REDEMPTION ISHRA FF NOTE AND CHAPTER 22 page 52 - Page 26

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update
Raman z sticking to his word of being away from ishita
He has turned all cold n arrogant
Ishu z missing ramanz xtra attention n care like hell
So amthing terrible has happened wth raman twelve yrs ago, may b da day adi was born
Now ishu has changed
Seems like she wants to shower all her love on her ravan kumar
Dey r off to smwhr
Dont make anythn bad happen wth da truck

Pls pls update nxt part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update
Cont soonnn
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: keyzest

Amazing update

Raman z sticking to his word of being away from ishita
He has turned all cold n arrogant
Ishu z missing ramanz xtra attention n care like hell
So amthing terrible has happened wth raman twelve yrs ago, may b da day adi was born
Now ishu has changed
Seems like she wants to shower all her love on her ravan kumar
Dey r off to smwhr
Dont make anythn bad happen wth da truck

Pls pls update nxt part soon

safar ka fal meetha hoga!
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
what did shane tell ishita
suspense mai chod diya
i hope ishra r fine
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional update
Mumma u made me cry
Poor ishita how much she has to suffer
Raman is so bad how is he behaving with her
She has gone through painful miscarriage all alone
N Raman is not concern about her
He's all concerned about his heir how insensitive
Ishita left him that's correct


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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Loved it
How beautifully ishita handled ruhis fear
She is such a sweetheart
Raman accepts being in love with ishita

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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the update
hope both r fine
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago


CHAPTER-20



The truck approached their car in death speed. Raman swiftly turned the car to the left only to bang onto a huge tree. Raman and Ishitha were thrown forward with a force. Raman's heard a thud...


Once the adrenaline rush wore off , Raman quickly turned towards Ishitha . She was leaning on the seat, her eyes closed. He could see a small cut on her forehead which was bleeding slightly...


" Ishitha..Ishitha..." A panicked Raman asked a very still Ishitha.


" Please madrassan...say something ..I will die without you..please..." Raman said slightly shaking her.


" Raman.." Ishitha softly said.


He released a breath of relief. Ishitha straightened her back as Raman leaned forward to wipe the blood drops on her forehead with his hand kerchief.


" SSS..Raman gently."


" Sorry!"


Raman turned his face towards her and gently blew air on her cut. Their eyes met ...Raman could stay like that with her for a lifetime, both refusing to look away...


" Raman.. I heard something .."


" What?"


" Did you say something about someone dying and your inabilty to continue living after that person's death."


" SHUT UP!" Raman complained while Ishitha gifted him a cheeky smile.


Shaking his head, Raman tried to start the car, but it protested with a wheezing sound. Despite many tries, the car refused to cooperate ...


" Ishitha, I think we have to search for a mechanic.."

" Hell! It is such a deserted and lonely place..I think we should search for a hotel first..Someone from there could help us to find a mechanic."


" Right."


***


Raman opened the door to their hotel room. He felt sick to his stomach. Of all the places in the world , he had to take Ishitha to this cheap place ! Raman decided not to take separate rooms as soon as he noticed the filthy looks that were sent in Ishitha's direction by those creeps in the reception.


He firmly locked the door and turned to find Ishitha sitting on a chair, lost in thoughts. He sat near her .


" Ishitha , most probably we will be stuck here all night ...I don't think we could reach Delhi in time for you to assist that surgery..."


" It is fine,we will do something about it..."


Both were silent for sometime.


" Raman , do you have something important to talk to me?"


" Like what?"


" Like maybe something I don't know, but you know..and something that could make me less angry with you.'


Raman thought for sometime.


" Yes there is something..'


" Well what is it ?" Ishitha said with bated breath.


" It is about the loan.." Raman said with caution.


" What?" Ishitha was disappointed.


"I cleared off the loan with the sole intention to help you out. It was not make you feel inferior or small. I did not do it for free, like you think..I thought that you could return the money in small dues..Just like a loan, but without any interest . I never wanted to slight you, Ishitha. I felt that with me , no one could take advantage of you even if you missed your payment for a month or two..with me you could pay it off in your time, without any stress.."


