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Akriti154

@akriti154

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Posted: 8 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: anisha960
Nice one
So they both r betrayed
Their friendship seems to be so pure
N both r their for each other
N also they r feeling attracted towards each other
Continue soon

thnxx ani
glad u lykd it
will updt soon

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Akriti154

@akriti154

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Posted: 8 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: keyzest
nice start akku di
both r in da same situation
ishra love z blooming
update next part soon

thnxx dear
will updt soon

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Blakey

@Blakey

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Posted: 8 years ago

#283

awesome they broke up with their respective partners bcz they cheated on them feel sorry for them.at least they are getting more closer seems like they have fallen in love with the other just not realising.

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Akanksha

@agm1998

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Posted: 8 years ago

#284

Too good akku dii

Ishra fell in love with separate people even after being friends since childhood

The part where she beats him for nor telling her b4 about the breakup was so cute

Finally they started developing feeling for each other

Hope they don't repent the kiss

Connie soon dii

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 8 years ago

#285

Its awesome Akriti

The naration and the smooth flow of story is great.

the way you showed their friendship, sharing pain, moving on, being each other's support system and the bond is marvelous

cherry on the cake was the way they were falling for each other

Waiting for the next

actually impatient to read the next part

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Akriti154

@akriti154

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Posted: 8 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Blakey
awesome they broke up with their respective partners bcz they cheated on them feel sorry for them.at least they are getting more closer seems like they have fallen in love with the other just not realising.

thnxx dear
yes they r fall9ing 4 d other

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Akriti154

@akriti154

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Posted: 8 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: agm1998
Too good akku dii
Ishra fell in love with separate people even after being friends since childhood
The part where she beats him for nor telling her b4 about the breakup was so cute
Finally they started developing feeling for each other
Hope they don't repent the kiss
Connie soon dii

thnx akanksha
glad u lykd it
n they won't repent d kiss 4 sure
will updt soon

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Akriti154

@akriti154

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Posted: 8 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Its awesome Akriti
The naration and the smooth flow of story is great.
the way you showed their friendship, sharing pain, moving on, being each other's support system and the bond is marvelous
cherry on the cake was the way they were falling for each other
Waiting for the next
actually impatient to read the next part

thnxx rimjhim
glad u lykd it
will updt asap