Ishra OS II Bus mujhko tum mehsoos karna II HBD Suma II PG 12 Dec/13

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello friends...

Suma you asked for a story as your birthday gift... I am busy so just opening thread for you and a short teaser... Hope you will not mind And be happy on your special day...

Wish her a very happy birthday to Suma...

I am in journey so will not be able to make a good thread for you...

But you know I love you...

Friends enjoy the teaser of new one shot...

Love you

Rida...

Teaser is below

Edited by ishrasoul - 8 years ago

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Enjoy teaser...

Bus mujhko tum mehsoos karna

Teaser

Ground slip from Ishita feet as she can hear Raman scream in pain and goons hitting him continuously... Her hands get cold thinking that her Raman is in pain...

She quickly dails simmi number and asks her to help Raman as goons are beating Raman in society compound...

It was a long distance to go to hospital... Their happy moments were flashing across her eyes.. she was just praying that her Raman will be safe..

Hospital

Doctor comes out of the ward and declare that Raman has slip into comma... As his head is injured badly...

Ishita just slump on floor and cries unable to bear this...

That's it... I hope it is teasing you all.. Hana... Wait for Wednesday after that I will update my all stories.. waiting for your lovely comment don't forget to hit like also

Love you

Os updated : bus Mujhko Tum Mehsoos karna

Edited by ishrasoul - 8 years ago

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Happy bday suma
Interesting prologue
Update soon

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Rarukaru

@Rarukaru

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow di one more pleasant surprise

I m happy because aap har us track par likh rahe ho aur justice kar rahe ho jiske saath cvs justice nahi kar paye

Jin tracks mein cvs ne ml ke emotions ka majak banakar rakh diya

Thanks a lot di and please update soon

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infinity-flame

@infinity-flame

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

HBD suma..

Teaser?? Memory loss???😲

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Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

HBD suma...
Interesting plot di...
Update sooon..

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divya17.8

@divya17.8

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting teaser..

Waiting for update..

Happy bday Suma. Enjoy your day..

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Suma

@Suma1012

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: gargpoo
Happy bday suma
Interesting prologue
Update soon

Thank you so much poonam for ur wish.

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Suma

@Suma1012

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Thank u so much dii. I'm so glad to read a story for me. U make my day dii. I can't express my feelings in words i'm so happy... Love u dii. Nice prologue dii. Update soon dii. Will be waiting..

Edited by Suma1012 - 8 years ago