Ishra:writing challenge on OS,TS based on Idea - Page 2

Such a helpful idea for those who have a tough time in finding a suitable plot!

I love the concept 1 , 2 and 9

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi

I love the concept 1 , 2 and 9

Will try to write on these concepts

i will be writing on 2,10
do give more topics

I would love to read all the stories.

Hello friends

Rhimjhim your idea and this thread is quite interesting and I hope it will be successful...Here is my one shot... First I thought to write three shot but decided that this concept will suit one shot...

Enjoy reading

ISHRA One Shot : Na Tere bina lagda ji

It was a usual day at bhallas house filled with sweet chatters of adi and ruhi while family were enjoying the breakfast... Ishita serving food and sweetly scolding adi ruhi for not drinking milk...

As the living lounge filled with the cries Ishita looks at the stairs and sees Raman climbing down holding their symbol of love their miracle eight month old twins ishaan and Rashi...

Seeing there little sibling crying adi ruhi runs to Raman and start making faces to console them.. seeing the attention of their elder sibling both nautanki toddlers stop crying... Ishita smiles seeing the bonding of her kids she walks towards them and took ishaan in her arms and kisses his chubby cheeks who smiles in return showing his toothless mouth...

While little Rashi seeing his brother getting her mother attention squeals to get her share of love.. Ishita looks at her smilingly and kisses her cheek who in return smiles flashing dimples on her chubby cheeks just like her papa...

Raman: Ishita you feed them I will drop adi ruhi to school...

Saying this he gives Rashi to Ishita who have just settles on couch holding ishaan... Rashi happily jumps on Ishita and both kids start playing with each other...

Ishita looks at Raman and says: Raman see adi ruhi haven't done their milk...

Raman looks at adi ruhi who was busy in making faces.. Ishita smiles and says: ishimaa will get angry if you will not finish milk...

Ruhi makes a puppy face and says: ruhi doesn't like milk...

Raman takes the milk glasses from table and forward them towards adi ruhi and says: see ishimaa always busy with work.. don't bother your ishimaa okay.. be a good kids...

Adi ruhi nods and finishes the milk.. Ishita sign both of them to come close... Adi ruhi came close to Ishita who kisses them one by one and says: ishimaa love you so much...

Adi ruhi smiles and kisses her back and says: we love you too ishimaa...

Romi comes forward and took ruhi in his arms and signs adi and says: today chachu will drop you both... This makes both happy and leaves after biding bye...

Raman settles beside ishita and helps her with feeding the food to kids.. family were looking at them smilingly...

Both were busy in their own world when neelu comes and gives the card which is just arrived... Ishita takes the card and makes face and put it on table...

Raman: what???

Ishita: nothing special... College reunion party today evening...

Raman: that's very great.. it will be good for you...

Ishita: come on Raman.. this is .. adi ruhi also need me for their home work and these two nautanki... Ishaan and Rashi are also small.. and what will I do there...

Raman: you are completely gone case madrasan...

Ishita glares at him but Raman Continue to say: you will meet your college mates.. your friends... It will be fun...

Ishita: Raman... I can't go like this..

Raman: madrasan.. I will take care of both my champs...And simmi will complete adi ruhi homework... Right simmi...

Simmi smiles and says: AUR nahe to kiya... Ishita you just relax and go there and enjoy...

Ishita: but...

Raman takes ishaan from Ishita and makes him stand on his lap and says in childish tone: mumma please...

Ishita chuckles seeing this and nods.. Raman smiles and says: okay... Now I should leave for office so that I can come early... Ishita nods... And Raman leaves...

As Raman reaches office Mihir comes and inform Raman that he has to go to blue fountain hotel as sponsor... Raman looks at him and shook his head and says; no.. it is not possible..

Mihir: why

Raman: today Ishita is going for some reunion party and I have to handle my ishaan and Rashi...

Mihir: but I already agreed with them...

Raman: Mihir...

Mihir: okay just go there and come back...

Raman: you are not getting.. if will not come home your bhabhi will not attend party and I want her to have some light hearted time with friend without any tension.. you know na after ishaan and Rashi she is not getting time for herself...

Mihir: I am understanding your point but...

Their conversation was interrupted as Raman phone rings.. his face lit up with wide smile seeing Ishita name flashing.. he took the call and says: hello Ishita...

Ishita: Raman... actually mummy her was saying... you also come with me na in party and she will take care of ishaan and Rashi...

Raman: actually I am..

Ishita: Raman can you come there blue fountain hotel...

