Ishra ff_Galti se mistake [updated part 6 on page 52 on 23rd sep] - Page 13

nice update. hope we get the next one ASAP

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

cute update dear

love it so so much

oh god ishu and vandu is in so much anger of raman and gang poor miku struck in between tried tocalm both the sisters so good dear

raman no words he wants to make ishu fell on from top building or lock her in room torture like anything amazing dear

bala support ishu and get scold from raman

love their party on home everyone think about their pair and go on talking they are good looking talk well etc except romi and romi stick to ishu dance so lovely dear

love raman think about ishu as well fear about her scolding and smiling like idiot in his bedroom

ishra meeting again superb dear

love raman help ishu before falling and their eye lock was fabulous dear

ishra alone in lift so cute

hope we get so many romantic scenes in lift please dear

love their cute fight and raman teasing too

continue soon dear

TAnk you so much...
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Originally posted by: Lura

nice update. hope we get the next one ASAP

Thank you..
Vl try to update shortly..

Originally posted by: fSharm

Part 1
Ishra meeting is really different..
Both ontheir orijinal mode
Rawan kumar & jkr..

Thanks for the comment...

Originally posted by: akriti154

Lovely update
ishra fight again
both struck in liff
continue soon
thnxxx 4 pm

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Originally posted by: rufana10

nice update

ishra were thinking about each other...

dey met again...

poor dey r now stuck in a lift😛

waiting for d next part...

update soon...

Thank you so much...
Am glad that you Liked it...
Vl try to update soon...

Originally posted by: pammi108

poor souls...

Lol... They are 😆
Thanks for the comment...

Part 3

Ishra were settled in the opposite corners of the lift... Just like two poles apart... Raman leaning his body sideways over the lift his eyes closed .. Ishita sat right opposite to him looking at him unbelievably, thinking How can a man sleep peacefully in this kind of situation...

Ishita : ayo murugan itz been whole 2 long hours I am struck in this damn lift with this stupid person... Bhukh bhi itni zor se lag rahi hai... She murmured to herself... She tried to find out some ways to get out of the lift... She kept pressing the buttons in side of elevator door randomly to connect to the emergency call... In the process she stopped the fan that was running...

Ayo yeh kya hogaya ab fan bhi karab hogaya... Shit yaar...

Feeling too hot all of sudden raman opened his eyes to see ishita fiddling with the buttons.. Pressing all together at a time...

Raman : yeh kya kar rahe ho tum... Pagal ho kya.. You have even stopped the fan now... He gave her a angry glare.

Ishita : sorry.. I tried to find some ways to get away from here... And this was a mistake, she said making a puppy face..
Raman was totally melted seeing her cute puppy face...

Raman : move let me see..

He pushed her quite strongly that made her Loose balance..

Ishita : how rude.. He pushed me and not even helping me to get up...

Raman was busy fixing the fan but all went in vain... He stared at her...

Raman : shit yaar.. Nahi ho raha hai... Tode der ke liye chup nahi baitogi tum..
Already we are struck in this damn lift.. Now on top of that without a fan... Am going to kill you for this...

Ishita : hey hello... Just stop it haan... You have to thankfull to me.. I atlest tried finding some solution.. But you were sleeping like a kumbhkarn..

Raman : kya ladki ho yaar tum.. Pehle galti karo.. Aur uske upar you don't have any regrets too.. He went and sat back taking his old position...

Ishita : Oh god.. From the day I saw you am having a bad time in my life... Itz all happening because of you...

Raman : same here I have never had a bad day than this in my life... So keep your mouth shut...

Ishita was just shooting daggers at him..

Complete silence taking over after the huge ruckus...

Few minutes later...
Ishita was busy looking through the tiny gap in-between the doors... She heard some sound of chocolate wrappers making her turn in jiffy to the sound...

Raman opened the wrappers of a chocolate bar...

Ishita's stomach made a growling sounds... Looking at him with a cute pout on her face...

He smiled cutely at her expressions...

Raman : would you like to share... He offered her the chocolate.. With a warm smile on his face...

Ishita excitedly walked forward like a small kid... And settled beside him.. Taking the chocolate from his hands mentioning a thank you...

Ishita: relishing the chocolate happily.. Waise you always get struck in lift is it...

