ISHRA SS || TWO LOVERS SEPARATED BY THE FATE ||PART 3 AT PG 21 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sharda_123

Nice update

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

you always write stories on my fav tracks, thanks a ton, loved the prologue and chappy-1. thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Awsm start.
Ishita saw raman shagun n manoj n heard abt surrogacy.
She confronted raman.
She feeling cheating n shattered
Raman came.. Ishita told family everything
Waiting for next

Originally posted by: fSharm

Interesting...
Update nxt part soon..

Originally posted by: Niveditha.giri

Fabulous start zoha...
Update soon..waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: Priyag28

Nice.
Ishita is shatered with
raman betrayal.
What step she take which seprate them.
Update soon

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Wow...awesome start

Loved it

Loved how Simmi supported Ishita

Waiting to see what's up next

Continue soon

Originally posted by: divz9769

Nice update

Ishitas reaction was too good

Pls update soon

Originally posted by: Jinal_999

superb yaar..
kya topic chheda hai..

awesome start dear
n i loved prolouge nd part 1
it was superb

ishita heard their talk..sahi kaha..raman aur subbu mein koi fark nahi hai.
he break her trust by doing this..
raman ke aisa karne se ishita par se banjh ka lable thodi na hatt ne wala hai.

u knw show mein bhi is topic ko lekar propper justice nhi dikhaya..ulta isme bhi fault ishita ka hi nikla tha ke vo ye accept kyu nahi kar rahi..
isme bhi sahi raman hi tha..

so plz iss TS ko ekdm perfect banana..not like yhm.
i so want see isme kya hota hai..m super excited for this..
gud luck for this..
cont soon dear

Originally posted by: sririt

Such a wonderful Prologue

Part 1 is overwhelming

Beautiful portrayal of emotions

Genuine reactions

Apt descriptions