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Please forgive me if I get late. I am hopeful to revert here by evening or at max night.
You know right, how life is making me run here and there at this point. But I will be here, soonest I can.
Thank you so much, my little one for this.
When you had told me a week back that you had a surprise for me, I was like ... Really? 😳
But didnt someone said to be, "What if its not a story and something else.." Huh 😆
Apart from the dedication, I am happy because you have written something. I have even overlooked it, it does look painfully beautiful.
I'll be back with a detailed review very soon.
PS: I am sorry I could update nothing for you in last months. I am quite hopeful that I'll be free soon again to start updating.
Thanks a lot Sweetheart.
Loads of Love
- Harshada
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So I am here😳 I know I am too late But better late than never🤗
Thank you so very much for writing something for me Sweetheart❤️
That really means a lot.
Coming to the update, it was just so beautiful.
I loved that you entitled, the first part. You know, reading with chapters which have name is just an awesome read always😳
See this is why, I always ask you to write because your writing is really a peace to read, I mean its just comes naturally to you. The start was so sweet, he brought Lilies for her😳 I actually couldn't figure out that the next would be a heartbreak to me She is in coma🤢 I kind of have allergy towards hospital scenes, diseases, and these coma and death thing. I won't say why I do, but yeah, I do.
But that doesn't change the fact that, you described everything so beautifully. It was justified, to the story line and character as well.
You write so well in such young age, my dear👏 The way, his guilt was eating him, but still wasn't useful for anything as that wasn't enough to rectify his mistakes, for bringing her back. Ah, my heart went out for both of them that point.
The next lines where it was questioned, that wasn't it she, who knew him more? Why didn't she slap him and all... that reminded me of my one old writeup😳 Which I had written for SwaSan. That was love.
I am sorry, I won't be able to write more. I just cant...
Reading this piece, has taken me into past which I don't like to remember...
Sorry...
But this is beautiful. Update soon.
Loads of love
-Harshada
Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago
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