Raman : no... Aise kyun pooch rah ho...

Ishita : you have a whole lot of chocolates stored in your bags na that's why I asked you...

Smiling at her comment..

Raman : I bought these for one of my friend's son... I promised to meet him today.. But am struck here with you...
He said pointing her towards her lips to wipe the chocolate that is smudged is the corner of her lips...

She tried wiping it making it spread even more...

She came forward and told tum hi wipe karo na...

He came little forward towards her lips...
Took his shivering hands and placed in the corner of her lips and wiping it off gently... sharing a beautiful eye lock lost in the moment...

They came out of the dream land composing themselves...

Ishita : Oh god... She shouted all of sudden making him startled...

Raman : kya hua...

Ishita : we dint introduce ourselves...

Raman : tum na ek dum pagal ho... I was so scared yaar...

Ishita : sorry.. Suddenly it just flashed my mind making me scream she said laughing at his frightened face...

Raman : ok then let me introduce myself first... He said forwarding his hand
I am raman, graphic designer by profession...

She joined her hands for a handshake
I am ishita, a salsa dancer...

Raman : ishita.. Nice name...And salsa huh not bad... I would love to see your dance someday ...

Ishita : sure raman... Waise... Then friends??? She asked confusingly looking at his expressions...

Raman : friends.. he said taking her into a side hug...

Ishita : raman, you look so cute when you smile... But Kyu jab dekho khadoos waala shakal ban kar goom rah ho...

Raman : arey mein tumhe khadoos dikta hoon kya...

Ishita : haan ek dum... You keep smiling always... Your dimple in your cheeks are sooo cute.. She said pulling his cheeks..

Raman : ahhh ishita, chodo mein cute nahi hoon... ekdum hot...

She laughed whole heartedly for his comment...

Raman : acha suno.. I am sorry for all that happened in the pub...

Ishita : tum mera friend ban gai na isliye am accepting your sorry... Warna I wanted to kill you for all that you said...

Raman : arey tum bhi kuch kam nahi bola... You called me a donkey, pig what not...

Within few minutes they were deeply engrossed into each other... talking and making fun of each other...

Ishita was going on and on with her banter without any Break... He was just lost in her talks deeply looking at her...

Raman(St): ishita i don't know why I feel so connected to you itz been just few hours of meeting but I feel so connected to you... Shayad isiliye mujhe kisise pyaar nahi hua... I feel so nice being with you.. Your cute talks and those almond shaped eyes,your expressions .. Oh god you are killing me... You'll be the reason for my death..

Ishita shook him gently making him come out of his dream land...

Ishita : kahan koi hue ho...

Raman : tere ankho mein... He said in low voice that was not audible to her...

Ishita : kuch kaha tumne...

Raman : kuch nahi... Tum bolo..

Ishita : haan uske baad hum na college mein ek professor ko itna tang kiya... She started her banter again...

Raman(St):hey matarani from school stories now she has reached to college stories... Mujhe pata hi nahi chala... Oh god she is sooo cute... He was in some la la la land.. Just admiring her cute talks...

Ishita : raman bas ab mujhe neend arah hai... Il sleep for sometime...

Raman : teekhe tum so jaao...

She said closed her eyes in sitting position leaning her head backwards on the lift...

Sleep was far away from raman... He was just admiring his sleeping beauty... After few minutes he looked deep into her, waving his hand before her to check whether she is awake or not.. When he dint find any reactions from her side... He settled more closer to her... Placing her head on his shoulder.. tucking the hair strands behind that was falling on her face... He was patting her cheeks imaginary without touching her face and
Laughing at himself...

Raman : kya hua tujhe raman... Ek hi din mein pagal banadiya isne... He said dreamily closing his eyes and drifted to sleep...

Morning the security guard was back on duty... He switched on the main power. . Making the lift move in jiffy that startled ishra... ishita fell due to the sudden jerk... Pulling raman on top of her... She clutched his shirt tightly looking deep into his eyes both shared a beautiful eye lock...

Their trance was broken by the down of the lift door that opened wide making them composing themselves... Raman got up and forwarded his hand for her to get up.. She got up taking his support... And finally came out of the lift taking a deep breath...