Raman paused for a moment and says: which floor..

Ishita: at roof...

Raman hung up the call and asks to Mihir: Mihir tell me is that party is at roof... Mihir nods.. Raman does a happy victory dance in his mind and talks to Ishita says: no Ishita I can't be there.. actually I was telling you that I am busy with some work but will try to reach on time at home... You just got here and enjoy...

Ishita: but...

Raman: Ishita.. no if and no but.. you are going there that's final...

Ishita agrees and cuts the call while Raman smiles widely.. Mihir noticing Raman all happy says: but you said that you can't come...

Raman: Buddhu... I am sponsoring Ishita college reunion party..

Mihir figures out what is running in Raman mind smiles and says: got it... So you are planning to give surprise to bhabhi.. Raman nods...

Mihir: enjoy your evening...

Evening

Ishita gets ready in black saree with silver blouse wearing diamond studs her forehead adoring with sindoor and face was glowing... She pecks the cheeks if her four kids and ask them to be a good and listen to Dadi dadu.. she leaves...

As she leaves Raman returns home for getting ready.. as he was about to leave the twin kid start crying and they were not stopping... Raman took them in his arms and says: oho...champs are angry that first mumma left and now papa right... Both nods and tightly clutches his shirt as they doesn't want to leave...

Raman smiles and says: then today my champs will also go to party... Happy...

Both toddlers squeals happily... While Raman ask the same to adi ruhi to come with him but they answer that tomorrow they have test...

Raman leaves with ishaan and Rashi after making both of them ready...

Blue fountain hotel

Ishita parks her car in parking and gets out of her car.. two pair of eyes were shockingly staring at her... He was shocked to see her standing in front of him after so many years... Nothing has changed she was still same just her beauty has increased more... He was ogling her openly...He remembers how he has broken her heart as she was infertile but after so many years his heart still has some space for her and now seeing her again his love for her increased...

He follows her.. Ishita was unaware of his presence.. both enters the party at the same time making their friends misunderstand them as couple as both were so much in love in college days...

Ajay: hey ishu and subbu...

Listening to his words Ishita looks and sees him... Subbu standing beside her and flashing his smile at her..

She feel disgusting at him she was about to correct Ajay for misunderstanding but suman comes there and exclaims... : Oh my god.. you both are looking so great with each other... I must say after so many years you both are together and in so much love..

Subbu taking the chance tries to put his arms around her shoulder which Ishita shrugs... She was about to say but Laxmi comes and says: you are mistaken subbu is happily married to me and we are happy with our son Karthik...

Ajay: I am sorry I didn't know...

Laxmi: subbu left Ishita as he understands that she is not right for him...Right jaan ...

Saying this Laxmi put her head on his chest while subbu fakes a smiles as he was thinking to have some lone time with Ishita and thinking to have her back as now he has son so now there will be no problem...

Ishita: I was about to tell you the same suman..

Suman: I am sorry I didn't know that you two have break up...

Ishita: suman... There is no need to say sorry I am happy with my life...Excuse me saying this she goes towards her best friends Shilpa...

Party was on its full swing when Raman enters holding the baby stroller in which both ishaan and Rashi were having fun seeing the colorful surrounding...

He was welcomed by one of associate his eyes were searching his dear wife but couldn't spot her..

Associate: kids are having fun I think so...

Raman: yes .. they are looking happy... Well I think you will not have any problem...

Associate: nope... Just enjoy...

Subbu comes to have some drink sees Raman sitting near playing with kids... He smiles looking at kids and goes towards them and caresses the cheeks of kids and says: awww very cute kids...

Raman smiles and says: yes they are... Went on their mumma..

Subbu smiles... Suman comes and introduce Raman to subbu.. both happily greets each other ... While Raman gets up holds the stroller as now both kids were getting cranky from when subbu has invaded their moment with their father...

Raman: excuse me ...

Raman walks past holding the stroller and sees his kids chuckling and playing with each other... Raman bends and pinches their nose and says: oho.. so much champs doesnt like that uncle...

They again makes face... Raman laughs seeing their antics and says: Chalo let's search your mumma... Both smiles widely and pinches their fist in air showing their excitement to meet their mumma...

Ishita was having talk with Shilpa when Laxmi comes with her friends and taunt Ishita says: : so how is your life ishu...

Ishita smiles and was about to say but Laxmi cuts her in middle and says: I know you must be desperate for love and all... I got to know that you married to a divorcee who have two kids... but I didn't know that you still has feeling for subbu...

