IshRa FF: Yeh Hai Mohabbatein (Chapter 5 - Page 50) (23rd June)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: pari21v

wow
ek aur Saloni bhut saloni mil rhi h tumhe
S ko S ka sath
but i know wo mere jaisi irritating nhi hogi
i irritate n trouble u a lot
sometimes bhut long msg bhej kr pareshan krti hu na
but can not help it yrr love u lots

love u dear
enjoy ur life 😉

Yaa bahut saare s

Lekin I am A

Anubhuti 😆

Nahi re

You are far better

She is type of very studious

But good at heart

Love you loads

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Sonal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: pari21v
lovely teaser dear
update soon

the quality n clarity is good
hey its a nice idea to write like this
go for it

thanks 4 pm

btw nice handwriting

You like the idea...

Why don't you opt this for your story?

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Sonal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#293

Note:

1. A big thank you to all for 50 pages. Love you all loads. Congratulations to me. Yipee!!

2. I don't have any idea about the length of this update. So if you feel that it is short, let me know, I will write a longer update from the next time.

3. I have merged English and Hindi updates. So hope you don't find any difficulty.

Enjoy.

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Sonal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#294

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Sonal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#295

Chapter 5

Raman Bhalla surely had a bad day, though not that bad. But his wife was in no mood to listen to him. But who will explain her that she needs to be under the shower to get rid of this stupid silly thing which is surely driving him crazy. Ishita was sitting beside the bed thinking something very deeply while Raman was sitting beside totally frustrated. He tried again for the nth time

R: Ishita ab bas bhi karo. Chalo washroom chalo mere saath. (Ishita stop it. Come to the washroom with me) (He said grabbing he hand)

But she was also fast

I: mai nahi aaungi tumhare saath. Tum hanky panky karoge na... (I won't come with you. You want to do hanky panky with me)

R: Ishita shut up yaar! Chalo mai koi hanky panky nahi karne waala hoon (Ishita shut up. Come on. I won't do any hanky panky with you)

I: toh phir kyu bula rahe ho (then why are you calling me?)

R: (sighing a little) tumhe pata hai tumhare Saath kya hua hai? (Do you know what has happened to you?)

Ishita nodded her head.

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pari21v

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Posted: 8 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: pari21v

wow
ek aur Saloni bhut saloni mil rhi h tumhe
S ko S ka sath
but i know wo mere jaisi irritating nhi hogi
i irritate n trouble u a lot
sometimes bhut long msg bhej kr pareshan krti hu na
but can not help it yrr love u lots

love u dear
enjoy ur life 😉

arre u r sonal also na

so s hua na

thanks dear

love u too

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#297

superb prologue
wow story on yhm

loved ishita's dialogue

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#298

part 1

nice part
Raman is a bit matured here not blaming ishita
liked how ishita made a promise

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#299

part 2

ruman confrontation was much needed
loved how everything turned out and slap to ashgun
wow
totally rocking update

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#300

part 3

hilarious update
Raman bechara beaten by his wife and his wifey and Darking daughter came for a surprise visit that's so sweet and mihir bhai aap pitte bhi ho was so good
not to forget
ishita getting gift from toshiji

superb