Ishra ss-rabba ishq naa hove#2,pt 12 on pg 106 updt on Nov 25

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raksha

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Originally posted by: sireesha76
Congrats for the new thread dear 🥳🥳

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Originally posted by: lonelyyy

CONGRATS Diii

my FAV STORY
muahhh i luv dis one

collages r just prefect

u r just awesome writer

dii jldi update dena plz plz plz plz plz plz

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Originally posted by: Jinan.
Wow!
A new thread! 🥳
Congrats dii...One of my fav stories! 😳

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Originally posted by: Roohachu
Congrats for the new thread Di
I know I'd promised u a long comment on some of the previous updates
So I'm posting a summary of this story
I'm really sorry for being too late
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So the story it was always been a mystery for me
Still its full of suspense
And the title; it literally meant for both IshRa
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Ishita had always been a mystery to me from the starting
Her sadness; her character which always hide a mystery behind it
The way she asked Mihika to let her go
Everything related to her; until I came to now about her past
Well that was really heart wrenching
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Raman and his Jaan
I thought his jaan is someone related to Ishita
At first I thought that may be its realated to Raman's accident
I thought that Raman's Jaan is some girl who had been hurt by him
Never in my dreams I thought that its Rooh
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And here goes the story
Ishita who had come to a college with her cousin Mihika is get kidnapped by the bad boy of their college. The RKB...
Raman though looking rough and tough outside is really a sweet person from inside
and the sweet side of him is then resevred for only one person; his Jaan and now for two...
And Ishita's past was really so heartbreaking
Even though she didn't deserved anything of it yet destiny can't be changed by any...
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Her Appa made her go her to Goa with her fiancee Subbu
N somehow she escaped from that demon's clutches only to reach the hands of a devil; well a sweet one...
That incident had changed her life forever making her go through so much of insults
N finally she had landed her destination
To the arms of that man who had snatched her everything from her and who was going to give her each and every happiness in her life...
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N now I wanna know that what will be her reaction when she gets to know about RKB being Raman Kumar Bhalla?
Update soon
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PS: I don't know what I've typed here
N really sorry for being this much late for fulfilling my promise to U
Hope U forgive me

Thanks achu for ur long and lovely comment

It was really so sweet

Kind of its summary

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raksha

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Originally posted by: nadiay
waiting for da nxt part eagerly,,,,an uncommon story filled wid hate-luv mixture...update sooonnn...

Will updt soon

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Originally posted by: sweet.Aman
congo pooja🥳

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But my name is raksha

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raksha

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Originally posted by: lonelyyy
update soon dii
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

Will updt soon

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PART 7

Doctor- we have saved him but he slipped into coma.

Mr and Mrs bhalla crushed on the floor all shocked and shattered.their only son was fighting with his life and now he is saved but lifeless.

Toshiji started crying bitterly- bhalla ji,mera puttar.usse bacha lo bhalla ji,usse bacha lo.I can't live without him.

Mr bhalla- hausla rakho toshiji ,rab sab thik karega.

Toshiji- kya hausla rakhun bhalla ji,mera puttar.she said crying bitterly and hugged Mr bhalla tight.

Mr bhalla make her sit and went to doctor.

Mr bhalla- what r his chances to recover.tell me the truth doctor.

Doc- to be true Mr bhalla ,chances r very less.he got hurt badly,his many bones r broken.he got hurt badly in his brain and backbone,and I afraid that even if he gain conscious he can't live a normal life.may be he can never walk.

Mr bhalla was too shocked hearing all this.their only child is in so much of pain but he couldn't do anything.he was walking out of doctor's cabin when he said- I wanna let u something more.saying so he told Mr bhalla something which shattered him more.he crush down on the floor and start weeping uncontrollably.toshiji ran to him and asked- what happened bhalla ji.

Mr bhalla told her about Raman's condition and she too start crying.they both cried and later composed themselves as they have to be strong for Raman.

Slowly time start flying and eight months passed like this.Raman was still in coma ,every possible treatment was given to him but his body wasn't showing any development in him.Mr bhalla start enquiring about more developed hospital where his treatment can be possible.

One day Dr called Mr bhalla and said that he came to know about a hospital in belgaum, Karnataka where these kinds of patients r treated.actually that was a naturopathy hospital.he even talked them about Raman and send his medical file only to get answer that he can be treated there .

Dr- I think u guys should take him there.shayad woh thik ho jaaye.

Mr bhalla thanked him a million times and start arrangements to take Raman to belgaum.

After a week ,Mr and Mrs bhalla took Raman to belgaum.they got him admitted but restrict Mr and Mrs bhalla's meeting him saying this is their policy.they can't allowed family members to meet the pateint.at first Mrs bhalla wasmy ready hearing this but when they meet a bunch of doctors and they assured them that Raman will be taken care off then Mr and Mrs bhalla came back leaving raman there.

The hospital was spread over a large area giving the pateint much needed fresh air with greenery which help them to recover fast.

A compounder was kept to be with him 24*7.he take care of Raman,give him sponge bath and take him out of the hospital so that Raman can be in fresh air.this task was given to every compounder with the pateint.

The person with Raman,his name was hari.he always took him up near the cliff where his wife ,who work in the orphanage near to the hospital wait for them.they leave Raman at a place under the huge tree and went together to a old cottage to spend some lone time together.it was their daily routine.

