Hai Tu Laazmi - Post 1st Leap (Teaser - 18/12/16)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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"Baanjh" "Manhoos" "Sauteli Maa se bhi Battar" they weren't mere words, they were daggers 😭 which pierced into her heart and ripped it apart. 💔 Raman, the man she loved with all her heart and soul, the one who showered her with unimaginable amounts of love had stolen away her identity today. She was lying lifeless on the dark, lonely roads of Delhi, her body unable to carry its own weight. Ishita had no one to call her own today. Her parents stood mute, her in laws were mere spectators. She felt unwanted and left the hospital in her innate wish to be with her god child, her Ruh who had been brutally snatched away from her.

In this moment, she was too weak. She was selfish. Adi, needed her; she knew but she wasn't able to muster the courage to face him fore she knew that he would question her. Could she gladly tell the innocent soul, "Ruhi ne meri wajah se apni jaan gawah di. Tumhaari behen ki kaatil aur koi nahi balqi tumhaari yeh Ishimaa hai!" He would loathe her and she couldn't afford that because she was too weak! Life had suddenly started to appear bleak. Somehow, she managed to get up on her feet but due to fragility she fell the very next moment.

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That's it for the teaser. If you are still unsure, this is based on when Raman threw Ishita out of his life when Ruhi died. It's my take on how I wanted things to be so I'm hoping you'll give me a chance cos writing is my emotional outlet and I love to share my work. Please do like and comment!

Thanks 😃
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UmeraT thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Edited by Bulleya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm first
Interesting teaser
I am sure u will do justice with this track
It was the worst way the cvs led this one

Pls update ur other stories too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intense and emotional
Are you going to write as she left or came back to face the more wrath ?...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good interesting continue soon Waiting for parts
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting teaser continue soon and update ur other stories also
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice teaser
pls continue ur other stories also
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting teaser dear..waiting to read more..
Continue soon and plz pm me when you update..

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