Ishita was getting angry but doesn't want to spoil the party... says: hold your horses laxmi...

Subbu also joins and says: what's up...

Laxmi side hugs subbu and says: I am feeling very sorry for you ishu... I know how it felt rejected... When subbu left you as you were infertile and no one was ready to marry then some old divorcee marries you for custody of his daughter.. contract marriage...

Ishita was getting more angrier... While some friends were looking at her with sympathy...

Raman spots Ishita standing in middle of group... His smile grew seeing her dressed looking like a fairy... He walks towards them... As this was limit for Ishita she was about to give Laxmi answer in her jhansi ki Rani... His anger mellow down as two sweet voice reaches her ear...

Ishaan and Rashi seeing her mumma exclaims as loudly as they can: mummmaaa...

All turns and sees a young handsome man standing holding the stroller having toddler... Ishita smiles and says: friends... This is my husband Raman Kumar Bhalla and my kids ishaan and Rashi...

Suman exclaims that Raman is the sponsor of the party and he is quite successful businessman Laxmi and subbu were shocked looking at them.. while ishita walks towards them and pecks the forehead of both and smiles at Raman who simply pecks her forehead...

Ishita: what a pleasant surprise Raman...

Raman tucks his favorite strand behind her ear and says: you liked it na..

Ishita nods ...And says: adi ruhi nahe aye...

Raman: no... They have test tomorrow...

Ishita makes a sad face.. while ishaan was trying to pull Ishita saree to get attention.. Ishita smiles and took ishaan in her arms while Rashi too tries to jump out of stroller... Raman took her in arms and kisses her...

Ishita turns and looks at Laxmi and says: I hope you have got all... How much I am happy with my life... My life is filled with love and joy... My past doesn't matter me because I don't even remember that I was in love with some person name subbu... I only love my husband.. my Raman...

Raman who have guessed all wraps his free arms around Ishita waist and says: jaan you don't need to waste time on worthless people who only knows to hurt ..

Raman puts Rashi in stroller again and smiles at Ishita... Ishita leaves with kids.. while Raman turns and glares at subbu and his wife angrily and says: I don't spare anyone who tries to hurt my Ishita... This is warning to you... Keep distance from her... If I next time see you both try to hurt her I will not spare you... Mind it...

Saying this Raman warps his arms around Ishita and holds the stroller and leaves while subbu and Laxmi gets insulted... While others were admiring seeing so much love, passion, care and possessiveness...

Raman was leaving when an idea came in his mind to cheer the mood of his lady love he messages the associate for the arrangement... Lights gets off.. and soft music start in background...

Nahi jeena tere baaju

Nahi jeena, nahi jeena

Dim light fall on Ishita who was surprised with the sudden music... She smiles knowing it is Raman ...

Nahi jeena tere baaju

Nahi jeena, nahi jeena

Raman hugs her from back and sings...

Main tenu samjhawan ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Main tenu samjhawan ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

All start cheering and clapping for the couple...

Raman goes on his knees and kisses her hands. And sings...

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera

Main karoon intezar tera

Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

Raman took ishaan from Ishita and kisses him and softly put him beside Rashi and pulls Ishita making her fall on his chest...And sings...

Main tenu samjhava ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera

Main karoon intezar tera

Tu dil tui yon jaan meri

Main tenu samjhawa ki

Na tere bina lagda jee

Ishita rest her head on his chest and smiles while both slowly sways their body on soft music ... Little ishaan and Rashi claps with their tiny hands as they were enjoying...

Raman twirls her and again hugs her and sings..

Mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne

Tere dil diyaan raahan

Tu jo mere naal tu rehta

Turpe meriyaan saaha

Jeena mera.. haye

Hun hai tera, ki main karaan

Tu kar aitbaar mera

Main karoon intezar tera

Tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

Main tenu samjhawan kee

Na tere bina lagda jee

Raman embrace her lovingly while the kids squeals to get their attention... Raman and ishita both smiles and took their symbol of love in their arms and showers kisses on them...

Raman pulls Ishita closer and hugs his family feeling contended to bring smile on her face... While ishita was feeling lucky to have Raman as her life partner...

Ishita: I love you Raman .

Raman: I love you more...

That's it... I hope you all will liked it reading... As this one is long one I will be pleased if you all spare two minutes and give a long comment... I hope I am not asking too much.. Waiting for your lovely comment and response don't forget to hit like also

Love you

Rida

Congo for first story rimjhim and rida .

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Originally posted by: Divanru

Congo for first story rimjhim and rida .

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