Everyday hari took Raman to the cliff and make his wheel chair stood under the huge banyan tree and goes to make out with his wife.as Raman was just a still pateint,he was getting his freedom and enjoying his time with his wife.

One month passed like this,Raman was getting better but still his body is yet to start functioning.

One day hari was waiting for his wife but she was getting late.at last he saw her coming but not alone but with a small baby in her hand.hari got angry seeing it.

Hari- who's this.and why u bring her here.

W- what to do.today when I was coming ,the matron saw me and scolded me for coming here at the time of work.and given me responsibility to take care of this baby,yeh aaj hi aayi hai hamare orphanage mein.so I just came here to inform u that I can't come any longer as I have to take care of this little baby.

Hari thought for a while and said- I have an idea.saying so he took the baby and keep her in Raman's lap wounding his arms around the baby.

Hari- now he will take care of her.and we can spend our time together.

W- but chota bachcha hai.

Hari- that's the good thing.neither he can tell anything to anyone nor the baby.now come to me,I can't wait more.saying so he pulled her to their place while the little baby was sleeping peacefully in Raman's arms.the baby was just one or two days old .Raman was just looking at her.and he remembered the convo between his parents talking about his disability. A lone tear escape his eyes and his hold around the baby strengthen a little to protect the baby.yes he can see,hear,think and feel the things.and he has heard his parents talking about his condition and that acted as a reverse treatment on him.he wasnt getting fine as he don't want to be fine coz for him nothing has left in his life.but now having that little baby in his arms,he was feeling happy and contented.

After doing their business,hari took Raman back to hospital while his wife took the baby to the orphanage.

Raman start waiting for the next day for taking the baby in his arms.he closed his eyes only to see the little baby in front of his eyes.a serene smile crept on his face remembering her innocent face.

Hari took him next day and his wife bring the baby.they kept the baby again in his lap and they went for their business while raman eyez was fixed on her.she was pink and soft like a cotton ball.she was looking at him opening her big doe shaped eyes and he was also looking at her lovingly.he slowly tried to move his hand and touched her face softly ,she stir at his touch and hold his finger.Raman smiled at little and caressed her face again.Raman tried hard to pick her in his arms but couldn't strengthen himself,she was laying in his lap but he couldn't pick her in his arms.he got angry on his helplessness and start trying harder.he was trying hard to move his hand and feet and in the process his wheel chair for disbalanced and both fell on the ground and start rolling towards the cliff .baby start crying bitterly fearing of the unknown while raman was holding her firmly trying to protect her.

Soon they were on top of the cliff and fell off the cliff .Raman was quick enough to hold the tree branch,the baby was about to fall off as he opened his arms.she was crying bitterly when he hold her leg.as started crying more loudly as she was feeling pain.

Hari came running hearing the loud screaming and saw Raman hanging on the tree branch and the holding the baby with another hand.

Raman- save us.

Hari went running and took his wife saree which she was wrapping.he throw the saree to Raman and told him to hold it but Raman don't know how to hold it as his both the hands were busy,one was holding the branch while the other was holding the baby.he can't leave any of it .he thought for a while and took his hand in which he was holding the baby to the other hand and tried holding the baby and branch with same hand but couldnt ,so seeing no option,he held the baby hand tightly in beyween his teeth making her cry harder,tears started flowing from his eyes seeing her but he couldnt do anything .in a nano second he held the saree with his free hand and next second he took baby is his hand leaving the other hand,hari start pulling him upward but it was getting difficult for him to pull them so he called his wife,she came just in blouse ,petticoat and helped him in pulling Raman and the baby up.

Soon Raman was up,he look at his wife's state and looked away ,hari give her the saree back and told her to go and wrap it. While Raman took the baby in hug consoling the crying baby.

Raman- shh jaan,see we r safe.nothing will happen.shh baby.he said consoling the baby.raman was caressing her little hand which turned red due to his teeths.she was crying bitterly making his eyes teary anc moist.don't know from where he got the strength but he ran taking the little life in his arms to the hospital.

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for it.

Ps- 195+ likes with long comments for an early updt.

Edited by cutieruhi - 8 years ago

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lonelyyyy

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Posted: 8 years ago

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diii bhot hi scary n emo update tha
raman was badly injured n have no chances to recover
mr bhalla n mrs bhalla totally shattered
i can understand bcoz i had seen similar scene
but thangod mr bhalla ya doc get hosp in which he can be ok soon
aiyyo dii ye hari n uski wife kitni besharam hain control hi ni hota inse 🤢
but i also want to thank dem bcoz of dem only raman get their ru n raman starts recovering
ooo so raman can hear see sense but cant speak
he felt bad
raru bond is so amazing i admire
ooo noo ye kya ho gya raru gir gye
but thankgod raman ne pakad liya
but whole saving scene was so scary
dii wo scene bhot scary tha jisme raman ru ko daton se pkda bechari ru kitna dard ho ra hoga
choti ru bhot darr gyi
raman is all ok now
but qus remain same how ru is ok ??? ishu ne toh still baby birth kiya tha i think appa ka koi chakkkar h

diii plz update sooonnn jldi wala
waiting waiting

Edited by lonelyyyy - 8 years ago