbai aa jao, city hospital. Aur ha ghar par kisi ko mat babata. Sab ko surprise denge.

Adi- Mr. Bhalla agar ye Mazak hua na toh fir dekiyaga, and cut the call

Raman was hurt with adi's indifference but he knows he deseve it. Afterall he was one because of whom he lost his mother 7 years ago. After one hour doctor came out raman asked him about ishita's condition.

Raman- Doctor Ishita kase he

Doc- Aap unke kon he

Raman- Ma uska pati hu

Doc- Ok, Don't worry aapki wife abh out of danger he

Raman- kaya me use mil sakta hu plz

Doc- Abhi nahi hum unhe gernal ward me shift kar rahe he fir aap unse mil sakte he

Raman- Ok doc

Doc- Aur ha jabh unhe hosh aa jaye aap mujhe bula lijiyega.

Raman- ok doc, and went from there.

Hope you like the prologue. Will update next part according to the responses. Guys who are not commenting, plz guys plz comment whether it's just a word, so that I should come to know whether you are liking my work or not. Thank you. Sorry if I hurt you.

Love

Sarthi