" OH MURUGAN! I am terribly sorry...I never thought... I over reacted that night,..I slapped you for nothing-" Tears filled as very guilty Ishitha's eyes.


" Hey ,its okay, don't start crying now. You might have slapped me for the wrong reasons , but I did deserve it, especially from you!..You are the first woman to slap me,can you believe it?" Raman finished with a laugh.


A laugh escaped Ishitha's lips..


" Anything else to tell me?"


" What are you getting at?"


" Something that I don't know about , but you know , in your past.."


" What is this ' know don't know ' buisness? Any way there is nothing like that!"Raman said without meeting her eyes.


" You are lying aren't you?"


A loud knock disrupted their conversation.


" Who is it?"


" Open the door , you rascal!"


Raman furiously opened the door.


" What the-"


Raman swallowed seeing two policemen along with a lady constable standing at their door. The inspector scanned Raman and Ishitha from top to bottom.


" See how well dressed they are these days , Shanthi."


The lady smiled mockingly at Raman.


" Come on , let's go." The inspector said placing his strong hand on Raman's.


" You are mistaken , sir ..We are not like that."


" Really."


Ishitha felt like banging her head somewhere.


" Impeccable timing!" Ishitha muttered.


She lied to her son and managed this journey with Raman. She sacrificed the soft bed and a fun weekend back in Jalandhar for some lone time with him! They were supposed to talk and sort out their differences. They were to get over the past and start a new beginning! But no...They were going to end up dead in that ' highway to hell'! They got stuck in this hellhole where police raids were a mundane , day to day activity..


" Haven't seen this one around here before?" The other policeman said eyeing Ishitha suspiciously.


" She is my wife." Raman said angrily.


" Really man..That is the oldest lie in the book! " The inspector chuckled at his own joke.


" Sir she really is my wife..We have been married for 12 years. We have two children, a boy and a girl. We were returning back to Delhi after a family function in Jalandhar. We met with a small accident in the highway, our car got smashed into a tree. We were planning to leave after the car got repaired in the morning. We could not ind any other place to spend the night. " Raman said , sincerity dripping from his words."


Ishitha looked at Raman intently.


"Do you have any proof?"


" Sir see the cut on my wife's forehead..I could also show you some photos on my phone.."


The inspector turned towards Ishitha.


" Are you his wife?"


Raman squeezed her palm. Ishitha remained quiet for sometime.


" NO"


" Ishitha, what-"

" Really if you want me as your wife , why do you hide things from me? You expect me to forget and forgive...but you cannot give me a solid reason for me to do so. You are ready to share all things rosy and fine with me, but you refuse to share your fears, your weaknesses! Why can't you trust me, haan?"


Ishitha brought both her fists on his chest started hitting him with all her strength. Raman did nothing to stop her. The police men watched the drama before their eyes curiously.


" They definitely are husband and wife.." The inspector muttered.


" If the undying love you proclaim is true, you will tell me everything ..you will trust e with your secrets! Unnoda kaadhal nejum thana? Illa athum poiyya, sollu..Enkitta ippovavathu ellaam sollu, ennmel nanpikka vai." Ishitha was getting hysterical.


" Hey..Hey sister, stop crying.,You! why are you standing there like a statue do something! Bringing your wife to such a place , then making her cry! Close the door and do not come until morning..."


Raman closed the door as the policemen left. He turned to find a sobbing Ishitha on the bed. He went and sat near her.


" Ishitha , I did not give you any explanations because I know that you will leave me after knowing everything.."


" Try telling me. I will decide whether to run or stay!"


Raman closed his eyes and took a deep breath. The day he saw her for the first time came into his mind.







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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice Update..
Wt was the truth raman hiding from ishu..
Wanna know..
Update soon
Edited by Suma1012 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Reveal the truth fast
Continue soon
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