Ishita : ufff raman, finally we are out of this... But am happy that I got a friend like you...

Raman : mee too he said with a warm smile in his face...

Ishita : okay raman, then bye milte hai.. Akka nd Miku must be worried...

Raman's face fell with the mere thought of her leaving him...

Raman : hmm, ishita lets catch up sometime... He was bit hesitant to ask her number...

Ishita : sure raman bye.. She said hugging him.. And left from the place..

Raman was looking blankly at her...

Ishita Came running back to him..

Ishita : arey budhu.. Milte hain.. Par kaise.. mera number hai tera pass..

Raman :Nahi.. He said making a happy dance inside...

She took his mobile from his pocket and giving a missed call to her mobile...

That's my number save it.. Bye she said again before running hurriedly from the place... Raman was standing still in the place smiling like a fool..

...

Vandu was walking to and fro... Waiting for ishita hoping that she is not in danger... Mihika was sitting right opposite to the door keeping her focus fully on door waiting for ishita...
That's when ishita arrived surrounded by her sisters bombarding her with questions...

Ishita : arey dono pehle chup toh ho jao.. Let me explain...

She told all that happened...

Miku: akka u were struck in a lift all alone for a whole night.. How scary...

Ishita : thank god.. I was not alone...

Vandu : wat do you mean ishu..

Ishita : akka raman was with me...
Miku: who raman?

Ishita : Miku, wahi ladka.. We fought with him on the party night...

Vandu : woh batameez ladka.. Ishu did he misbehave with you.. Am not gonna spare him... Right now am gonna file a complaint against him.. She said without giving break...

Ishita : akka relax... Nothing like that.. Raman is a sweet person.. Infact he is such a gentleman akka.. And we both are good friends now...

Miku: akka really how come that khadoos idiot became a sweetheart person..

Ishita : that's a long story Miku il first go freshen up and rest for a while... My back is hurting a lot, Sleeping in a sitting position for whole night...

She moved to her bedroom taking her clothes from her closet thinking all about Raman...

Ishita(St): he is such a sweet person... He dint try to cross his limits though we were all alone in the lift... She was thinking of their eye locks and cute talks with him... His smile is so cute... Then she recalled him telling that he is hot not cute... That dimples are worth kissing... She smacked her head for the naughty thoughts... Ishu, iss admi ne tujhe pagal kardiya... Chal kaam pe lag jaa.. Warna aur pagal ho jaogi.. She took out her dress hurriedly and rushed for a quick shower...

...

Raman reached home... Bala, Mihir and Romi were engrossed In some talks...

Bala: Arey raman agai tu where were you all night...

Romi: bhai.. Hume chodo kar party toh nahi gai na...

Mihir : arey budhu, bhai aur night parties no ways...

Raman came close to mihir and held his face lovingly... Kya kaha tumne...

Mihir : night... Parties...( stammering)

Raman : Nahi.. Isse pehle

Mihir : isse pehle maine... Kya kaha bhai... He was trying to push Raman back...

Raman inched even more closer...

Raman : budhu kaha tumne mujhe...
Held his both the cheeks with his hands...

Mihir : bhai woh sorry... He was fully scared thinking raman will beat him black and blue...

Meanwhile raman gave a tight peck in his cheeks making Bala and Romi laugh out loudly at mihir.. Mihir pushed him hardly wiping his cheeks.. Bhai kya kar rah ho aap... Chodo mujhe.. Chee

Raman still being in a dream land.. Usne bhi mujhe budhu bulaaya ...

Bala and Romi I'm unison : kaun?

Raman : wahi mera honey bunny.. He said dreamily...

Mihir : kaun honey, kaun bunny bhai...

He gave a warning glare at him..

Raman : dont you remember the girl with whom we fought at the party...

Bala : we? It was you who fought...

Raman : haan toh...

Romi: Oh god are you talking about that jkr...

Raman : abey... Tameez se baath kar.. Teri hone wali bhabhi hai woh...

Kyaaa all shouted in utter shock...

Raman : yeah... I am in love.. With my hon bun...

All opened their mouth in Complete O not able to believe that raman is in love with a girl...

Mooh bandh karo bacho makhi gus jayega he closed their mouth and walked to his room happily...
Leaving behind his friends all shocked...

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