Ishra OS II Bus mujhko tum mehsoos karna II HBD Suma II PG 12 Dec/13

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

hi friends...
Finally back to home and if... As I promised I am posting the one shot... Again belated Happy birthday Suma.. hope you will like your gift..
Enjoy reading
Ishra One Shot: Bus Mujhko Tum Mehsoos karna
Ishita sitting next to Raman who was lying lifelessly and wires attached to his unresponsive body... He was just breathing... Ishita was staring at him... And remember him.. his cute face when he gets angry on her... His love... His desperation... His care... His selflessness for his kids and family... His smile... When he makes cute baby faces.
She carefully caresses his hairs and tries to control her emotions but sobs as she was unable to see her ravan kumar in this state...
Mihir comes and says: bhabhi... Kids are waiting for you at home... They are crying... Ghar Chalo... It's been two weeks...
Ishita looks on and says: Raman Kay baghair...
Mihir: please bhabhi... I will stay here... You go.. ap bohat thak gaye ho... Bhai warna bohat daantain gay muje... please ..
Ishita nods and looks at Raman and says: Raman... Mein Abhi Kuch dair mein aati Hoon... I don't want to go but kiya karoon apkay bachy... Take care Haan..
She kisses his forehead and gets up and turna to go but stops and looks at Raman... Mihika comes and holds her shoulder and takes her... Ishita was looking at him...
Ishita enters house and sees her kids crying and asking for their papa... Seeing her both runs and hugs her tightly and asks about Raman health... Ishita just takes them in her arms and hugs them tightly to console them as she has no words..
Ruhi:papa theek hojain gay na... She asks innocently...
Ishita nods and controls her tears who were ready to fall... Adi cups ishita face and says: ishimaa don't worry papa bilkul theek hojain gay.
Ruhi: Haan ishimaa god listen to kids na.. mein ne aur bhaiya nay bohat pray ki hain.
Ishita smiles weakly and says: papa will get fine...
Family was sad and worries for trio as Raman is their world if something bad happens how will they cop up ... Mrs bhalla says: puttar go and have rest...
Trio leaves to their room.. Ishita settles both kids in bed and lays beside them and pats them Lovingly... Being near them she feels Raman is near her... Ishita looks at from and her eyes get filled remembering raman... She feels Raman every where...
Main rahoon ya na rahoonTum mujh mein kahin baaki rehna
Ishita looks at her kids who now sleeping hiding themselves. Their mother embrace... Ishita feels someone has tuck her hair behind her ear.. she sees Raman sitting and smiling at her...her eyes got filled with tears.
Mujhe neend aaye jo aakhiriTum khwabon mein aate rehna
Ishita tries to touch him but he vanishes... Ishita hides her face in palm and cries...
She gets startled with voice..she imagine raman saying: kiya madrasan roo roo Kar bura haal kardiya hai... Chal araam Kar...
Ishita: Raman...
Raman: shushhh... Mein Hoon na Tere pass ... In your heart. Sleep...
Ishita closes her eyes and drifted into sleep...
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Main rahoon ya na rahoonTum mujhme kahin baaki rehna
One month passes, Raman been in coma while ishita taking care of him and kids... All were lost soul... Waiting for Raman to get up... It's been difficult for everyone to live without Raman...
Family never realized the importance of Raman in their life but when he is not with them they gets to know about the real importance of him...life is nothing without him..
Kisi roz baarish jo aayeSamajh lena boondon mein main hoonSubah dhoop tumko sataayeSamajh lena kirno mein main hoon
Ishita driving to hospital to see Raman and rain start pouring... As her car passes the road where they had their Kuch Kuch hota moment and both danced... She stops the car and start imagine themselves...
She take about her hand and water droplets fall on her face... She sees Raman standing in middle of road and asking her to come... Smile crept on her face.. but as reality hit her tear start flowing and she cries unable to bear the pain ...
Kuch kahun ya na kahunTum mujhko sada sunte rehna
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
She gets lost in the past as she remembers their togetherness.
Flashback
Raman driving car while ishita was continuously asking: raman.. kahan ja rahy hain hum... Raman...
Raman: have patience meri jaan.. and pecks her cheek...
Ishita smiles and hides her face in his embrace...
Raman: ish...
Ishita looks on and sees Raman.. Raman says: you know I love you...
Ishita caresses his face and says: I love you too...
Raman stops the car Ishita looks here and there and signs Raman what.. Rama. Points toward a tea stall and says: can I have a tea date with my lovely wife...
Ishita chuckles and says: why not..
Raman : it's my pleasure...
Both gets out of car and sits near the beach and sips tea... As the cool breeze flows.. Ishita feels cold.. Rama. Pulls her closer and wraps his arms around her.. both looks each other and have a passionate eyelock...
Flashback ends...
Ishita brought back into present as after rain it start cold... She wraps her arms around her and remember Raman strong arms around her.. his feeling bear her. . his embrace...
Hawaaon mein lipta hua mainGuzar jaaunga tumko chhu keAgar mann ho to rok lenaThehar jaaunga in labon pe
Ishita enters his ward and gets panic as Raman was not present.. she asks nurse but she shrugged off as she doesn't know... Ishita start crying... She was searching madly Raman in Hospital... Her heart skip a beat as she fears of the worst...
Ishita takes out her phone and fails Romi number as she was not getting anything ... But stops as she can sense him near her... She whispers... Raman...
Slowly she turns and gets shocked...
Main dikhu ya na dikhuTum mujhko mehsoos karna
He was sitting on wheel chair looking at her flashing his dimple... He opens his arms and calls out her: ishita...
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Ishita was just looking at him... Is it dream or real... Is he is alright... Is he is in real or another her imagination...she slowly walks towards him and looking into his eyes...
Hmm..
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Raman holds her hand and make him believe that he is in real... Unable to say something she just hides herself in him and cries loudly as she could.. while Raman was just caresses her hairs.. patting her back and kissing her forehead...
After getting calm she looks at him again.. Raman wipes her tears and kisses her forehead and says: mein Hoon na Ishita and tools her in his arms when she simply cocoons more into his warmth...
That's it my dear friends... Hopefully that you all will like it.. waiting for your lovely comment and response don't forget to hit like also...
Love you all
Rida

Edited by ishrasoul - 8 years ago

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Rarukaru

@Rarukaru

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Really nice and emotional os di

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Sairanoor

@Sairanoor

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Awesome os

Lovely n emotional one

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Suma

@Suma1012

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Thank u so much dii

Asusual awesome and heartwrenching OS. I loved it.

Raman is in coma.

Ishrudi all r waiting for him from out of coma.

Ishita imagines raman in everywhere. Poor soul how much she is waiting for her hubby.

At last ishita's waiting was over he is back to her to soothens her pain.

Such a lovely OS very emotional.

Once again thank u dii.

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

really nice beautiful and emotional os

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1023427

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

very nice so emotional and lovly.

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boran

@boran

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

nice update
raman is in coma
everyone missing him and getting to know about his value
ishita is most vulnerable in all this
she missed him like hell
flashback was nice
finally he is alright
poor ishu cries seeing him alright in real not her imagination
but this is seems incomplete
if you can just give an epilogue

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Awsm OS
How I fish something like this happens in show raman in danger n family crying for him n understand his value bt it will nvvr happen
Loved it
. how ishita crying n shattered taking care of kids .. Finally he ws ok